09年高考英语作文(广东卷)
首先,我们一起看一下今年的基础写作题目。
第一节 基础写作(共1小题,满分15分)
你是校报小记者,最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况:
时间:上周末
对象:眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授
主体:我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题
基本信息:(1)发生率:略高于50%
(2)人数:世界第一
专家解读:(1)原因:很复杂
(2)治疗:没有一种药物能治愈近视
(3)建议:不要过度用眼;多参加户外活动
(4)特别提示:如何握笔也和近视有关
[写作内容]
根据以上情况写一篇采访报道,并包括如下内容:
1. 采访的时间、对象和主题;
2. 中小学生近视的发生率及人数;
3. 专家解读。
[写作要求]
只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
专家点评:
今年的基础写作主要有以下特点:
一、 作文话题从学生实际生活中采点
今年基础写要求学生用5句话写一篇关于中小学学生近视眼的校报采访报道。这个话题真正的做到话题来源于学生实际生活。近视眼是每个校园所必不可少的现象,是学生校园生活得隐形热点。因此今年的基础写作题目让每个学生都有话可说。
二、 作文话题选材贴近新课程标准理念
作文话题在引用了医生建议的同时也在暗地里给考生提示该如何保护眼睛。单从这一点来讲,今年的基础写作题目成功的做到了时刻关注每一个学生的健康成长,成功的把新课程标准理念注入到学生的考卷中。
三、 作文的话题具有极高的深思熟虑性
考试的作文话题只有保证每一个考生都熟悉才能真正的做到命题的公平合理性。今年的作文话题从每一所学校学生的实际生活中采点,彻底的革除了城乡考生因对某一个话题了解程度的不同而导致的不合理性。这也说明今年基础写作题目的命题人经过了多方面的深思熟虑。
09年广东省满分作文:
Should tourists take photos with animals?
Koalas in wildlife parks cant fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The movement is thinking to make the tourists behaviour illegal to protect the animals.
When people are visiting wildlife parks, they like to take photographs with animals. Reasons for this are varied. Some people may think taking photos with animals are funny in contrast with taking photos with other persons. Others may think that it will be an interesting experience to take photos with animals during their visit.
If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing with me. My life would be greatly influenced and I wouldnt feel happy at all! I think I should have some private space and time to relax myself.
However, I dont agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals. Tourists pay for tickets to visit the wildlife park and it will be a pity for them if they cant have a photo with an animal. Perhaps wildlife parks can set some special time, during which tourists can take photos with animals. It can both satisfy tourists and protect the animals.
首先,我们一起看一下今年的基础写作题目。
第一节 基础写作(共1小题,满分15分)
你是校报小记者,最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况:
时间:上周末
对象:眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授
主体:我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题
基本信息:(1)发生率:略高于50%
(2)人数:世界第一
专家解读:(1)原因:很复杂
(2)治疗:没有一种药物能治愈近视
(3)建议:不要过度用眼;多参加户外活动
(4)特别提示:如何握笔也和近视有关
[写作内容]
根据以上情况写一篇采访报道,并包括如下内容:
1. 采访的时间、对象和主题;
2. 中小学生近视的发生率及人数;
3. 专家解读。
[写作要求]
只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
专家点评:
今年的基础写作主要有以下特点:
一、 作文话题从学生实际生活中采点
今年基础写要求学生用5句话写一篇关于中小学学生近视眼的校报采访报道。这个话题真正的做到话题来源于学生实际生活。近视眼是每个校园所必不可少的现象,是学生校园生活得隐形热点。因此今年的基础写作题目让每个学生都有话可说。
二、 作文话题选材贴近新课程标准理念
作文话题在引用了医生建议的同时也在暗地里给考生提示该如何保护眼睛。单从这一点来讲,今年的基础写作题目成功的做到了时刻关注每一个学生的健康成长,成功的把新课程标准理念注入到学生的考卷中。
三、 作文的话题具有极高的深思熟虑性
考试的作文话题只有保证每一个考生都熟悉才能真正的做到命题的公平合理性。今年的作文话题从每一所学校学生的实际生活中采点,彻底的革除了城乡考生因对某一个话题了解程度的不同而导致的不合理性。这也说明今年基础写作题目的命题人经过了多方面的深思熟虑。
09年广东省满分作文:
Should tourists take photos with animals?
Koalas in wildlife parks cant fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The movement is thinking to make the tourists behaviour illegal to protect the animals.
When people are visiting wildlife parks, they like to take photographs with animals. Reasons for this are varied. Some people may think taking photos with animals are funny in contrast with taking photos with other persons. Others may think that it will be an interesting experience to take photos with animals during their visit.
If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing with me. My life would be greatly influenced and I wouldnt feel happy at all! I think I should have some private space and time to relax myself.
However, I dont agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals. Tourists pay for tickets to visit the wildlife park and it will be a pity for them if they cant have a photo with an animal. Perhaps wildlife parks can set some special time, during which tourists can take photos with animals. It can both satisfy tourists and protect the animals.