2024届高考英语二轮专题训练书面表达：3

　　高考英语二轮专题训练 书面表达3

　　2024年高考真题——英语（广东A卷）【题文】阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　Oseola McCarty spent more than 75 years washing and ironing other people’s clothes. As a laundrywoman, she was paid only a few dollars each time. Certainly nobody would consider her rich, so they were all amazed when Miss McCarty decided to donate $ 150,000 to the University of Southern Mississippi.

　　The money was i …

　　me savings. She could save such a large amount of money because she lived a very simple life. She never learned to drive, and when she wanted to go somewhere, she just walked. She never flew to anywhere till the donation（捐助），and in 50 years she had been out of the South only once. The house in which she lived was also a rather modest one her last uncle left her. Only after she became known in America did she begin to travel all over the country. Since then, she had been the subject of many interviews and articles and was even invited to the White House.

　　Her donation was for students who clearly needed financial help. She herself left school in the sixth grade and had never married or had children. She said to the reporters that the idea of helping somebody’s child go to college gave her much pleasure.

　　[写作内容]

　　1用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

　　2.用约120个词就Miss McCarty的捐助谈谈你的想法，内容包括：

　　（1）你如何看待她的捐助行为；

　　（2）你认为她的捐助对受惠学生有哪些影响；

　　（3）如果你自己要捐助，你会选择哪个群体并陈述理由。

　　[写作要求]

　　1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。

　　2.作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。

　　[评分标准]

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

　　【答案】

　　Oseola McCarty, an ordinary worker with a thrifty lifestyle, donated a great deal of money to a university, which aroused public attention and earned her widespread social recognition. In return, she received a sense of satisfaction and fulfillment.

　　Virtuous and warm-hearted, the lady concerned has donated a considerable amount of saving to help college students struggling with financial difficulties, thereby motivating people at any other corner of the world to participate in this affectionate activity.

　　From where I stand, not only will the lady's generosity paint a very brilliant blue print for the future of those students in want of money, but also it will rekindle their faith in life by convincing them that their life goal is elevating and worth trying.

　　Given the choice, I would make donations to those who still live under the bottom line of the modern living condition.Convincing arguments as follows can be made to support my stance. For one thing, generous and selfless dedication may take indispensable assistance to them, especially for the time when they are confronted with pain and sorrow,twists and turns. For another, just as an Indian old saying goes, roses in her hand; flavor in mine. That is to say, great satisfaction would step slowly and gracefully in to the mercy-producers' souls as well.

　　To bring as many angel-like smiles as possible to our society,we should practice more beneficial performance by leading a thrifty life.

　　【解析】

　　解析：

　　【考点】考察任务型写作

　　【写作指导】

　　本文要求首先叙述短文内容：别人眼里很贫穷的却为别人捐了$ 150,000。该部分一定要简洁扼要，不要使用过多的复杂句式，容易超过字数限制。

　　然后就如何看待她的捐助行为，捐助行为的影响，以及如果你捐助，你会选择什么群体，分别展开阐述。本文使用一般现在时，在谈自己的看法时使用第一人称。考生可以以自己的亲身经历为例进行详细说明。

　　本文给考生自由发挥的余地很大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。

　　海南省2024届高三高考预测金卷 英语

　　【题文】书面表达（满分25 分） 假如你是李华，最近你在浏览一个新西兰中学网站时，看到一位名叫Tom的中学生的留言，他计划在暑假期间到中国的北京旅游，希望能有一名中国留学生做他的导游。你对此很感兴趣，请根据以下要点提示写一封e－mail给他，介绍你的相关情况。

　　主要内容包括 ：1.希望做他的导游；2.打算如何给他做导游；3.期盼他的回复。

　　注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯；3. 信的开头已为你写好。

　　Dear Tom，

　　Recently, while browsing a senior high school website of New Zealand, I saw the message you posted on it.

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】书面表达：：

　　With the development of people’s living conditions, more and more people have their own cars. Some of us think it’s good to own a car. Firstly, it’s a convenient, fast, and comfortable means of transportation. Secondly, it shows that people are becoming richer, and the country much more stronger. It also makes relative businesses and industries develop faster.

　　Others have different opinions. They think that cars give off waste gas and pollute the environment. Too many cars will have some bad effects, such as more accidents. Besides, overloaded parking cars is another big problem.

　　In my view, people should think carefully before they buy a car.

　　广东省深圳市2024届高三上学期第一次五校联考英语

　　【题文】读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)

　　阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　Many students fail to perform well in an exam not because they lack ability, but because of the unique pressure of the exam room—the tense atmosphere, the ticking clock on the wall, the teacher walking around, and the thought that their future will be decided by the exam.

　　It’s not just students who will face pressure. Human beings are competitive animals and we decide to evaluate each other, whether in exams, in job interviews or even on romantic dates, so all of us occasionally get nervous. Removing pressure from life is an impossible dream.

　　However, there are some ways which can help reduce our pressure. It turns out that we are far more likely to overcome the pressure when we are as familiar as possible with the situation we are about to face. Of course, even when we are well-prepared, we may still feel nervous, but at least we will be more equipped to deal with our nervousness than if we have failed to prepare. Furthermore, we may also benefit from reminding ourselves that the big moment is not that big after all from a different perspective. Even a huge exam is not as important as a loving family, or good health.

　　【写作内容】

　　1. 以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；

　　2. 然后以约120个词谈谈你对“压力”的看法， 内容包括：

　　（1）正确面对压力的重要性;

　　（2）作为高三的学生，你通常面临哪些压力？

　　( 3 ) 你在生活和学习中应对压力的措施。

　　【写作要求】

　　1、在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

　　2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

　　【评分标准】

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

　　【答案】读写任务：

　　The writer mainly tells us not only students but also other people would feel stressed on different occasions. Also, he gives some suggestions on how to reduce pressure.

　　As far as I ‘m concerned, pressure is part of life. It’s quite natural for us to feel stressed occasionally, at an exam, or when speaking to a stranger. So it’s of great importance to have a right attitude towards pressure. What we need to do is to relax ourselves and face the challenge positively and initiatively.

　　As Senior 3 students, we have to deal with some grown-up problems and make decisions by ourselves. Family can be one of the biggest causes of stress, such as problems with arguing with parents or brothers or sisters. We also have lots of stress from school, either from our classmates or teachers. However, the greatest pressure comes from study, which worries most of us as the National Matriculation Test is approaching. We also feel stressed about choosing our education after high school or not affording to go university.

　　In order to reduce pressure, first, a balanced diet and enough sleep are necessary; secondly,   I would schedule my study properly so that I can have time to do sports or listen to music; also, friendship, support from my parents and encouragement from my teachers can help me a lot. I would try every means to relax myself and work with high efficiency to achieve my goal.

　　福建省莆田一中2024届高三高考考前模拟 英语

　　【题文】书面表达（满分2分）如今, 中国的许多城市出现了跳广场舞的热潮, 对于这个现象, 人们褒贬不一。请根据以下提示, 用英语给报社写一篇报道。

　　大部分人赞成, 认为是一种健康的活动,省钱；

　　一些人反对, 认为影响他人的休息, 有噪音污染；

　　你的看法。

　　注意：1. 词数120左右2. 文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数。

　　Nowadays square dancing is getting more and more popular with Chinese people in many cities. Some public places are usually crowded with happy dancers, especially in the morning and evening. But now people have thrown doubt on this issue.

　　To be honest, most people say yes to square dancing, considering it a green form of exercising to keep fit. Besides, it is money-saving. But meanwhile, some others are greatly opposed to square dancing. They argue that the happiness of those dancers is built on the pain of others who have to suffer from the loud music and noise. With their peace of life disturbed, they are angry with and even run into conflict with the dancers.

　　In my view, square dancing is certainly beneficial to the whole society so long as the dancers show concern for others’ needs. What’s more, our government should invest more money to build some specified recreation centers for people.

　　安徽省2024届高三高考冲刺调研英语卷三

　　【题文】

　　假如你是李华，【二十一世纪英文报】进行征文活动，主题是关于“国际消费者权益曰” (International Day for Protecting Consumers' Rights)的内容。下面是你在网上收集到的有关信息：“国际消费者权益日”定于每年的3月15日，最先由国际消费者联盟组织于1983年确定。在国际范围内更好地保护消费者权益。1984年12月26日中国消费者协会成立，中国消费者协会于1987年加入国际消费者协会。1991年3月15日，中央电视台开始现场直播“3. 15”专题晚会。

　　1.国际消费者权益日的日期，和确定的日期;

　　2.该权益日的目的;

　　3.我国加入国际消费者协 会和3. 15晚会的情况;

　　4.举例说明你在消费过程中遇到的问题，以及你是如'何解决的。

　　注意: 1.词数120左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数；

　　2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3.参考词汇：国际消费者联盟 International Organization of Consumers' Union；

　　中国消费者协会 China Consumers' Association。

　　Dear Mr. Green,

　　International Day for Protecting Consumers' Rights is on March 15 annually. __________

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】Dear Mr. Green,

　　International Day for Protecting Consumers' Rights is on March 15 annually. It was first decided in 1983 by International Organization of Consumers' Union. The aim is to protect consumers' rights better in the world.

　　China Consumers' Association was set up on December 26, 1984 and joined International Consumers Association in 1987. On March 15, 1991 CCTV began to broadcast live the “3. 15” Theme Evening Show in 2010.

　　Here I want to share an experience with you. Once I had a meal in a restaurant but the fish I was eating had gone bad because it tasted terrible. I asked the boss to change it. At first, he was not willing to, but when I was ready to complain it to the local Consumers' Association, he had to change the dish for me. Through this experience, I know how to protect my rights of consumption better.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　高考英语二轮专题训练 书面表达3

　　2024年高考真题——英语（广东A卷）【题文】阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　Oseola McCarty spent more than 75 years washing and ironing other people’s clothes. As a laundrywoman, she was paid only a few dollars each time. Certainly nobody would consider her rich, so they were all amazed when Miss McCarty decided to donate $ 150,000 to the University of Southern Mississippi.

　　The money was i …

　　me savings. She could save such a large amount of money because she lived a very simple life. She never learned to drive, and when she wanted to go somewhere, she just walked. She never flew to anywhere till the donation（捐助），and in 50 years she had been out of the South only once. The house in which she lived was also a rather modest one her last uncle left her. Only after she became known in America did she begin to travel all over the country. Since then, she had been the subject of many interviews and articles and was even invited to the White House.

　　Her donation was for students who clearly needed financial help. She herself left school in the sixth grade and had never married or had children. She said to the reporters that the idea of helping somebody’s child go to college gave her much pleasure.

　　[写作内容]

　　1用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

　　2.用约120个词就Miss McCarty的捐助谈谈你的想法，内容包括：

　　（1）你如何看待她的捐助行为；

　　（2）你认为她的捐助对受惠学生有哪些影响；

　　（3）如果你自己要捐助，你会选择哪个群体并陈述理由。

　　[写作要求]

　　1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。

　　2.作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。

　　[评分标准]

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

　　【答案】

　　Oseola McCarty, an ordinary worker with a thrifty lifestyle, donated a great deal of money to a university, which aroused public attention and earned her widespread social recognition. In return, she received a sense of satisfaction and fulfillment.

　　Virtuous and warm-hearted, the lady concerned has donated a considerable amount of saving to help college students struggling with financial difficulties, thereby motivating people at any other corner of the world to participate in this affectionate activity.

　　From where I stand, not only will the lady's generosity paint a very brilliant blue print for the future of those students in want of money, but also it will rekindle their faith in life by convincing them that their life goal is elevating and worth trying.

　　Given the choice, I would make donations to those who still live under the bottom line of the modern living condition.Convincing arguments as follows can be made to support my stance. For one thing, generous and selfless dedication may take indispensable assistance to them, especially for the time when they are confronted with pain and sorrow,twists and turns. For another, just as an Indian old saying goes, roses in her hand; flavor in mine. That is to say, great satisfaction would step slowly and gracefully in to the mercy-producers' souls as well.

　　To bring as many angel-like smiles as possible to our society,we should practice more beneficial performance by leading a thrifty life.

　　【解析】

　　解析：

　　【考点】考察任务型写作

　　【写作指导】

　　本文要求首先叙述短文内容：别人眼里很贫穷的却为别人捐了$ 150,000。该部分一定要简洁扼要，不要使用过多的复杂句式，容易超过字数限制。

　　然后就如何看待她的捐助行为，捐助行为的影响，以及如果你捐助，你会选择什么群体，分别展开阐述。本文使用一般现在时，在谈自己的看法时使用第一人称。考生可以以自己的亲身经历为例进行详细说明。

　　本文给考生自由发挥的余地很大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。

　　海南省2024届高三高考预测金卷 英语

　　【题文】书面表达（满分25 分） 假如你是李华，最近你在浏览一个新西兰中学网站时，看到一位名叫Tom的中学生的留言，他计划在暑假期间到中国的北京旅游，希望能有一名中国留学生做他的导游。你对此很感兴趣，请根据以下要点提示写一封e－mail给他，介绍你的相关情况。

　　主要内容包括 ：1.希望做他的导游；2.打算如何给他做导游；3.期盼他的回复。

　　注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯；3. 信的开头已为你写好。

　　Dear Tom，

　　Recently, while browsing a senior high school website of New Zealand, I saw the message you posted on it.

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】书面表达：：

　　With the development of people’s living conditions, more and more people have their own cars. Some of us think it’s good to own a car. Firstly, it’s a convenient, fast, and comfortable means of transportation. Secondly, it shows that people are becoming richer, and the country much more stronger. It also makes relative businesses and industries develop faster.

　　Others have different opinions. They think that cars give off waste gas and pollute the environment. Too many cars will have some bad effects, such as more accidents. Besides, overloaded parking cars is another big problem.

　　In my view, people should think carefully before they buy a car.

　　广东省深圳市2024届高三上学期第一次五校联考英语

　　【题文】读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)

　　阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　Many students fail to perform well in an exam not because they lack ability, but because of the unique pressure of the exam room—the tense atmosphere, the ticking clock on the wall, the teacher walking around, and the thought that their future will be decided by the exam.

　　It’s not just students who will face pressure. Human beings are competitive animals and we decide to evaluate each other, whether in exams, in job interviews or even on romantic dates, so all of us occasionally get nervous. Removing pressure from life is an impossible dream.

　　However, there are some ways which can help reduce our pressure. It turns out that we are far more likely to overcome the pressure when we are as familiar as possible with the situation we are about to face. Of course, even when we are well-prepared, we may still feel nervous, but at least we will be more equipped to deal with our nervousness than if we have failed to prepare. Furthermore, we may also benefit from reminding ourselves that the big moment is not that big after all from a different perspective. Even a huge exam is not as important as a loving family, or good health.

　　【写作内容】

　　1. 以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；

　　2. 然后以约120个词谈谈你对“压力”的看法， 内容包括：

　　（1）正确面对压力的重要性;

　　（2）作为高三的学生，你通常面临哪些压力？

　　( 3 ) 你在生活和学习中应对压力的措施。

　　【写作要求】

　　1、在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

　　2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

　　【评分标准】

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

　　【答案】读写任务：

　　The writer mainly tells us not only students but also other people would feel stressed on different occasions. Also, he gives some suggestions on how to reduce pressure.

　　As far as I ‘m concerned, pressure is part of life. It’s quite natural for us to feel stressed occasionally, at an exam, or when speaking to a stranger. So it’s of great importance to have a right attitude towards pressure. What we need to do is to relax ourselves and face the challenge positively and initiatively.

　　As Senior 3 students, we have to deal with some grown-up problems and make decisions by ourselves. Family can be one of the biggest causes of stress, such as problems with arguing with parents or brothers or sisters. We also have lots of stress from school, either from our classmates or teachers. However, the greatest pressure comes from study, which worries most of us as the National Matriculation Test is approaching. We also feel stressed about choosing our education after high school or not affording to go university.

　　In order to reduce pressure, first, a balanced diet and enough sleep are necessary; secondly,   I would schedule my study properly so that I can have time to do sports or listen to music; also, friendship, support from my parents and encouragement from my teachers can help me a lot. I would try every means to relax myself and work with high efficiency to achieve my goal.

　　福建省莆田一中2024届高三高考考前模拟 英语

　　【题文】书面表达（满分2分）如今, 中国的许多城市出现了跳广场舞的热潮, 对于这个现象, 人们褒贬不一。请根据以下提示, 用英语给报社写一篇报道。

　　大部分人赞成, 认为是一种健康的活动,省钱；

　　一些人反对, 认为影响他人的休息, 有噪音污染；

　　你的看法。

　　注意：1. 词数120左右2. 文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数。

　　Nowadays square dancing is getting more and more popular with Chinese people in many cities. Some public places are usually crowded with happy dancers, especially in the morning and evening. But now people have thrown doubt on this issue.

　　To be honest, most people say yes to square dancing, considering it a green form of exercising to keep fit. Besides, it is money-saving. But meanwhile, some others are greatly opposed to square dancing. They argue that the happiness of those dancers is built on the pain of others who have to suffer from the loud music and noise. With their peace of life disturbed, they are angry with and even run into conflict with the dancers.

　　In my view, square dancing is certainly beneficial to the whole society so long as the dancers show concern for others’ needs. What’s more, our government should invest more money to build some specified recreation centers for people.

　　安徽省2024届高三高考冲刺调研英语卷三

　　【题文】

　　假如你是李华，【二十一世纪英文报】进行征文活动，主题是关于“国际消费者权益曰” (International Day for Protecting Consumers' Rights)的内容。下面是你在网上收集到的有关信息：“国际消费者权益日”定于每年的3月15日，最先由国际消费者联盟组织于1983年确定。在国际范围内更好地保护消费者权益。1984年12月26日中国消费者协会成立，中国消费者协会于1987年加入国际消费者协会。1991年3月15日，中央电视台开始现场直播“3. 15”专题晚会。

　　1.国际消费者权益日的日期，和确定的日期;

　　2.该权益日的目的;

　　3.我国加入国际消费者协 会和3. 15晚会的情况;

　　4.举例说明你在消费过程中遇到的问题，以及你是如'何解决的。

　　注意: 1.词数120左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数；

　　2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3.参考词汇：国际消费者联盟 International Organization of Consumers' Union；

　　中国消费者协会 China Consumers' Association。

　　Dear Mr. Green,

　　International Day for Protecting Consumers' Rights is on March 15 annually. __________

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　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】Dear Mr. Green,

　　International Day for Protecting Consumers' Rights is on March 15 annually. It was first decided in 1983 by International Organization of Consumers' Union. The aim is to protect consumers' rights better in the world.

　　China Consumers' Association was set up on December 26, 1984 and joined International Consumers Association in 1987. On March 15, 1991 CCTV began to broadcast live the “3. 15” Theme Evening Show in 2010.

　　Here I want to share an experience with you. Once I had a meal in a restaurant but the fish I was eating had gone bad because it tasted terrible. I asked the boss to change it. At first, he was not willing to, but when I was ready to complain it to the local Consumers' Association, he had to change the dish for me. Through this experience, I know how to protect my rights of consumption better.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua