2024年高考英语高效书面表达专题卷：13（含解析）

　　1．

　　  写作（共两节，满分40分）

　　第一节  基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）

　　你是某中学生英文报的通讯员，最近你对武广高速铁路客运新干线做了一些采访调查。下表是你收集的武广高速铁路（the Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway）的有关情况：

　　基本情况 始建于2005年，2009年12月26日开通运营，干线全长1068公里，途径湖北、湖南和广东三省；列车时速高达350公里/小时，目前世界上最快。

　　主要优点 武汉至广州仅需3小时，比先前减少7个多小时；

　　高铁列车设施齐全，安全舒适，更具人性化（humane）；

　　美中不足 1）票价偏高；2）车站离市中心较远。

　　 [写作内容]

　　根据上表写一篇报道，并包括如下内容：

　　1. 武广高速铁路客运新干线的基本情况；

　　2. 高铁列车的主要优点和不足；

　　 [写作要求]

　　只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。

　　 [评分标准]

　　句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

　　8

　　（2010·湖南同升湖实验学校高三第二次月考）

　　Direction: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese

　　假如你是李华，校园小记者就孩子与家长关系调查结果----大多数孩子都不愿意与家长交流，不愿意告诉家长内心想法的问题来采访你。

　　1.请你介绍你同学中与家长之间的不和谐状况并分析原因。

　　2.表明你所希望的孩子与家长的关系，并说明如何才能建立这种关系。

　　注意：1、词数不少于120个；

　　2、可适当增加细节；

　　In the past 15 years, homework assignments(布置) have risen by 51% according to a 2006 study . That is an average（平均）of 12 extre hours of homework per week! Excessive homework often leaves no time for students to have fun or do something for themselves. Many parents spend at least three hours every night going through their chidren’s homework.

　　Sometimes parents ask for more work for their children! When teachers don’t give homework, some parents will go to the school and complain(抱怨). They want teachers to assign homework every day as a means sure teachers do their job and the children have work to do.

　　【写作内容】

　　你看了上面的文章，决定以 Homework or No Homework ? 为题就此现象在你校的学生英文刊物 Viewpoints 上发表文章谈自己的观点，具体内容如下：

　　1. 以约30个词概括上文所述现象；

　　2. 以约120个词谈你对 homework 的看法，并包括如下要点：

　　（1）你对家庭作业必要性的认识；

　　（2）你对过重的家庭作业负担的看法；

　　（3）概述你的观点。

　　4．

　　假如你是李华，在十一旅游期间入住北京友谊宾馆301房间，10月2日入住，6日退房。你回家后发现一个中等大小的蓝色背包遗失在那里，内有几本参考书籍，一个白色限量版ipod,一张信用卡和少量现金。请用英文给该宾馆外籍经理写一封信，请他帮忙寻找并寄回。

　　信件要点包括：1.陈述写信原因；

　　2.简要描述该背包；

　　3.说明其重要性；

　　4.期待回复并感谢。

　　注意：1.150词左右；

　　2.信件格式已给出。

　　Dear Sir,

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　2024伦敦奥运会已进入筹备工作，伦敦奥组委现向世界各地招募志愿者，招募具体情况见海报。

　　VOLUNTEER POST We are looking for applications for the following posts:

　　*translator or interpreter

　　*social volunteer

　　*stadium volunteer

　　*transportation volunteer

　　2024 Olympic Committee

　　假如你是刘明，17岁，现是哈尔滨市第六中学高三年级的一名学生，请根据上面海报中自己感兴趣的一个志愿者工作给伦敦奥组委写回信，应征其中的一项志愿者工作。回信要求包括如下内容：

　　1、个人信息：名字（LiuMing），年龄，身份；2、你的性格特点；3、你的兴趣、爱好、特长；4、你的相关经历。

　　注意：信的开头、结尾已经给出(不计入词数)

　　Dear 2024 Olympic Committee,

　　I am writing to apply for a position at your Volunteer Post. _________________________________________________________________________________________

　　_______________________________________________________________________________________

　　_______________________________________________________________________________________

　　_______________________________________________________________________________________

　　I am looking forward to your early reply.

　　Yours,

　　Liu Ming

　　参考答案

　　1．

　　The Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway, first built in 2005, went into operation on Dec. 26th,2009. The high-speed line, which covers a distance of 1086 kilometres, runs across three provinces: Hubei, Hunan and Guangong. The most exciting thing is that the train can reach a speed of 350 km per hour, which is now the fastest in the world and thus shortens (cuts) the travel time between Guangzhou and Wuhan from ten hours to only three! Moreover, the high-speed train is well-equipped with all necessary facilities and is more humane as well as safe and comfortable.

　　However, what is not so satisfactory is that the fares are a lttle too high for common people and the station is relatively far from the city centre.

　　【解析】

　　2．

　　One possible version:

　　Nowadays, most of my classmates aren’t willing to communicate with their parents or share their inner thoughts with their parents and always find it hard to seek support and advice from them, the reason of which is that they feel that they are not equal in position and parents lay too much emphasis on the children’s study.

　　In my opinion, the relationship between parents and children should be one filled with love, care and understanding, in which parents and children are equal and they can show respect for each other and exchange ideas freely. To build a relationship of this kind , parents should become friends of their children while children ought to place more trust in their teachers and give voice to their inner feelings frankly. Only in this way can we enjoy a warm relationship between parents and children.

　　（132 words）

　　【解析】

　　3．One possible version:

　　Homework or No Homework

　　Today, both students and parents are suffering from excessive homework. However, while the government is trying to relieve students’ burden, some parents complain about the small amount of homework and ask for more

　　Personally, I don’t think the function of homework can be ignored. Homework is a means for teachers to find out whether or not their students understand the lessons .What’s more, practice makes perfect. The more questions they practice, the less painful they fell during exams. To some extent, minimizing the amount of homework may encourage students to be lazy.

　　However, excessive homework is harmful. Students cannot enjoy their leisure time which is occupied by countless assignments and sometimes they have to copy homework from each other in order to finish it on time .All work and no play makes John a dull boy .Students should have more time for leisure activities like reading and sports.

　　On balance, homework is necessary but the amount must not be a burden for students.

　　【解析】 略

　　4．

　　Dear Sir，

　　I’m so grateful for your good service during my stay in Beijing for a tour, but I’m writing to ask a fa-vor to find and send back my pack which I left in your hotel.

　　I checked in on Oct,2 and out on Oct ,6. Setting off in a rush for the station, I left the pack in Room 301. It’s a medium-sized, blue, leather backpack which contains some books that are wanted in reviewing NMET, a white ipod of special edition, a credit card some cash. All in the pack matters to me, especially the ipod, a precious gift from my father on my 18th birthday. So much do I cherish it that I feel upset for its loss.

　　If you find it, would you please post it to me? The return address is on the envelope.

　　I’ll appreciate it very much if you can give me your earliest reply and thank you for anything you can do for me.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：

　　作文以写邮件的形式，注意邮件格式，认真审题，知道要点内容，把要点加以整理，用适当的句型进行概括；概括时可以主要用简单句，也可以适当用复杂句，但要确保复杂句使用正确；切记要点要全，不要遗漏；注意语法正确，单词拼写正确，字体干净。

　　5．Dear 2024 Olympic Committee,

　　I am writing to apply for a position at your Volunteer Post. I would be interested in the work as a interpreter. I’m LiuMing. I’m 17 this year. I’m a student in Harbin No.6 High School Senior Three. I’m very cheerful and lively, and I like to make friends with people. I want to get the work of interpreter, because I like to speak English and read English novels. My favourite sports are skating and swimming, so I often go to skating or swimming with friends at weekend. It helps me have a keen mind to report something on a fast speed and have a strong body to work day and night. I had got the first prize in the English speech contest of our school when I was fourteen. I also had got the second prize in the English speech competition of our city when I was fifteen. If I get the work, I will work hard, make some contribution to 2024 London Olympic Games. I am looking forward to your early reply.

　　Yours,

　　LiuMing

　　【解析】本文是一封对伦敦奥运会志愿者的申请书，不仅写清楚自己的个人信息，性格特点，兴趣爱好，还要写清楚的相关经历。并且说明自己申请的是什么职位的志愿者。为什申请这个职位的志愿者？最后还要表示如果得到此位置，我该如何工作。

　　1．

　　  写作（共两节，满分40分）

　　第一节  基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）

　　你是某中学生英文报的通讯员，最近你对武广高速铁路客运新干线做了一些采访调查。下表是你收集的武广高速铁路（the Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway）的有关情况：

　　基本情况 始建于2005年，2009年12月26日开通运营，干线全长1068公里，途径湖北、湖南和广东三省；列车时速高达350公里/小时，目前世界上最快。

　　主要优点 武汉至广州仅需3小时，比先前减少7个多小时；

　　高铁列车设施齐全，安全舒适，更具人性化（humane）；

　　美中不足 1）票价偏高；2）车站离市中心较远。

　　 [写作内容]

　　根据上表写一篇报道，并包括如下内容：

　　1. 武广高速铁路客运新干线的基本情况；

　　2. 高铁列车的主要优点和不足；

　　 [写作要求]

　　只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。

　　 [评分标准]

　　句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

　　8

　　（2010·湖南同升湖实验学校高三第二次月考）

　　Direction: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese

　　假如你是李华，校园小记者就孩子与家长关系调查结果----大多数孩子都不愿意与家长交流，不愿意告诉家长内心想法的问题来采访你。

　　1.请你介绍你同学中与家长之间的不和谐状况并分析原因。

　　2.表明你所希望的孩子与家长的关系，并说明如何才能建立这种关系。

　　注意：1、词数不少于120个；

　　2、可适当增加细节；

　　In the past 15 years, homework assignments(布置) have risen by 51% according to a 2006 study . That is an average（平均）of 12 extre hours of homework per week! Excessive homework often leaves no time for students to have fun or do something for themselves. Many parents spend at least three hours every night going through their chidren’s homework.

　　Sometimes parents ask for more work for their children! When teachers don’t give homework, some parents will go to the school and complain(抱怨). They want teachers to assign homework every day as a means sure teachers do their job and the children have work to do.

　　【写作内容】

　　你看了上面的文章，决定以 Homework or No Homework ? 为题就此现象在你校的学生英文刊物 Viewpoints 上发表文章谈自己的观点，具体内容如下：

　　1. 以约30个词概括上文所述现象；

　　2. 以约120个词谈你对 homework 的看法，并包括如下要点：

　　（1）你对家庭作业必要性的认识；

　　（2）你对过重的家庭作业负担的看法；

　　（3）概述你的观点。

　　4．

　　假如你是李华，在十一旅游期间入住北京友谊宾馆301房间，10月2日入住，6日退房。你回家后发现一个中等大小的蓝色背包遗失在那里，内有几本参考书籍，一个白色限量版ipod,一张信用卡和少量现金。请用英文给该宾馆外籍经理写一封信，请他帮忙寻找并寄回。

　　信件要点包括：1.陈述写信原因；

　　2.简要描述该背包；

　　3.说明其重要性；

　　4.期待回复并感谢。

　　注意：1.150词左右；

　　2.信件格式已给出。

　　Dear Sir,

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　2024伦敦奥运会已进入筹备工作，伦敦奥组委现向世界各地招募志愿者，招募具体情况见海报。

　　VOLUNTEER POST We are looking for applications for the following posts:

　　*translator or interpreter

　　*social volunteer

　　*stadium volunteer

　　*transportation volunteer

　　2024 Olympic Committee

　　假如你是刘明，17岁，现是哈尔滨市第六中学高三年级的一名学生，请根据上面海报中自己感兴趣的一个志愿者工作给伦敦奥组委写回信，应征其中的一项志愿者工作。回信要求包括如下内容：

　　1、个人信息：名字（LiuMing），年龄，身份；2、你的性格特点；3、你的兴趣、爱好、特长；4、你的相关经历。

　　注意：信的开头、结尾已经给出(不计入词数)

　　Dear 2024 Olympic Committee,

　　I am writing to apply for a position at your Volunteer Post. _________________________________________________________________________________________

　　_______________________________________________________________________________________

　　_______________________________________________________________________________________

　　_______________________________________________________________________________________

　　I am looking forward to your early reply.

　　Yours,

　　Liu Ming

　　参考答案

　　1．

　　The Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway, first built in 2005, went into operation on Dec. 26th,2009. The high-speed line, which covers a distance of 1086 kilometres, runs across three provinces: Hubei, Hunan and Guangong. The most exciting thing is that the train can reach a speed of 350 km per hour, which is now the fastest in the world and thus shortens (cuts) the travel time between Guangzhou and Wuhan from ten hours to only three! Moreover, the high-speed train is well-equipped with all necessary facilities and is more humane as well as safe and comfortable.

　　However, what is not so satisfactory is that the fares are a lttle too high for common people and the station is relatively far from the city centre.

　　【解析】

　　2．

　　One possible version:

　　Nowadays, most of my classmates aren’t willing to communicate with their parents or share their inner thoughts with their parents and always find it hard to seek support and advice from them, the reason of which is that they feel that they are not equal in position and parents lay too much emphasis on the children’s study.

　　In my opinion, the relationship between parents and children should be one filled with love, care and understanding, in which parents and children are equal and they can show respect for each other and exchange ideas freely. To build a relationship of this kind , parents should become friends of their children while children ought to place more trust in their teachers and give voice to their inner feelings frankly. Only in this way can we enjoy a warm relationship between parents and children.

　　（132 words）

　　【解析】

　　3．One possible version:

　　Homework or No Homework

　　Today, both students and parents are suffering from excessive homework. However, while the government is trying to relieve students’ burden, some parents complain about the small amount of homework and ask for more

　　Personally, I don’t think the function of homework can be ignored. Homework is a means for teachers to find out whether or not their students understand the lessons .What’s more, practice makes perfect. The more questions they practice, the less painful they fell during exams. To some extent, minimizing the amount of homework may encourage students to be lazy.

　　However, excessive homework is harmful. Students cannot enjoy their leisure time which is occupied by countless assignments and sometimes they have to copy homework from each other in order to finish it on time .All work and no play makes John a dull boy .Students should have more time for leisure activities like reading and sports.

　　On balance, homework is necessary but the amount must not be a burden for students.

　　【解析】 略

　　4．

　　Dear Sir，

　　I’m so grateful for your good service during my stay in Beijing for a tour, but I’m writing to ask a fa-vor to find and send back my pack which I left in your hotel.

　　I checked in on Oct,2 and out on Oct ,6. Setting off in a rush for the station, I left the pack in Room 301. It’s a medium-sized, blue, leather backpack which contains some books that are wanted in reviewing NMET, a white ipod of special edition, a credit card some cash. All in the pack matters to me, especially the ipod, a precious gift from my father on my 18th birthday. So much do I cherish it that I feel upset for its loss.

　　If you find it, would you please post it to me? The return address is on the envelope.

　　I’ll appreciate it very much if you can give me your earliest reply and thank you for anything you can do for me.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：

　　作文以写邮件的形式，注意邮件格式，认真审题，知道要点内容，把要点加以整理，用适当的句型进行概括；概括时可以主要用简单句，也可以适当用复杂句，但要确保复杂句使用正确；切记要点要全，不要遗漏；注意语法正确，单词拼写正确，字体干净。

　　5．Dear 2024 Olympic Committee,

　　I am writing to apply for a position at your Volunteer Post. I would be interested in the work as a interpreter. I’m LiuMing. I’m 17 this year. I’m a student in Harbin No.6 High School Senior Three. I’m very cheerful and lively, and I like to make friends with people. I want to get the work of interpreter, because I like to speak English and read English novels. My favourite sports are skating and swimming, so I often go to skating or swimming with friends at weekend. It helps me have a keen mind to report something on a fast speed and have a strong body to work day and night. I had got the first prize in the English speech contest of our school when I was fourteen. I also had got the second prize in the English speech competition of our city when I was fifteen. If I get the work, I will work hard, make some contribution to 2024 London Olympic Games. I am looking forward to your early reply.

　　Yours,

　　LiuMing

　　【解析】本文是一封对伦敦奥运会志愿者的申请书，不仅写清楚自己的个人信息，性格特点，兴趣爱好，还要写清楚的相关经历。并且说明自己申请的是什么职位的志愿者。为什申请这个职位的志愿者？最后还要表示如果得到此位置，我该如何工作。