2024年高考英语高效书面表达专题卷：19（含解析）

　　1．30分）

　　阅读下面这封中学生来信（摘自 China Daily 21 Century）.

　　Dear Editor:

　　I am a new student at Haining Hongda Senior High School. My home is far from Haining, so I must live at school. This is the first time for me to get away from my parents. I feel very sad. When I left home, I couldn’t help tearing myself away from them. I do not want to be alone at school, and I am a shy girl. I have been crying in bed at night these days. I want to stay at home forever. I miss my parents very much. Could you tell me what to do?

　　Your early reply is expected.

　　Regards

　　Amy

　　请根据以上内容，写一封回信（信的开头已为你好。词数120左右）。

　　回信应包括如下要点；

　　1．鼓励Amy坚定求学信心，志存高远，四海为家。

　　2．就Amy的目前状况，提两到三个建议。

　　Dear Amy:

　　Thank you for your letter. I am so glad to have a talk about your present situation with you.

　　2．

　　书面表达（满分30分）

　　最近，有关食品安全报道屡见报端。例如200年奶粉中的三聚氰胺事件。请你以“Food Safety”为题目，结合生活实际写一篇英语短文，简单发表自己的观点和看法。

　　注意：1．词数不少于110；

　　2．用词准确，条理清晰；

　　3．相关词汇：不合格poor-qualified food；

　　不合法的illegal；

　　摊位stands；

　　吃零食nibbling between meals.

　　三聚氰胺Melamine

　　_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　3．

　　第二节 读写任务 （共1小题，满分25分）

　　阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　The Guangzhou Children’s Palace and Urbanities Growing magazine last week published the results of survey about how children and parents view thankfulness. 84% of parents think that today most children do not feel a sense of thankfulness toward their parents. 90% of the parents said that the key to teaching children to be thankful toward their parents is for parents to set a good example themselves. If parents expect their kids to be more thankful to them, they themselves should be thankful toward their kids as well as toward others.

　　How do children understand the idea of being thankful? Most children think that being thankful means repaying those who have supported them. 44% of the children think that they should be grateful to those who once helped them or brought them happiness; 36% of the children think that if someone helped them before, then they should do something for him or her in return; and 20% said that they should be grateful to their parents for bringing them up. No kids think that being thankful was something out of date.

　　[写作内容]

　　1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点；

　　2. 以约120个词就 “对父母的感谢” 这个主题发表自己的看法，包括以下要点：

　　你认为子女是否应该对父母表示感谢并指出原因；

　　你通常以怎样的方式对自己的父母表示感谢。

　　[写作要求]

　　1. 可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

　　2. 标题自拟。

　　[评分标准]

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　4．

　　The International Youth Art Festival is about to be held in our city. As a young volunteer, I’m going to do a lot of good deeds for it. What will you do?

　　5．假定你是李华，你的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年，即将回国。现在由你给她发E-mail，邀请她参加为她举办的欢送会，要点如下：

　　（1）祝贺她顺利通过考试，她的学习进步很大，为她骄傲；

　　（2）感谢她帮助你们学习英语；

　　（3）时间：星期六晚六点；

　　（4）地点：阳光俱乐部（The Sun Club）302房间；

　　（5）路线：在她所住宾馆门口乘坐332路公共汽车可直达；

　　注意：词数100左右。

　　参考词汇：farewell party 欢送会

　　Dear Jane,

　　_______________________________________

　　_______________________________________

　　_______________________________________.

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Li Hua

　　参考答案

　　1．

　　【解析】

　　2．

　　Recently we have seen series of reports that involved poor-qualified food. For example, some milk powder contains Melamine which is harmful to us, especially to babies. In order not to be affected, we should bear some tips in mind.

　　It is not wise to buy any kind of food from illegal stands along streets. On the other hand ,we should get rid of the habit of nibbling between meals. Because many snacks are junk food. Such as chips, candies and ice cream. Finally, we should buy food of high quality or famous brand. Meanwhile, our government must make laws to guarantee food safety.

　　In a word, more attention must be paid to avoiding unsafe food. There are still many aspects for us to be conscious of to guarantee us a safe supply of food.

　　【解析】

　　3．

　　My Thankfulness for My Parents

　　According to recently released survey results, most parents do not think their children are thankful toward them, while children think thankfulness is important and a means to repay those who have helped them.

　　Throughout our life, numerous people deserve our thanks. Our parents are the first we should thank. In my opinion, we should always be thankful toward our parents for the fact that they give us our lives and bring us up. Our parents Show us their great love and take good care of us. When we get sick, they become so worried that they can not sleep at night. Our parents always give us the best but never ask for anything in return. Therefore, we should always be thankful toward our parents. Personally, I often express my thankfulness in words and by sharing my parents’ difficulties, such as “doing more household work” and “preparing a meal for them on their birthdays”. I think these small deeds make my parents very happy.

　　【解析】

　　4．

　　The International Youth Art Festival is about to be held in our city. As a young volunteer, I’m going to do a lot of good deeds for it.

　　During the International Youth Art Festival , I will do my best to work for the festival. For example, I will help to keep orders, help the actors,

　　clean the spots, and so on. It is a pleasure to do a lot of things for the the International Youth Art Festival. I think I can do the best.

　　【解析】

　　5．

　　Dear Jean,

　　Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China. All you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you and all appreciate your help with our English. We will always remember the wonderful time we spent together.

　　It is a pity that you have to go back soon! So a farewell party for you will be held in room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come by 6:00 pm? We will have dinner together. By the way, you can take bus No.332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.

　　I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead!

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：这是一篇邮件类作文。假定你是李华，你的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年，即将回国。现在由你给她发E-mail，邀请她参加为她举办的欢送会，要点如下：

　　（1）祝贺她顺利通过考试，她的学习进步很大，为她骄傲；

　　（2）感谢她帮助你们学习英语；

　　（3）时间：星期六晚六点；

　　（4）地点：阳光俱乐部（The Sun Club）302房间；

　　（5）路线：在她所住宾馆门口乘坐332路公共汽车可直达

　　每个考生会有切身体会，写起来容易，需要我们翻译已给出的内容成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数100；不要太多也不要太少。

　　【亮点说明】

　　1. All you have gained is the result of your hard work.这里含有一个主语从句。

　　2. We will always remember the wonderful time we spent together. 使用了定语从句。

　　考点：邮件类书面表达

　　1．30分）

　　阅读下面这封中学生来信（摘自 China Daily 21 Century）.

　　Dear Editor:

　　I am a new student at Haining Hongda Senior High School. My home is far from Haining, so I must live at school. This is the first time for me to get away from my parents. I feel very sad. When I left home, I couldn’t help tearing myself away from them. I do not want to be alone at school, and I am a shy girl. I have been crying in bed at night these days. I want to stay at home forever. I miss my parents very much. Could you tell me what to do?

　　Your early reply is expected.

　　Regards

　　Amy

　　请根据以上内容，写一封回信（信的开头已为你好。词数120左右）。

　　回信应包括如下要点；

　　1．鼓励Amy坚定求学信心，志存高远，四海为家。

　　2．就Amy的目前状况，提两到三个建议。

　　Dear Amy:

　　Thank you for your letter. I am so glad to have a talk about your present situation with you.

　　2．

　　书面表达（满分30分）

　　最近，有关食品安全报道屡见报端。例如200年奶粉中的三聚氰胺事件。请你以“Food Safety”为题目，结合生活实际写一篇英语短文，简单发表自己的观点和看法。

　　注意：1．词数不少于110；

　　2．用词准确，条理清晰；

　　3．相关词汇：不合格poor-qualified food；

　　不合法的illegal；

　　摊位stands；

　　吃零食nibbling between meals.

　　三聚氰胺Melamine

　　_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　3．

　　第二节 读写任务 （共1小题，满分25分）

　　阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　The Guangzhou Children’s Palace and Urbanities Growing magazine last week published the results of survey about how children and parents view thankfulness. 84% of parents think that today most children do not feel a sense of thankfulness toward their parents. 90% of the parents said that the key to teaching children to be thankful toward their parents is for parents to set a good example themselves. If parents expect their kids to be more thankful to them, they themselves should be thankful toward their kids as well as toward others.

　　How do children understand the idea of being thankful? Most children think that being thankful means repaying those who have supported them. 44% of the children think that they should be grateful to those who once helped them or brought them happiness; 36% of the children think that if someone helped them before, then they should do something for him or her in return; and 20% said that they should be grateful to their parents for bringing them up. No kids think that being thankful was something out of date.

　　[写作内容]

　　1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点；

　　2. 以约120个词就 “对父母的感谢” 这个主题发表自己的看法，包括以下要点：

　　你认为子女是否应该对父母表示感谢并指出原因；

　　你通常以怎样的方式对自己的父母表示感谢。

　　[写作要求]

　　1. 可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

　　2. 标题自拟。

　　[评分标准]

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　4．

　　The International Youth Art Festival is about to be held in our city. As a young volunteer, I’m going to do a lot of good deeds for it. What will you do?

　　5．假定你是李华，你的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年，即将回国。现在由你给她发E-mail，邀请她参加为她举办的欢送会，要点如下：

　　（1）祝贺她顺利通过考试，她的学习进步很大，为她骄傲；

　　（2）感谢她帮助你们学习英语；

　　（3）时间：星期六晚六点；

　　（4）地点：阳光俱乐部（The Sun Club）302房间；

　　（5）路线：在她所住宾馆门口乘坐332路公共汽车可直达；

　　注意：词数100左右。

　　参考词汇：farewell party 欢送会

　　Dear Jane,

　　_______________________________________

　　_______________________________________

　　_______________________________________.

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Li Hua

　　参考答案

　　1．

　　【解析】

　　2．

　　Recently we have seen series of reports that involved poor-qualified food. For example, some milk powder contains Melamine which is harmful to us, especially to babies. In order not to be affected, we should bear some tips in mind.

　　It is not wise to buy any kind of food from illegal stands along streets. On the other hand ,we should get rid of the habit of nibbling between meals. Because many snacks are junk food. Such as chips, candies and ice cream. Finally, we should buy food of high quality or famous brand. Meanwhile, our government must make laws to guarantee food safety.

　　In a word, more attention must be paid to avoiding unsafe food. There are still many aspects for us to be conscious of to guarantee us a safe supply of food.

　　【解析】

　　3．

　　My Thankfulness for My Parents

　　According to recently released survey results, most parents do not think their children are thankful toward them, while children think thankfulness is important and a means to repay those who have helped them.

　　Throughout our life, numerous people deserve our thanks. Our parents are the first we should thank. In my opinion, we should always be thankful toward our parents for the fact that they give us our lives and bring us up. Our parents Show us their great love and take good care of us. When we get sick, they become so worried that they can not sleep at night. Our parents always give us the best but never ask for anything in return. Therefore, we should always be thankful toward our parents. Personally, I often express my thankfulness in words and by sharing my parents’ difficulties, such as “doing more household work” and “preparing a meal for them on their birthdays”. I think these small deeds make my parents very happy.

　　【解析】

　　4．

　　The International Youth Art Festival is about to be held in our city. As a young volunteer, I’m going to do a lot of good deeds for it.

　　During the International Youth Art Festival , I will do my best to work for the festival. For example, I will help to keep orders, help the actors,

　　clean the spots, and so on. It is a pleasure to do a lot of things for the the International Youth Art Festival. I think I can do the best.

　　【解析】

　　5．

　　Dear Jean,

　　Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China. All you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you and all appreciate your help with our English. We will always remember the wonderful time we spent together.

　　It is a pity that you have to go back soon! So a farewell party for you will be held in room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come by 6:00 pm? We will have dinner together. By the way, you can take bus No.332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.

　　I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead!

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：这是一篇邮件类作文。假定你是李华，你的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年，即将回国。现在由你给她发E-mail，邀请她参加为她举办的欢送会，要点如下：

　　（1）祝贺她顺利通过考试，她的学习进步很大，为她骄傲；

　　（2）感谢她帮助你们学习英语；

　　（3）时间：星期六晚六点；

　　（4）地点：阳光俱乐部（The Sun Club）302房间；

　　（5）路线：在她所住宾馆门口乘坐332路公共汽车可直达

　　每个考生会有切身体会，写起来容易，需要我们翻译已给出的内容成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数100；不要太多也不要太少。

　　【亮点说明】

　　1. All you have gained is the result of your hard work.这里含有一个主语从句。

　　2. We will always remember the wonderful time we spent together. 使用了定语从句。

　　考点：邮件类书面表达