2024届山东省长岛县高考英语一轮短文改错训练：3（含解析）
山东长岛县2024高考英语一轮短文改错选练
短文改错----议论文
2024届河北省邯郸市馆陶县一中高三7月调研考试
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
71.had改为 have
72. student 改为 students
73.do 改为 does
Do harm to 对。。有害。整篇文章用一般现在时来叙述。
74. realized 后的that去掉Relize后面引导宾语从句由how来引导，故把that去掉。
75.boring 改为 bored
Be bored with 厌烦。。。
76. other 改为 others
77.himself 改为 themselves
78. causing 改为 caused
79. the waste of money 中the 改为 a
A waste of sth浪费某物。
80. danger 改为 dangerous
2024模拟短文改错MToday we went to climb the West Hill．Early in morning
．______we started out and arrived an hour late．Then we began
．______to climb．The hill was high and some of us got tired
．______
soon, and all of us were very excited．We cheered
．______
happily when we got the top．We had our lunch there
．_______
and had enjoyed ourselves very much．Unfortunately，
．________
when we walked down the hill，We were caught by
．_______
a rain．We remained calmly，shared umbrellas and
8．_______
raincoats and walked carefully．Finally we both reached
．_______
the parking lot safely．In spite of the unexpecting rain
．______
and wind，we had a good time．
. morning前加the 考查冠词的用法。注意习语in the morning。
. late改为later
考查副词比较级的用法。此处表示“迟到了一小时”，故用比较级。
. 正确 经分析本句正确。
. and改为but
考查句间的逻辑关系。根据文意此处为转折关系。
. got后加to或got改为reached
考查动词的用法。此处the top作宾语，故改为got to 或及物动词reached。
. 去掉had
考查动词时态。根据句中的and可知，前后是并列关系，时态应一致。
. by改为in
考查介词的用法。解题关键：掌握动词catch的用法，be caught in意为：遭遇。。。。
8. calmlycalm 考查形容词的用法。此处remain为系动词，其后接形容词。
. both改为all
考查代词的用法。根据文意没有两者的范围。
. unexpecting改为unexpected考查分词的用法。此处unexpected意为：意料之外的。
短文改错N
Of all my teachers ,Mr. Moore is the one who impress me
1_____
most. He is 34, so he looks young for his age. And he’s one of
2______
the most popular teacher in our school. Mr. Moore pays more
3______
attention to his way of teaching, comparing with other teachers.
4_______
He tries different ways to make his classes actively and lively.
5______
In his opinion, we should not only know “what”, but understand
6______
“why”. So, instead giving us answers immediately, he encourages us
7______
to think by myself whenever he puts forward questions. With his help,
8______
we’ve learned from how to settle problems. He leads us to such a
9_____
wonderful
world of “why” as we all admire and respect him.
10_____
【参考答案及解析】
1. impress改为impresses考查主谓一致。此处先行词one前有the，故其后定语从句的谓语动词应和one保持一致，用单数。
. so改为but 考查句间的逻辑关系。根据语境此处应为转折关系。
. teacher 改为teachers 考查名词的单复数。根据句中的one of 可知，后面的名词应用复数形式。
. comparing改为compared 考查固定短语。和。。。相比应用compared with/to。
. actively改为active 考查形容词的用法。此处make 后接形容词作宾补。
. 正确
经分析本句正确。
. instead后加of考查固定短语。根据后面的giving可知，其前应用介词of。
8. myself改为ourselves 考查代词指代一致。根据文意反身代词应和us相一致。故用ourselves。
. 去掉from
考查动词的用法。learn from意为：向。。。学习，此处不合文意。
. as改为that 考查固定句型。此处考查such。。。that。。。句型。
Dear sir,
Thank you very much for your letter. I pleased to hear 76._____________
about your holiday and the people you meet in Rome. It
77. _____________
sounded great fun and how I wish I could have been with
78. _____________
you. Thank you also for the stamps you sent them to me 79._____________
for my collection. Most of them were those what I had
80. _____________
been expecting for long. You said by your letter that 81. _____________
you wish to have some photos of me. Sorry to tell you, 82. _____________
I have little photos good enough to send to others. 83. _____________
Yet I will send you a photo of your family. Please 84. _____________
write soon and tell me what you are getting on with 85. _____________
your college life.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Jason
【参考答案】
76.I后加am
77. meet →met
78.√
79.去掉them
80.what→that或去掉those
81. by →in
82.wish→wished
83.little→few
84.your→my
84.what→how
【短文改错】
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to thank you with your kind help.
1___
Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in
2_____
English. My pronunciation was terribly. I could
3____
only speak a few words. But one and a half year later,
4____
I now think English fun to learn. I got a lot from your
5___
encouraging words. I will always remember what you
6____
said, “If you try to, you can be No 1 !”I hope you`ve
7、___
had pleasant journey home and will come to china
8、___
again sometimes in the future. I will write again
9____
and send you the photos we take together
10____
【参考答案】
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to thank you with your kind help.
for
Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in
no
English .My pronunciation was terribly .I could
terrible
only speak a few words. But one and a half year later,
years
I now think English ∧fun to learn.I got a lot from your
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encouraging words .I will always remember what you
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said, “If you try to, you can be No 1 !”I hope you`ve
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had ∧pleasant journey home and will come to china
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again sometimes in the future. I will write again sometime
and send you the photos we take together
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【2024高考复习】阅读理解Eight days for just ￥12,000
Departure time：May，October 2024
Includes：
●
Return flights from 6 China’s airports to Naples
●
Return airport to hotel transport
●
Seven nights’ accommodation at the 3star Hotel Nice
●
Breakfast
● The service of guides
● Government taxes
Join us for a wonderful holiday in one of the Europe’s most wonderful corners—Naples in Italy if you want to have a nice time in a beautiful small quiet place.The ancient Romans called the city “happy land” with attractive coastline，colorful towns，splendid views and the warm Mediterranean Sea.Your best choice for a truly memorable holiday!
Choose between the peaceful traditional villages of Sant’ Agata，setting on a hillside six miles away from Sorrento，or the more lively and wellknown international resort town of Sorrento，with wonderful views over the Bay of Naples.
Breathtaking
scenery，famous
sights
and
European restaurants everywhere.From the mysterious Isle of Capri to the hunting ruins of Pompeii，and from the unforgettable “Amalfi Drive” to the delightful resorts (度假胜地) of Positano，Sorrento and Ravello，the area is a feast for the eyes！Join us，and you won’t be disappointed!
Price based on two tourists sharing a double room at the Hotel Nice.A single room，another ￥2,000.A group of ten college students，￥10,000 for each.
Like to know more？Telephone Newmarket Air Holidays Ltd.on：0845 226 7788(All calls charge at local rates)．
【语篇解读】 优美的海岸，缤纷的城镇，绚烂的风景，温暖的海水……神奇的意大利之旅将带给你难忘的享受、永恒的记忆。还在犹豫什么呢？赶快报名参加吧！
1．All the following are included in the price of ￥12,000 EXCEPT________.
A．transport between airport and hotel
B．telephone calls made by tourists
C．the service of guides to tourists
D．a double room for every two tourists
解析 细节理解题。根据“Includes”中的“Return airport to hotel transport”“The service of guides”和倒数第二段第一句“Price based on two tourists sharing a double room at the Hotel Nice.”可知，A、C、D均包括在内，但不包括游客打电话的费用，故选B。
答案 B
2．If you don’t like sharing a room with others，you have to pay________.
A．￥12,000
B．￥10,000
C．￥2,000
D．￥14,000
解析 推理判断题。根据倒数第二段中的“A single room，another ￥2,000.”可知住单间需要另外支付2 000元，由此可推断游客需要在原来的价格上再多付2 000元，即14 000元。
答案 D 3．If you like to visit historical sites，which of the following is your best choice?
A．Amalfi. B．Sant’ Agata.
C．Pompeii. D．Sorrento.
解析 推理判断题。根据倒数第三段第二句中的“the hunting ruins of Pompeii”可推知意大利古城庞贝是狩猎遗址，由此可推断它是历史名胜。
答案 C
4．Who is the advertisement intended for?
A．Potential tourists. B．College students.
C．Government officers.
D
Old people
解析 推理判断题。结合文章中提到的费用、出发日期、服务项目、景点介绍以及联系方式等可推测本文的宣传对象是潜在的游客。
答案 A
阅读理解Parents are creating an “I want it now” generation by indulging children’s every demand at Christmas，say experts.Youngsters are becoming increasingly selfish，claim the education analysts.
Consumersavvy children are forcing their families into racking up huge debts and risk becoming spoilt and dissatisfied in the future.
Behavioural consultant Chris Calland said，“Parents are desperate to make Christmas into a magical fairy tale for their kids.There’s nothing wrong with that as such.The problem arises when it means always giving into all our children’s demands—even if they are beyond our price range or not ageappropriate.”
Ms Calland，who runs “Santa Says No”
style sessions with
colleague Nicky Hutchinson，added，“Many of us go into so much debt providing the gifts our children want that we spend the rest of the year paying off the bills.Yet so often the parcels we’ve carefully wrapped，once opened，are just pushed away because the very thing our little boy or girl was once so desperate for，they have now lost interest in.”
Ms Calland and Ms Hutchinson have drawn up a list of guidelines to help parents manage their offspring’s Christmas lists this year.They say that adults can actually improve their relationships with their children by resisting “pester (纠缠) power”．
Ms Calland said，“All too often we say yes because we want an easier life when the fact is that we’re only building up problems for the future.We are helping create a generation of youngsters who are blind to the needs of others and the necessity of hard work.”
“Children learn fast—if we sometimes change our mind，they quickly realise it might be worth lying on the floor and screaming for it.Make sure you and your partner are working together on this.Be consistent.And try not to get caught up in competition with other families or friends.”
【语篇解读】 本文是时文阅读。由于父母对孩子圣诞节的要求无限制地满足，产生了“I want it now”一代。
5．What is the main problem with the “I want it now” generation?
A．They are quite selfcentered.
B．They like to live in fairy tales.
C．They waste a lot of money on gifts.
D．They can’t keep their interest in gifts.
解析 细节理解题。从第一段最后一句中的“Youngsters are becoming increasingly selfish”以及倒数第二段中的“a generation of youngsters who are blind to the needs of others”可知“ I want it now”一代很自私、以自我为中心。
答案 A
6．What is probably the aim of “Santa Says No” style sessions?
A．To advise on how to wrap gifts properly.
