2024届高考英语一轮复习写作辅导课件：第6讲《运用高级词汇与句式，打造作文亮点》（全国通用）
3．I can not only keep in touch with my friends and family through my cell，but also almost all information can be gathered on the Internet.(倒装) →______________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 4．I didn't take his advice，so I failed in the exam.(虚拟语气) _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 5．Because I was ill that day，I didn't take part in the sports meeting.(虚拟语气) _________________________________________________ 6．They carried out a survey among 260 students.(被动语态) _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 7．They didn't realize the importance of environment protecting until all the fish in the river died out.(倒装句，强调句) _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________
答案：1.Only in this way can we successfully build an economized society. 2．Hardly had he reached the station when the train left. 3．Not only can I keep in touch with my friends and family through my cell，but also
almost all information can be gathered on the Internet. 4．If I had taken his advice，I wouldn't have failed in the exam.
5．I was ill that day，otherwise I would have taken part in the sports meeting. 6．A survey was carried out among 260 students. 7．①Not until all the fish in the river died out did they realize the importance of environment protecting.
②It was not until all the fish in the river died out that they realized the importance of environment protecting. Ⅲ.佳句习作 请按以下内容要点写一篇短文，尽可能多地使用高级句式。 1．众所周知，世界人口在一天天增长，因此需要大量的新鲜用水。 2．随着工业的快速发展，产生了很多有毒的气体和废水，结果导致了水污染，尽管水是新的，但却不能再运用。 3．这时候人们才意识到水源的重要性，确实到了人们行动起来保护水源的时候了。不要再污染用水，否则，我们就不能再在这个地球上生存，那会是怎样的一种可怕的景象啊！ 4．只有充足的水源，世界才能蓬勃发展。 参考范文 As is known to all，the world population is growing day by day.So enough fresh water is needed to feed such a large population.What's more，with industry developing rapidly，poisonous gases and waters are produced，consequently resulting in the pollution of water.Though fresh，a good amount of water can no longer be used.Only then did we realize the importance of fresh water.So it's high time that we human beings took action to protect water resource.Stop polluting water，otherwise we wouldn't be living in the world.What a terrible scene we would be faced with! Only with fresh water can the world be prosperous. 走向高考 · 英语 路漫漫其修远兮 吾将上下而求索 人教版(课标卷地区) · 高考总复习
写作素能培养
第三部分 第六讲 运用高级词汇与句式， 打造作文亮点 第三部分
写作时，“高级词汇与高级句式”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一两处，也会为你的作文增添色彩，赢得阅卷老师的青睐。 一、使用高级词汇 1．标新立异 写作时要恰当得体地使用一些蕴含感情色彩，别人有可能想不到的词汇，恰当地求新求异。 As far as I'm concerned，parents' much protection will do more harm than good to children's future development. →As far as I'm concerned，parents' limitless protection will do more harm than good to children's future development. I received your email last week，but I am busy preparing for my final exam，which is important for me，so I didn't reply to you without delay. →I received your email last week，but I am busy preparing for my final exam，which is vital for me，so I didn't reply to you without delay. 2．短语优先 多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。 To achieve one's dream，one must try to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach. →To achieve one's dream，one must make great efforts to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach. What's more，we can pour out the troubles we face，and release our pressure from different aspects. →What's more，we can pour out the troubles we are faced with，and release our pressure from different aspects.
3．避免重复 尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。 I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches. →I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches. 用较高级词汇代替加黑的词或短语。 1．We all have the same chance.____________ 2．We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend. ____________ 3．I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us.____ ______ 4．He didn't listen to what I said in the class. ______________
5．We'll try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.______________ 6．The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.______________ 答案：1.possess 2.endless 3.put up with 4.turned a deaf ear to 5.promote 6.challenging
二、使用高级句式，让句子靓起来 1．恰当使用被动语态 ①We will have selected about thirty volunteers to the Mars throughout the world by 2024. →About thirty volunteers will have been selected to the Mars throughout the world by 2024.
②I'm delighted to know that the Shanghai Museum will organize a famous art exhibition and you are collecting opinions of the public as to select the location for the exhibition，which encouraged me to write to
express my ideas. →I'm delighted to know that a famous art exhibition will be organized by the Shanghai Museum and opinions of the public are being collected as to select the location for the exhibition，which encouraged me to write to express my ideas.
2．使用强调句 ①As a saying goes，the little thing matters most. →As a saying goes，it is the little thing that matters most. ②Our parents have devoted their unconditional love to us，which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward. →It's our parents who have devoted their unconditional love to us，which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward.
3．使用倒装句 ①The children can grow up mentally and physically healthy only in this way. →Only in this way can the children grow up mentally and physically healthy. ②I didn't realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways until then. →Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways.
4．使用省略句 ①If it is so，I hope you will have a wonderful time. →If so，I hope you will have a wonderful time. ②Although they were faced with many problems，they didn't lose heart. →Although faced with many problems，they didn't lose heart.
5．使用感叹句 ①It is a very splendid moment. →How splendid a moment it is! ②I am very worried about his condition. →How worried I am about his condition. 6．使用with复合结构 ①His mother is paving the ways for him while his father is holding his jacket behind him，and we can see sweat on his face. →His mother is paving the ways for him while his father is holding his jacket behind him，with sweat on his face. ②As the society develops rapidly，it's necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer. →With the society developing rapidly，it's necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer.
7．使用虚拟语气 ①It is high time for both children and parents to take action to make small changes. →It is high time that both children and parents took action to make small changes. ②I missed being hit by the car with your help. →Without your help，I would have been hit by the car. 用较高级句式转换下列句子 1．Above all，we must do something to stop pollution.(被动语态) _________________________________________________ 2．I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school.(强调句) _________________________________________________ 3．We don't know its value until we lose health.(倒装句) _________________________________________________ 4．If it isn't well organized，the meeting will be a failure.(省略句) _________________________________________________ 5．We had a very good time with the peasants that day.(感叹句) _________________________________________________ 6．Because there was too much noise，I couldn't go on studying.(with复合结构) _________________________________________________
答案：1.Above all，something must be done to stop pollution. 2．It was when I entered senior high school that I realized the importance of English. 3．Not until we lose health do we know its value. 4．If not well organized，the meeting will be a failure. 5．What a good time we had with the peasants that day! 6．With the noise going on，I couldn't go on studying. 三、如何写好there be句型 1．There be句型的基本意义：某地有某物 There is an increase of about 10 percent，compared with last year. 与去年相比较，大约增加了百分之十。 名师点拨 由于受汉语影响，有些同学在使用这个句型时常常把be误用成have的某种形式。 下午将有一场演讲。 ①There is going to have a lecture this afternoon.(×) ②There is going to be a lecture this afternoon.(√) 2．Where there be...there be...“哪里有……哪里就有” As the detailed analyses above have shown us，where there is life，there is hope. 正如上面详尽的论述所示，活着就有希望。 3．There be＋名词＋分词短语 There are three factors contributing to this attitude as follows. 有三个因素促成了下面的观点。
名师点拨 在这一句型中，有些同学常常把分词误用成动词原形。 有些学生支持这个主意。 ①There are some students support the idea.(×) ②There are some students supporting the idea.(√) ③Some students support the idea.(√) 4．There be＋no doubt/no denying/no need/no sense/no use...that...“毫无疑问/不可否认/没有必要/没有意义/没有用……” There is no sense in waiting here without knowing when he will come back. 在这里傻等却不知道他什么时候回来，一点意义都没有。 5．There be的非谓语形式 there being...(动词－ing形式)；there to be...(不定式形式) There being no bus，we had to walk home. 由于没有公交车，我们不得不步行回家。 翻译句子 1．不可否认，我们的环境质量已经每况愈下。 _________________________________________________ 2．我们盼望着有个晚会来庆祝即将到来的新年。 _________________________________________________ 答案：1.There is no denying that the quality of our environment has gone from bad to worse. 2．We expect there to be a party to celebrate the coming New Year. 四、如何使用其他的一些高级表达形式让文章更精彩 1．用such总结全文 Such is our lively city，which you are welcome to visit whenever at your convenience. 这就是我们这座充满活力的城市，只要您方便，随时欢迎来参观。 2．使用cannot...too much表示强调 We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. 我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。 3．使用比喻等修辞方法 As is known to us all，vocabulary is an important part of language，just like bricks in a building. 大家都知道，词汇是语言学习的重要组成部分，就像一座大楼的基石。 4．使用not...but...句型 Some people don't like their jobs not because they're lazy but because their jobs are small. 一些人不喜欢他们的工作不是因为他们懒，而是因为他们的工作太渺小了。
5．使用否定句 The law is the law.Nobody has any excuse to break it. 法律就是法律。任何人没有任何借口违反法律。 6．使用双重否定 Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle，it is not without its problem. 尽管自行车有许多明显的优点，它仍然存在一些问题。 Ⅰ.翻译句子 1．任何语言都无法表达我对你们及时帮助的真心感谢。 _________________________________________________ 2．学好英语并不是一件苦差事而是一件快乐的事情。 _________________________________________________ 3．我们再怎么强调保护环境的重要性也不为过。 _________________________________________________
答案：1.No word can express my wholehearted thanks for your timely help. 2．It is not a hardship but a pleasure to learn English well. 3．We can't emphasize the importance of protecting the environment too much. Ⅱ.句型转换 1．We can successfully build an economized society only in this way.(倒装) →______________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 2．He had hardly reached the station when the train left.(倒装) →______________________________________________ _________________________________________________
3．I can not only keep in touch with my friends and family through my cell，but also almost all information can be gathered on the Internet.(倒装) →______________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 4．I didn't take his advice，so I failed in the exam.(虚拟语气) _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 5．Because I was ill that day，I didn't take part in the sports meeting.(虚拟语气) _________________________________________________ 6．They carried out a survey among 260 students.(被动语态) _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 7．They didn't realize the importance of environment protecting until all the fish in the river died out.(倒装句，强调句) _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________
答案：1.Only in this way can we successfully build an economized society. 2．Hardly had he reached the station when the train left. 3．Not only can I keep in touch with my friends and family through my cell，but also
almost all information can be gathered on the Internet. 4．If I had taken his advice，I wouldn't have failed in the exam.
5．I was ill that day，otherwise I would have taken part in the sports meeting. 6．A survey was carried out among 260 students. 7．①Not until all the fish in the river died out did they realize the importance of environment protecting.
②It was not until all the fish in the river died out that they realized the importance of environment protecting. Ⅲ.佳句习作 请按以下内容要点写一篇短文，尽可能多地使用高级句式。 1．众所周知，世界人口在一天天增长，因此需要大量的新鲜用水。 2．随着工业的快速发展，产生了很多有毒的气体和废水，结果导致了水污染，尽管水是新的，但却不能再运用。 3．这时候人们才意识到水源的重要性，确实到了人们行动起来保护水源的时候了。不要再污染用水，否则，我们就不能再在这个地球上生存，那会是怎样的一种可怕的景象啊！ 4．只有充足的水源，世界才能蓬勃发展。 参考范文 As is known to all，the world population is growing day by day.So enough fresh water is needed to feed such a large population.What's more，with industry developing rapidly，poisonous gases and waters are produced，consequently resulting in the pollution of water.Though fresh，a good amount of water can no longer be used.Only then did we realize the importance of fresh water.So it's high time that we human beings took action to protect water resource.Stop polluting water，otherwise we wouldn't be living in the world.What a terrible scene we would be faced with! Only with fresh water can the world be prosperous. 走向高考 · 英语 路漫漫其修远兮 吾将上下而求索 人教版(课标卷地区) · 高考总复习
写作素能培养
第三部分 第六讲 运用高级词汇与句式， 打造作文亮点 第三部分
写作时，“高级词汇与高级句式”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一两处，也会为你的作文增添色彩，赢得阅卷老师的青睐。 一、使用高级词汇 1．标新立异 写作时要恰当得体地使用一些蕴含感情色彩，别人有可能想不到的词汇，恰当地求新求异。 As far as I'm concerned，parents' much protection will do more harm than good to children's future development. →As far as I'm concerned，parents' limitless protection will do more harm than good to children's future development. I received your email last week，but I am busy preparing for my final exam，which is important for me，so I didn't reply to you without delay. →I received your email last week，but I am busy preparing for my final exam，which is vital for me，so I didn't reply to you without delay. 2．短语优先 多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。 To achieve one's dream，one must try to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach. →To achieve one's dream，one must make great efforts to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach. What's more，we can pour out the troubles we face，and release our pressure from different aspects. →What's more，we can pour out the troubles we are faced with，and release our pressure from different aspects.
3．避免重复 尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。 I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches. →I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches. 用较高级词汇代替加黑的词或短语。 1．We all have the same chance.____________ 2．We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend. ____________ 3．I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us.____ ______ 4．He didn't listen to what I said in the class. ______________
5．We'll try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.______________ 6．The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.______________ 答案：1.possess 2.endless 3.put up with 4.turned a deaf ear to 5.promote 6.challenging
二、使用高级句式，让句子靓起来 1．恰当使用被动语态 ①We will have selected about thirty volunteers to the Mars throughout the world by 2024. →About thirty volunteers will have been selected to the Mars throughout the world by 2024.
②I'm delighted to know that the Shanghai Museum will organize a famous art exhibition and you are collecting opinions of the public as to select the location for the exhibition，which encouraged me to write to
express my ideas. →I'm delighted to know that a famous art exhibition will be organized by the Shanghai Museum and opinions of the public are being collected as to select the location for the exhibition，which encouraged me to write to express my ideas.
2．使用强调句 ①As a saying goes，the little thing matters most. →As a saying goes，it is the little thing that matters most. ②Our parents have devoted their unconditional love to us，which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward. →It's our parents who have devoted their unconditional love to us，which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward.
3．使用倒装句 ①The children can grow up mentally and physically healthy only in this way. →Only in this way can the children grow up mentally and physically healthy. ②I didn't realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways until then. →Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways.
4．使用省略句 ①If it is so，I hope you will have a wonderful time. →If so，I hope you will have a wonderful time. ②Although they were faced with many problems，they didn't lose heart. →Although faced with many problems，they didn't lose heart.
5．使用感叹句 ①It is a very splendid moment. →How splendid a moment it is! ②I am very worried about his condition. →How worried I am about his condition. 6．使用with复合结构 ①His mother is paving the ways for him while his father is holding his jacket behind him，and we can see sweat on his face. →His mother is paving the ways for him while his father is holding his jacket behind him，with sweat on his face. ②As the society develops rapidly，it's necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer. →With the society developing rapidly，it's necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer.
7．使用虚拟语气 ①It is high time for both children and parents to take action to make small changes. →It is high time that both children and parents took action to make small changes. ②I missed being hit by the car with your help. →Without your help，I would have been hit by the car. 用较高级句式转换下列句子 1．Above all，we must do something to stop pollution.(被动语态) _________________________________________________ 2．I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school.(强调句) _________________________________________________ 3．We don't know its value until we lose health.(倒装句) _________________________________________________ 4．If it isn't well organized，the meeting will be a failure.(省略句) _________________________________________________ 5．We had a very good time with the peasants that day.(感叹句) _________________________________________________ 6．Because there was too much noise，I couldn't go on studying.(with复合结构) _________________________________________________
答案：1.Above all，something must be done to stop pollution. 2．It was when I entered senior high school that I realized the importance of English. 3．Not until we lose health do we know its value. 4．If not well organized，the meeting will be a failure. 5．What a good time we had with the peasants that day! 6．With the noise going on，I couldn't go on studying. 三、如何写好there be句型 1．There be句型的基本意义：某地有某物 There is an increase of about 10 percent，compared with last year. 与去年相比较，大约增加了百分之十。 名师点拨 由于受汉语影响，有些同学在使用这个句型时常常把be误用成have的某种形式。 下午将有一场演讲。 ①There is going to have a lecture this afternoon.(×) ②There is going to be a lecture this afternoon.(√) 2．Where there be...there be...“哪里有……哪里就有” As the detailed analyses above have shown us，where there is life，there is hope. 正如上面详尽的论述所示，活着就有希望。 3．There be＋名词＋分词短语 There are three factors contributing to this attitude as follows. 有三个因素促成了下面的观点。
名师点拨 在这一句型中，有些同学常常把分词误用成动词原形。 有些学生支持这个主意。 ①There are some students support the idea.(×) ②There are some students supporting the idea.(√) ③Some students support the idea.(√) 4．There be＋no doubt/no denying/no need/no sense/no use...that...“毫无疑问/不可否认/没有必要/没有意义/没有用……” There is no sense in waiting here without knowing when he will come back. 在这里傻等却不知道他什么时候回来，一点意义都没有。 5．There be的非谓语形式 there being...(动词－ing形式)；there to be...(不定式形式) There being no bus，we had to walk home. 由于没有公交车，我们不得不步行回家。 翻译句子 1．不可否认，我们的环境质量已经每况愈下。 _________________________________________________ 2．我们盼望着有个晚会来庆祝即将到来的新年。 _________________________________________________ 答案：1.There is no denying that the quality of our environment has gone from bad to worse. 2．We expect there to be a party to celebrate the coming New Year. 四、如何使用其他的一些高级表达形式让文章更精彩 1．用such总结全文 Such is our lively city，which you are welcome to visit whenever at your convenience. 这就是我们这座充满活力的城市，只要您方便，随时欢迎来参观。 2．使用cannot...too much表示强调 We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. 我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。 3．使用比喻等修辞方法 As is known to us all，vocabulary is an important part of language，just like bricks in a building. 大家都知道，词汇是语言学习的重要组成部分，就像一座大楼的基石。 4．使用not...but...句型 Some people don't like their jobs not because they're lazy but because their jobs are small. 一些人不喜欢他们的工作不是因为他们懒，而是因为他们的工作太渺小了。
5．使用否定句 The law is the law.Nobody has any excuse to break it. 法律就是法律。任何人没有任何借口违反法律。 6．使用双重否定 Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle，it is not without its problem. 尽管自行车有许多明显的优点，它仍然存在一些问题。 Ⅰ.翻译句子 1．任何语言都无法表达我对你们及时帮助的真心感谢。 _________________________________________________ 2．学好英语并不是一件苦差事而是一件快乐的事情。 _________________________________________________ 3．我们再怎么强调保护环境的重要性也不为过。 _________________________________________________
答案：1.No word can express my wholehearted thanks for your timely help. 2．It is not a hardship but a pleasure to learn English well. 3．We can't emphasize the importance of protecting the environment too much. Ⅱ.句型转换 1．We can successfully build an economized society only in this way.(倒装) →______________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 2．He had hardly reached the station when the train left.(倒装) →______________________________________________ _________________________________________________
