12月英语四级作文改革趋势解析
从2023年6月英语四级考试开始，作文题型的命题特点向考研作文出题方式靠拢。这预示着国家希望更多的准研究生英语方面的能力能达到四级水平，使四级考试和考研考试有个流畅的过度和衔接，充分将考研写作与四级写作结合，不同之处在于四级写作字数少，难度上低于考研写作。
例如：
2023年6月四级考试作文漫画简述：一个老师在黑板上教数学乘法口诀，如：2X2=4 2x3=6 学生在听课，其中一个学生说：no offense, by the time in the job market, it is out of dated. 以此作文。首先简要描述，然后就the importance of learning basic skill 写一篇more than 120 words but not more than 180 words. 图画反映的主题：大学生在校从商，创业，好不好?是学业重要，还是社会经历重要?
范文：
Nowadays, college students going in for business become more and more popular in campus, even many college students think that is very fashionable. As to this trend, different people have different views.
For me, every coin has two sides, thus college students going in for business has advantages as well as disadvantages, but advantages outweigh the disadvantages. As a college student, I think taking part in business when we still in college has following advantages. Firstly, doing business can develop our communication and management abilities. From purchase to sell, students must communicate with many different people, such as wholesalers and customers, so we can learn many communication skills from this process. Students also have to make some market researches to decide what we will go in for; we should find out wholesalers who can cooperate stably with us; how we set price; how we promote and so on. See, students communication and management skills can be developed from above things.
四级作文评分标准：
①本题所占卷面总分值15%。
②阅卷标准分为五等：
以2为首项，公差为3的等差数列。
公式为An=A1+3
2分，5分，8分，11分，和14分。
攻略：就一句话，在文章中，最关键的地方要埋伏着亮点，切忌犯愚蠢的错误。
愚蠢的错误包括：
时态，名词单复数，主谓不一致
关键的地方包括：开头，结尾和段落首句。
如何才能的高分呢?
包含所有内容要点;
使用丰富的语法结构和词汇;
语言自然流畅，语法错误极少;
有效地采用了多种衔接手法，文字连贯，层次清晰;
格式和语域恰当贴切。
对目标读者完全产生了预期的效果。
打动阅卷人靠什么?
1. 文章脉络清晰
1.1 观点鲜明的开头
1.2 紧扣主题的结尾
1.3 由主题句引导的衔接自然的中间段落
2. 段落衔接畅顺
2.1 重复词：概括;直接;齐头
检验金子的是烈火，检验女人的是金子，检验男人的是女人。
The proof of gold is fire. The proof of woman is gold. The proof of man is a woman。
南北战争前，美国称邦联南北战争后，美国称联邦。
Before the civil war, the United States are; After the civil war, the United States is。
2.2 序数词
First of all,
To begin/ start with,
In the first place,
Furthermore,
Moreover,
What is more,
Finally,
Eventually,
Last but not least,
2.3关联词：递进;转折;因果
What is more,
in addition,
but,
because
3. 使用较高级的词汇和语法结构
3.1 爱心是情感的力量，不论我们周围的世界多么黑暗，爱心都能支撑我们。
Love is emotional strength, which can support us no matter how dark the world around us becomes。
3.2 对于世界而讲，你也许只是一个人;但对于我而言，你是我的整个世界。
To the world, you may be one person. But to me, you may be the whole world。
4. 书写优雅美观
奖励分+基准分
奖励分给分原则
4.1. 正确正规可读
4.2. 非正规标记不能写
4.3. 避免缩写
最后，祝同学们能在2023年12月英语四级考试中取得好成绩!
从2023年6月英语四级考试开始，作文题型的命题特点向考研作文出题方式靠拢。这预示着国家希望更多的准研究生英语方面的能力能达到四级水平，使四级考试和考研考试有个流畅的过度和衔接，充分将考研写作与四级写作结合，不同之处在于四级写作字数少，难度上低于考研写作。
例如：
2023年6月四级考试作文漫画简述：一个老师在黑板上教数学乘法口诀，如：2X2=4 2x3=6 学生在听课，其中一个学生说：no offense, by the time in the job market, it is out of dated. 以此作文。首先简要描述，然后就the importance of learning basic skill 写一篇more than 120 words but not more than 180 words. 图画反映的主题：大学生在校从商，创业，好不好?是学业重要，还是社会经历重要?
范文：
Nowadays, college students going in for business become more and more popular in campus, even many college students think that is very fashionable. As to this trend, different people have different views.
For me, every coin has two sides, thus college students going in for business has advantages as well as disadvantages, but advantages outweigh the disadvantages. As a college student, I think taking part in business when we still in college has following advantages. Firstly, doing business can develop our communication and management abilities. From purchase to sell, students must communicate with many different people, such as wholesalers and customers, so we can learn many communication skills from this process. Students also have to make some market researches to decide what we will go in for; we should find out wholesalers who can cooperate stably with us; how we set price; how we promote and so on. See, students communication and management skills can be developed from above things.
四级作文评分标准：
①本题所占卷面总分值15%。
②阅卷标准分为五等：
以2为首项，公差为3的等差数列。
公式为An=A1+3
2分，5分，8分，11分，和14分。
攻略：就一句话，在文章中，最关键的地方要埋伏着亮点，切忌犯愚蠢的错误。
愚蠢的错误包括：
时态，名词单复数，主谓不一致
关键的地方包括：开头，结尾和段落首句。
如何才能的高分呢?
包含所有内容要点;
使用丰富的语法结构和词汇;
语言自然流畅，语法错误极少;
有效地采用了多种衔接手法，文字连贯，层次清晰;
格式和语域恰当贴切。
对目标读者完全产生了预期的效果。
打动阅卷人靠什么?
1. 文章脉络清晰
1.1 观点鲜明的开头
1.2 紧扣主题的结尾
1.3 由主题句引导的衔接自然的中间段落
2. 段落衔接畅顺
2.1 重复词：概括;直接;齐头
检验金子的是烈火，检验女人的是金子，检验男人的是女人。
The proof of gold is fire. The proof of woman is gold. The proof of man is a woman。
南北战争前，美国称邦联南北战争后，美国称联邦。
Before the civil war, the United States are; After the civil war, the United States is。
2.2 序数词
First of all,
To begin/ start with,
In the first place,
Furthermore,
Moreover,
What is more,
Finally,
Eventually,
Last but not least,
2.3关联词：递进;转折;因果
What is more,
in addition,
but,
because
3. 使用较高级的词汇和语法结构
3.1 爱心是情感的力量，不论我们周围的世界多么黑暗，爱心都能支撑我们。
Love is emotional strength, which can support us no matter how dark the world around us becomes。
3.2 对于世界而讲，你也许只是一个人;但对于我而言，你是我的整个世界。
To the world, you may be one person. But to me, you may be the whole world。
4. 书写优雅美观
奖励分+基准分
奖励分给分原则
4.1. 正确正规可读
4.2. 非正规标记不能写
4.3. 避免缩写
最后，祝同学们能在2023年12月英语四级考试中取得好成绩!
