2024年大学英语六级考试写作的专项训练3

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2024年大学英语六级考试写作的专项训练3

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Employment Pressure Facing College Students. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline below:   1)目前大学生面临就业难的问题   2)分析导致该问题的原因   3)大学生应该如何应对该问题   Employment Pressure Facing College Students ______________________________________________________________   【行文思路】   本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题,提纲第2点要求分析该问题产生的原因,提纲第3的要求说明应该如何解决该问题,由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。   根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:指出大学生就业难的问题;分析导致该问题的原因;从大学生的角度说明应该如何应对该问题。   【优秀范文】   Employment Pressure Facing College Students   [1]About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after their graduation. [1]But now, things are different. Todays university students usually experience great difficulties finding satisfactory jobs. They often complain that graduation means joblessness. [2]What is the cause of this phenomenon?   [3]Firstly, with the enrollment extension of universities, [4]the supply of university graduates exceeds social demand. This results in a decreased chance for any individual graduate to find a job. [3]Secondly, university students [5]tend to spend most of their time at school in studying academic subjects and lack relevant job experience. [3]Thirdly, some students dont study hard during the college. After four years of university life, they havent gained the knowledge those fairly good jobs or positions require.   [6]Facing the increasingly fierce competition, we university students should try our bests to change this situation. [3]Above all, when in school, we should make the most of our time and [7]put our heart into our studies. [3]Whats more, we can take part-time jobs and attend social activities in our spare time to [8]accumulate relevant practical experience. [3]Besides, when we apply for jobs after graduation, we should [9]attach more importance to accumulating experience than to the starting salary.   【作文点评】   [1]过去和现在进行对比。   [2]设问句引出原因,容易引起注意。   [3]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。   [4]大学生供过于求。   [5]倾向,趋于。   [6]面对日趋激烈的竞争,现在分词作状语。   [7]用心学习。   [8]积累相关的实际经验。   [9]更加关注。   佳句临摹   1.佳句:Facing the increasingly fierce competition, university students should try their best to change this situation.   临摹:经历过艰苦,我们就会更懂得如何应对危机。   2.佳句:They should attach more importance to accumulating experience than to their starting salary   临摹:很显然,我们应该更加关注一个人的能力,而不是他的学历。   【KEY】   1. Having experienced hardships, we will know better how to survive crisis.   2. Obviously, we should attach more importance to ones abilities than to his degree.

  

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Employment Pressure Facing College Students. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline below:   1)目前大学生面临就业难的问题   2)分析导致该问题的原因   3)大学生应该如何应对该问题   Employment Pressure Facing College Students ______________________________________________________________   【行文思路】   本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题,提纲第2点要求分析该问题产生的原因,提纲第3的要求说明应该如何解决该问题,由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。   根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:指出大学生就业难的问题;分析导致该问题的原因;从大学生的角度说明应该如何应对该问题。   【优秀范文】   Employment Pressure Facing College Students   [1]About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after their graduation. [1]But now, things are different. Todays university students usually experience great difficulties finding satisfactory jobs. They often complain that graduation means joblessness. [2]What is the cause of this phenomenon?   [3]Firstly, with the enrollment extension of universities, [4]the supply of university graduates exceeds social demand. This results in a decreased chance for any individual graduate to find a job. [3]Secondly, university students [5]tend to spend most of their time at school in studying academic subjects and lack relevant job experience. [3]Thirdly, some students dont study hard during the college. After four years of university life, they havent gained the knowledge those fairly good jobs or positions require.   [6]Facing the increasingly fierce competition, we university students should try our bests to change this situation. [3]Above all, when in school, we should make the most of our time and [7]put our heart into our studies. [3]Whats more, we can take part-time jobs and attend social activities in our spare time to [8]accumulate relevant practical experience. [3]Besides, when we apply for jobs after graduation, we should [9]attach more importance to accumulating experience than to the starting salary.   【作文点评】   [1]过去和现在进行对比。   [2]设问句引出原因,容易引起注意。   [3]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。   [4]大学生供过于求。   [5]倾向,趋于。   [6]面对日趋激烈的竞争,现在分词作状语。   [7]用心学习。   [8]积累相关的实际经验。   [9]更加关注。   佳句临摹   1.佳句:Facing the increasingly fierce competition, university students should try their best to change this situation.   临摹:经历过艰苦,我们就会更懂得如何应对危机。   2.佳句:They should attach more importance to accumulating experience than to their starting salary   临摹:很显然,我们应该更加关注一个人的能力,而不是他的学历。   【KEY】   1. Having experienced hardships, we will know better how to survive crisis.   2. Obviously, we should attach more importance to ones abilities than to his degree.

  

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