gre argument145提纲分析汇总
前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析,希望对考生在攻破gre issue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总,让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。
题目题材:生命科学、保健
gre argument 145题目:
A new study collected data that shows that people who snore are more likely to gain weight than are people who do not snore. It is well known that many people who snore also stop breathing frequently during the night for a few seconds, a condition called sleep apnea. The interruption of breathing wakes the personoften so briefly that the waking goes unnoticedand can leave the person too tired during the day to exercise. Anyone who snores, therefore, should try to eat less than the average person and to exercise more.
提纲:
We do not know what fraction of people who snore actually suffer from sleep apnea.
People who suffer from sleep apnea may actually exercise during the day although they are tired.
The author fails to illustrate the actual effect of sleep apnea, thus the assumption that people who suffer from it will necessarily be tired is unwarranted.
The assumption that all people who snore will necessarily eat more and exercise less than normal is unwarranted.
The authors assumption that people who snore should exercise more is contradictory to the assumption that those people are too tired to exercise.
No evidence could illustrate that eating less could effectively result in reducing weight.
The author ignores many other factors that would contribute to snore and gaining weight.
The author fails to consider the possibility that obesity could reversely result in people snore.
注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。
无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。
前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析,希望对考生在攻破gre issue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总,让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。
题目题材:生命科学、保健
gre argument 145题目:
A new study collected data that shows that people who snore are more likely to gain weight than are people who do not snore. It is well known that many people who snore also stop breathing frequently during the night for a few seconds, a condition called sleep apnea. The interruption of breathing wakes the personoften so briefly that the waking goes unnoticedand can leave the person too tired during the day to exercise. Anyone who snores, therefore, should try to eat less than the average person and to exercise more.
提纲:
We do not know what fraction of people who snore actually suffer from sleep apnea.
People who suffer from sleep apnea may actually exercise during the day although they are tired.
The author fails to illustrate the actual effect of sleep apnea, thus the assumption that people who suffer from it will necessarily be tired is unwarranted.
The assumption that all people who snore will necessarily eat more and exercise less than normal is unwarranted.
The authors assumption that people who snore should exercise more is contradictory to the assumption that those people are too tired to exercise.
No evidence could illustrate that eating less could effectively result in reducing weight.
The author ignores many other factors that would contribute to snore and gaining weight.
The author fails to consider the possibility that obesity could reversely result in people snore.
注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。
无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。