2024届高考英语一轮循环写作周周练：第5周 整齐和谐的并列句（新人教版含解析）
第五周 整齐和谐的并列句
并列句是用连词把两个或两个以上的简单句连接起来，在这一句型中需要注意连接并列主语时，有些句型采取“就近原则”。
一、常见并列句的类型及并列连词
类型 连词
并列关系
(递进关系) and, both ... and ..., not only ... but also ..., neither ... nor ...
转折关系 but, yet, whereas
选择关系 or, otherwise, or else, either ...
or ..., not ... but ...
因果关系 for, so, therefore, thus
对比关系 while
①Since then, maths has become one of my favorite subjects, and I have also made rapid progress in maths.(2024·湖南高考书面表达)
从那时起，数学就成为我特别喜爱的学科之一，而且我在数学上进步也很快。
②All the classmates are friendly and kind, so you don’t need to worry about the difficulty.(2024·天津高考书面表达)
所有的同学都非常友好和善良，因此你没必要担心有什么困难。
③As middle school students, we’re not familiar with foreign cultures, while Chinese culture isn’t fit to appear in an English newspaper.(2024·上海高考满分作文)
作为中学生，我们不熟悉外国文化，而中国的文化也不适合出现在英语报刊中。
[即时演练] 用适当的并列连词填空
1．Some choose to avoid them while others decide to deal with them.(2024·福建高考满分作文)
2．First, my English is very good and I’m openminded and warmhearted, so I’m getting along well with everyone.(2024·陕西高考书面表达)
3．It must have rained last night, for it is wet all over.
二、并列句的常用句型
1．both ...and ...既……又……
When exposed to stress, in whatever form, all of us react both mentally and physically.
当面临压力时，不管以什么形式，我们所有的人都会从精神和身体上作出反应。
2．either ...or ...或者……或者……；不是……就是……
People can either give them as gifts or hang them in their houses.(2024·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)
人们可以把它们当做礼物送出去，或者挂在自己的房间里。
3．neither ...nor ...既不……也不……
In autumn, it’s neither too hot nor too cold.(2024·天津高考标准范文)
秋天，天气既不太热也不太冷。
4．not only ...but (also) ...不仅……而且……
Not only should you share your study experience with them, but (also) you must keep your heart open to them.
你不但要和他们分享你的学习经验，而且一定要向他们敞开心扉。
5．not ...but ...不是……，而是……
It is not how much we do but how much love we put into what we do that benefits our work most.
对我们的工作最有益的，不是我们做了多少，而是我们把多少爱投入进去。
6．...while/whereas ……而，……却
Some people believe smoking is harmful to health while others consider it is helpful reducing working pressure.
有些人认为吸烟有害健康，而另一些人则认为它有助于减轻工作压力。
7．祈使句/名词词组＋and/or/otherwise＋陈述句
(1)祈使句＋and＋陈述句(祈使句相当于一个条件状语从句，and后面的句子相当于一个表示结果的主句)
Work hard and you will succeed.(＝ If you work hard, you will succeed.)
努力学习，你就会成功。
(2)名词词组＋and＋陈述句(名词词组相当于一个条件状语从句，其中常含有more, another等词)
Another try, and you’ll achieve a success.
再试一次，你就会取得成功。
(3)祈使句＋or/otherwise＋陈述句
Seize the chance, or you’ll regret.
抓住这次机会，否则你会后悔的。
(4)名词词组＋or/otherwise＋陈述句
More healthy food, or you’ll break down sooner or later.
多吃健康食品，不然你的身体迟早会垮掉。
8．...when ...……这时……
(1)sb. was doing sth. when ...某人正在做某事，这时……
Last Monday, I was walking in the street when I suddenly saw an old man fall off his bicycle. (2024·浙江高考满分作文)
上周一，我正在街上散步，这时突然看到一位老人从自行车上摔下来了。
(2)sb. was about to do sth. when ...某人正要做某事，这时……
Lily was about to study when someone knocked at the door.
莉莉正要学习，这时有人敲门。
(3)sb. had just done sth. when ...某人刚做完某事，这时……
I had just finished sweeping the floor when the telephone rang.
我刚刚拖完地，这时电话铃响了。
[即时演练] 用并列句补全句子
1．我们正在吃饭，这时突然发生了火灾。
We were_having_dinner_when a fire broke out.
2．正像我们所知道的，生气不仅有害健康，而且还严重影响人们之间的关系。
As we know, getting angry not_only does harm to one’s health but_(also)
has a bad effect on the relationship between people.
3．是你所说的话而不是你所做的事使你的同学感到生气。
It is not what you had done but what you had said that annoyed your classmates.
[综合演练提能]
Ⅰ.用适当的并列连词填空
1．Stand over there and you’ll be able to see the oil painting better.
2．Start out right away, or/otherwise you’ll miss the first train.
3．I worked hard at English and devoted all my spare time to practicing it, but I failed to pass the midterm examination.
4．About 9：00 last night, I was busy preparing for my tomorrow’s test when suddenly loud noises came into my room.
5．Half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys favor sports stars.
6．Not_only can students improve their writing ability in this way but_(also) they can strengthen their selfconfidence.
Ⅱ.用并列句补全句子
1．首先，作为一名学生，最重要的是学习，因此你们所有人都有必要在学习中建立一个有效的方式。
Firstly, as a student, the most important thing is to study, so_it_is_necessary for all of you to build an effective method in your study.(2024·江西高考满分作文)
2．我们正打算动身，突然天下起雨来了。
We were_about_to_set_off_when it suddenly began to rain.
3．找方法经常表扬你的孩子，你就会发现他们会向你敞开心扉。
Find_ways_to_praise_your_children_often,and you’ll find they will open their hearts to you.
4．它不仅给了我们接近大自然的机会，而且能让我们在学习之余得到放松。
It not_only_gave_us_a_chance_to_get_close_to_nature,_but also gave us relaxation from our study.(2024·江西高考满分作文)
5．因此，从现在起，让我们不要在一些不重要的事情上浪费时间，而要经常与我们的父母进行推心置腹的谈话。
So, from now on, let’s not_waste_our_time_on_unimportant_things_but have a hearttoheart chat with our parents once in a while.(2024·重庆高考满分作文)
Ⅱ.请按以下内容要点写一封电子邮件，尽可能多地使用并列句。
假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。现在请根据以下要点给他回一封100词左右的电子邮件：
1．未及时回复的原因；
2．你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。
参考范文：
Dear Tom，
How is everything going? I feel terribly sorry for I’ve missed answering your letter in time. You know, I’ve been preparing for the final exams these days, so I forgot to write back. In your letter, you asked me for my plans on summer vacation. Now, I am writing to tell you some specific details.
Overall, three things will make my summer vacation meaningful. To start with, doing a parttime job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman. Not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation, in order to enjoy appealing scenery and make more friends. What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will help me make a great contribution to the society, and enrich my life.
I sincerely apologize again for my delay in answering your email. By the way, what’s your plan to spend your summer vacation? I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
第五周 整齐和谐的并列句
并列句是用连词把两个或两个以上的简单句连接起来，在这一句型中需要注意连接并列主语时，有些句型采取“就近原则”。
一、常见并列句的类型及并列连词
类型 连词
并列关系
(递进关系) and, both ... and ..., not only ... but also ..., neither ... nor ...
转折关系 but, yet, whereas
选择关系 or, otherwise, or else, either ...
or ..., not ... but ...
因果关系 for, so, therefore, thus
对比关系 while
①Since then, maths has become one of my favorite subjects, and I have also made rapid progress in maths.(2024·湖南高考书面表达)
从那时起，数学就成为我特别喜爱的学科之一，而且我在数学上进步也很快。
②All the classmates are friendly and kind, so you don’t need to worry about the difficulty.(2024·天津高考书面表达)
所有的同学都非常友好和善良，因此你没必要担心有什么困难。
③As middle school students, we’re not familiar with foreign cultures, while Chinese culture isn’t fit to appear in an English newspaper.(2024·上海高考满分作文)
作为中学生，我们不熟悉外国文化，而中国的文化也不适合出现在英语报刊中。
[即时演练] 用适当的并列连词填空
1．Some choose to avoid them while others decide to deal with them.(2024·福建高考满分作文)
2．First, my English is very good and I’m openminded and warmhearted, so I’m getting along well with everyone.(2024·陕西高考书面表达)
3．It must have rained last night, for it is wet all over.
二、并列句的常用句型
1．both ...and ...既……又……
When exposed to stress, in whatever form, all of us react both mentally and physically.
当面临压力时，不管以什么形式，我们所有的人都会从精神和身体上作出反应。
2．either ...or ...或者……或者……；不是……就是……
People can either give them as gifts or hang them in their houses.(2024·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)
人们可以把它们当做礼物送出去，或者挂在自己的房间里。
3．neither ...nor ...既不……也不……
In autumn, it’s neither too hot nor too cold.(2024·天津高考标准范文)
秋天，天气既不太热也不太冷。
4．not only ...but (also) ...不仅……而且……
Not only should you share your study experience with them, but (also) you must keep your heart open to them.
你不但要和他们分享你的学习经验，而且一定要向他们敞开心扉。
5．not ...but ...不是……，而是……
It is not how much we do but how much love we put into what we do that benefits our work most.
对我们的工作最有益的，不是我们做了多少，而是我们把多少爱投入进去。
6．...while/whereas ……而，……却
Some people believe smoking is harmful to health while others consider it is helpful reducing working pressure.
有些人认为吸烟有害健康，而另一些人则认为它有助于减轻工作压力。
7．祈使句/名词词组＋and/or/otherwise＋陈述句
(1)祈使句＋and＋陈述句(祈使句相当于一个条件状语从句，and后面的句子相当于一个表示结果的主句)
Work hard and you will succeed.(＝ If you work hard, you will succeed.)
努力学习，你就会成功。
(2)名词词组＋and＋陈述句(名词词组相当于一个条件状语从句，其中常含有more, another等词)
Another try, and you’ll achieve a success.
再试一次，你就会取得成功。
(3)祈使句＋or/otherwise＋陈述句
Seize the chance, or you’ll regret.
抓住这次机会，否则你会后悔的。
(4)名词词组＋or/otherwise＋陈述句
More healthy food, or you’ll break down sooner or later.
多吃健康食品，不然你的身体迟早会垮掉。
8．...when ...……这时……
(1)sb. was doing sth. when ...某人正在做某事，这时……
Last Monday, I was walking in the street when I suddenly saw an old man fall off his bicycle. (2024·浙江高考满分作文)
上周一，我正在街上散步，这时突然看到一位老人从自行车上摔下来了。
(2)sb. was about to do sth. when ...某人正要做某事，这时……
Lily was about to study when someone knocked at the door.
莉莉正要学习，这时有人敲门。
(3)sb. had just done sth. when ...某人刚做完某事，这时……
I had just finished sweeping the floor when the telephone rang.
我刚刚拖完地，这时电话铃响了。
[即时演练] 用并列句补全句子
1．我们正在吃饭，这时突然发生了火灾。
We were_having_dinner_when a fire broke out.
2．正像我们所知道的，生气不仅有害健康，而且还严重影响人们之间的关系。
As we know, getting angry not_only does harm to one’s health but_(also)
has a bad effect on the relationship between people.
3．是你所说的话而不是你所做的事使你的同学感到生气。
It is not what you had done but what you had said that annoyed your classmates.
[综合演练提能]
Ⅰ.用适当的并列连词填空
1．Stand over there and you’ll be able to see the oil painting better.
2．Start out right away, or/otherwise you’ll miss the first train.
3．I worked hard at English and devoted all my spare time to practicing it, but I failed to pass the midterm examination.
4．About 9：00 last night, I was busy preparing for my tomorrow’s test when suddenly loud noises came into my room.
5．Half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys favor sports stars.
6．Not_only can students improve their writing ability in this way but_(also) they can strengthen their selfconfidence.
Ⅱ.用并列句补全句子
1．首先，作为一名学生，最重要的是学习，因此你们所有人都有必要在学习中建立一个有效的方式。
Firstly, as a student, the most important thing is to study, so_it_is_necessary for all of you to build an effective method in your study.(2024·江西高考满分作文)
2．我们正打算动身，突然天下起雨来了。
We were_about_to_set_off_when it suddenly began to rain.
3．找方法经常表扬你的孩子，你就会发现他们会向你敞开心扉。
Find_ways_to_praise_your_children_often,and you’ll find they will open their hearts to you.
4．它不仅给了我们接近大自然的机会，而且能让我们在学习之余得到放松。
It not_only_gave_us_a_chance_to_get_close_to_nature,_but also gave us relaxation from our study.(2024·江西高考满分作文)
5．因此，从现在起，让我们不要在一些不重要的事情上浪费时间，而要经常与我们的父母进行推心置腹的谈话。
So, from now on, let’s not_waste_our_time_on_unimportant_things_but have a hearttoheart chat with our parents once in a while.(2024·重庆高考满分作文)
Ⅱ.请按以下内容要点写一封电子邮件，尽可能多地使用并列句。
假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。现在请根据以下要点给他回一封100词左右的电子邮件：
1．未及时回复的原因；
2．你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。
参考范文：
Dear Tom，
How is everything going? I feel terribly sorry for I’ve missed answering your letter in time. You know, I’ve been preparing for the final exams these days, so I forgot to write back. In your letter, you asked me for my plans on summer vacation. Now, I am writing to tell you some specific details.
Overall, three things will make my summer vacation meaningful. To start with, doing a parttime job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman. Not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation, in order to enjoy appealing scenery and make more friends. What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will help me make a great contribution to the society, and enrich my life.
I sincerely apologize again for my delay in answering your email. By the way, what’s your plan to spend your summer vacation? I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
