GRE写作提纲举例指导（16）

　　16Although many people think that the luxu ries and conveniences of contemporary life are entirely harmless, in fact, they actually prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.

　　部分同意

　　1、现代生活的便利确实使人们的对技术的依赖性越来越强

　　depend on automobile for travel; depend on calculat or for calculation; depend on computer for writing documents; depend on Internet for in formation

　　2、但是现代生活的便利也给人们带来了挑战，使变得 intellectually strong to creat more convenience, further improvve technology develop to help make life more efficient; people are expected for more productivity

　　3、工作的便利使人能够独立完成复杂任务 national survey analysis

　　16T Although many people think that the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life are entirely harmless, in fact, they actually prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.

　　 尽管很多人认为现在奢侈安逸的生活是无害的，但实际上这样的生活阻止了人们培养坚强独立的性格

　　① I concede 有些时候有些人在得到安逸生活以后就不思进取了。Davy, 晚年没有什么成就。

　　② 但是追求安逸的生活是科技发展和人类进步的动力。人们追求更多的休闲时间，从而有了更高效的工作。

　　③ 如果缺乏现在高科技所提供的舒适条件，有些研究成果出不来。 如：生物学领域、军事领域 都要求

　　sophisticated apparatus

　　Without modern facilities, we could hardly do anything.

　　While, without such modern facilities, can we become truly strong and independent individuals?It is important for us to realize the limitation of mo dern facilities and that potential danger which will be aroused if we lost our domination over modern facilities and too rely on them.

　　16Although many people think that the luxu ries and conveniences of contemporary life are entirely harmless, in fact, they actually prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.

　　部分同意

　　1、现代生活的便利确实使人们的对技术的依赖性越来越强

　　depend on automobile for travel; depend on calculat or for calculation; depend on computer for writing documents; depend on Internet for in formation

　　2、但是现代生活的便利也给人们带来了挑战，使变得 intellectually strong to creat more convenience, further improvve technology develop to help make life more efficient; people are expected for more productivity

　　3、工作的便利使人能够独立完成复杂任务 national survey analysis

　　16T Although many people think that the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life are entirely harmless, in fact, they actually prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.

　　 尽管很多人认为现在奢侈安逸的生活是无害的，但实际上这样的生活阻止了人们培养坚强独立的性格

　　① I concede 有些时候有些人在得到安逸生活以后就不思进取了。Davy, 晚年没有什么成就。

　　② 但是追求安逸的生活是科技发展和人类进步的动力。人们追求更多的休闲时间，从而有了更高效的工作。

　　③ 如果缺乏现在高科技所提供的舒适条件，有些研究成果出不来。 如：生物学领域、军事领域 都要求

　　sophisticated apparatus

　　Without modern facilities, we could hardly do anything.

　　While, without such modern facilities, can we become truly strong and independent individuals?It is important for us to realize the limitation of mo dern facilities and that potential danger which will be aroused if we lost our domination over modern facilities and too rely on them.