2024年高考英语高效书面表达专题卷：3（含解析）
1．假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫（panda）,一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：
自我介绍；
2. 祝贺苏琳生日；
3. 感谢工作人员；
4. 索取苏琳三岁生日照。
注意：1、词数10-150左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3、开头语已为你写好。
书面表达 （满分25分）
现在，越来越多的学生使用电子词典，而非纸质词典。请你根据下表内容，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。
利 1. 方便、快捷
2. 提供读音
3. 附带其他功能
弊 1. 对眼睛有害
2. 电子产品对环境污染更大
你的看法
电子词典: e-dictionary
纸质词典: paper dictionary
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．最近你就高二模拟考试该偏难还是该偏易这个问题进行了一次调查。结合下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，介绍有关调查情况，并发表自己的看法。
赞成偏难，反对偏易 赞成偏易，反对偏难
喜欢挑战，越难越好；
有助于学生了解自己的薄弱环节，改进学习方法。 题目太难，学生会泄气，会害怕今后的高考；
题目容易，易得高分，获自信。
注意：
2.文章必须包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：高考College Entrance Examination
Recently I have made an investigation on whether a model-test paper for Senior two should be difficult or easy. Opinions are virous on this matter.
4．据世界卫生组织（WHO）统计，每年有200万人死于吸烟，60万人死于二手烟。为此，我国规定，从今年5月1 日起，严禁在公共场所吸烟。请你结合下面所给要点，以“Saying No to Smoking”为题，谈谈吸烟的危害。
1. 吸烟有害；
2. 吸烟导致咳嗽、肺癌等疾病；
3. 吸烟影响青少年成长；
4. 二手烟同样有害；
5. 你的态度：面对别人吸烟、给烟怎么办？
注意： 1. 词数：0词左右； 应覆盖所有要点；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；. 参考词汇：lung cancer肺癌; secondhand smoke二手烟
5．假设你是内蒙红星中学高三（1）班的班长李华， 得知英国学生Paul 作为交换生， 下学期将到你班学习。 请你根据以下提示， 给他写封邮件：
表示欢迎
介绍与本地生活相关的信息（如天气， 饮食等）
介绍本班情况
希望Paul做哪些事情， 以增进中英学生之间的了解和友谊
注意：
请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息。
可适当加入细节， 使内容充实，行文连贯。
词数不少于100； 开头已给出， 不计入总词数。
参考词汇：交换生
exchange student
Dear Paul,
I’m Li Hua, monitor of Class One, Grade Three.
参考答案
1．略
【解析】略
2．本文属于开放性文章，故答案不是唯一的。
范例：Nowadays more and more students prefer to use e-dictionaries rather than traditional paper dictionaries in their language learning. Generally, e-dictionaries have many as advantages. First it is more convenient and faster. Besides, with an e-dictionary the word can be provided with its pronunciation. Thirdly, an e-dictionary usually has other functions, for example, it can be used a calculator.
But every coin has two sides. It also has some disadvantages. The important one is that it will do more harm to students’ eyes. Take matter worse, e-dictionaries mean more pollution than paper dictionaries.
As to me, I’d like to stick to my paper dictionary, which is more environment-friendly and less harmful to my health.
【解析】略3．Recently I have made an investigation on whether a model-test paper for Senior two should be difficult or easy. Opinions are various on this matter.
Some students think that a difficult exam is just like a challenge. The harder, the better. It can help students find out where they are weak in studies and improve their learning approaches.
Others, however, are against a difficult exam. In their opinion, if it is very difficult, they may become discouraged and feel terrible about the coming College Entrance Examination. Besides, with an easy exam, they can get high marks and gain confidence.
I prefer it to be neither too difficult nor too easy, because if it is too easy, teachers will not know how we are actually getting on with our studies, and if it is too difficult, we will lose heart.
【解析】
试题分析：本篇写作题材是不同观点。这种文章一般层次比较清晰，总述；观点及依据要注意的是在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文，划分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化。适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。
The harder, the better. 越…越…，It can help students find out where they are weak in studies and improve their learning approaches.这句话使用宾语从句， I prefer it to be neither too difficult nor too easy, because if it is too easy, teachers will not know how we are actually getting on with our studies, and if it is too difficult, we will lose heart. 这句话使用了neither…nor…词组，还有条件状语从句，还有文章用了However和Besides,这样的词使文章更加连贯。
考点：考查
4．
Saying No to Smoking
According to the WHO，2 million people died from smoking and 600 thousand from secondhand smoke every year. So smoking is banned in China in all public places both inside and out from May 1 on.
As is known to all, smoking is bad for people’s health. It may cause many diseases such as cough, lung cancer and so on. Smoking is especially harmful to us teenagers because our bodies are still growing. Secondhand smoke does harm to us as well. So we must do something to keep away from smoking. If someone offers a cigarette, we should refuse it. And if anyone smokes nearby, we should try to stop it. From now on, everyone of us should follow the law and say no to smoking.
【解析】
试题分析：，，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型文章更有档次。
5．
Dear_Paul，
I'm_Li_Hua,_monitor_of_Class_One,_Grade_Three. I'm very delighted to learn that you're coming to our class to study with us next term. I, on behalf of the whole class, welcome to China warmly.
It is a great honour for me to tell you some information relevant to the local life. First, our traditional foods are steambread and rice. I hope you can get used to them soon. In addition, the climate here is very similar to that in the Uk, so there is no need for you to worry about it.
Now I'll introduce our class to you. Our class is made up of 52 students, all of whom are hardworking and friendly. There is no doubt that you can get along well with them. Our teachers are kind to us and treat us as their friends. Last of all, I would appreciate it if you can do something, such as helping us practise our spoken English, and introducing something about British culture, to promote the understanding and friendship between the students of the two countries.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Yours，
Li_Hua_
【解析】
试题分析：本题是一篇材料作文。题目要求根据要点介绍本地的相关情况并表达希望。作文要点已经给出，可以分段分别论述所给要点，注意作文的连贯性，做到流畅、自然。最好使用第一人称和一般现在时和将来时态来写。
【亮点说明】
1.运用短语be delighted to do ,on behalf of,以及用现在进行时态表将来
I'm very delighted to learn that you're coming to our class to study with us next term.
I, on behalf of the whole class, welcome to China warmly.
句型It is a great honour for sb to do sth.很荣幸地做某事；短语relevant to与...相关
It is a great honour for me to tell you some information relevant to the local life.
应用定语从句Our class is made up of 52 students, all of whom are hardworking and friendly.
句型there is no doubt that......是毫无疑问的
There is no doubt that you can get along well with them.应用连词过渡使文章层次清晰First, in addition, last of all应用句型I would appreciate it if....如果...,我将不甚感激I would appreciate it if you can do something
考点： 提纲类作文
1．假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫（panda）,一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：
自我介绍；
2. 祝贺苏琳生日；
3. 感谢工作人员；
4. 索取苏琳三岁生日照。
注意：1、词数10-150左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3、开头语已为你写好。
书面表达 （满分25分）
现在，越来越多的学生使用电子词典，而非纸质词典。请你根据下表内容，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。
利 1. 方便、快捷
2. 提供读音
3. 附带其他功能
弊 1. 对眼睛有害
2. 电子产品对环境污染更大
你的看法
电子词典: e-dictionary
纸质词典: paper dictionary
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．最近你就高二模拟考试该偏难还是该偏易这个问题进行了一次调查。结合下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，介绍有关调查情况，并发表自己的看法。
赞成偏难，反对偏易 赞成偏易，反对偏难
喜欢挑战，越难越好；
有助于学生了解自己的薄弱环节，改进学习方法。 题目太难，学生会泄气，会害怕今后的高考；
题目容易，易得高分，获自信。
注意：
2.文章必须包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：高考College Entrance Examination
Recently I have made an investigation on whether a model-test paper for Senior two should be difficult or easy. Opinions are virous on this matter.
4．据世界卫生组织（WHO）统计，每年有200万人死于吸烟，60万人死于二手烟。为此，我国规定，从今年5月1 日起，严禁在公共场所吸烟。请你结合下面所给要点，以“Saying No to Smoking”为题，谈谈吸烟的危害。
1. 吸烟有害；
2. 吸烟导致咳嗽、肺癌等疾病；
3. 吸烟影响青少年成长；
4. 二手烟同样有害；
5. 你的态度：面对别人吸烟、给烟怎么办？
注意： 1. 词数：0词左右； 应覆盖所有要点；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；. 参考词汇：lung cancer肺癌; secondhand smoke二手烟
5．假设你是内蒙红星中学高三（1）班的班长李华， 得知英国学生Paul 作为交换生， 下学期将到你班学习。 请你根据以下提示， 给他写封邮件：
表示欢迎
介绍与本地生活相关的信息（如天气， 饮食等）
介绍本班情况
希望Paul做哪些事情， 以增进中英学生之间的了解和友谊
注意：
请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息。
可适当加入细节， 使内容充实，行文连贯。
词数不少于100； 开头已给出， 不计入总词数。
参考词汇：交换生
exchange student
Dear Paul,
I’m Li Hua, monitor of Class One, Grade Three.
参考答案
1．略
【解析】略
2．本文属于开放性文章，故答案不是唯一的。
范例：Nowadays more and more students prefer to use e-dictionaries rather than traditional paper dictionaries in their language learning. Generally, e-dictionaries have many as advantages. First it is more convenient and faster. Besides, with an e-dictionary the word can be provided with its pronunciation. Thirdly, an e-dictionary usually has other functions, for example, it can be used a calculator.
But every coin has two sides. It also has some disadvantages. The important one is that it will do more harm to students’ eyes. Take matter worse, e-dictionaries mean more pollution than paper dictionaries.
As to me, I’d like to stick to my paper dictionary, which is more environment-friendly and less harmful to my health.
【解析】略3．Recently I have made an investigation on whether a model-test paper for Senior two should be difficult or easy. Opinions are various on this matter.
Some students think that a difficult exam is just like a challenge. The harder, the better. It can help students find out where they are weak in studies and improve their learning approaches.
Others, however, are against a difficult exam. In their opinion, if it is very difficult, they may become discouraged and feel terrible about the coming College Entrance Examination. Besides, with an easy exam, they can get high marks and gain confidence.
I prefer it to be neither too difficult nor too easy, because if it is too easy, teachers will not know how we are actually getting on with our studies, and if it is too difficult, we will lose heart.
【解析】
试题分析：本篇写作题材是不同观点。这种文章一般层次比较清晰，总述；观点及依据要注意的是在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文，划分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化。适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。
The harder, the better. 越…越…，It can help students find out where they are weak in studies and improve their learning approaches.这句话使用宾语从句， I prefer it to be neither too difficult nor too easy, because if it is too easy, teachers will not know how we are actually getting on with our studies, and if it is too difficult, we will lose heart. 这句话使用了neither…nor…词组，还有条件状语从句，还有文章用了However和Besides,这样的词使文章更加连贯。
考点：考查
4．
Saying No to Smoking
According to the WHO，2 million people died from smoking and 600 thousand from secondhand smoke every year. So smoking is banned in China in all public places both inside and out from May 1 on.
As is known to all, smoking is bad for people’s health. It may cause many diseases such as cough, lung cancer and so on. Smoking is especially harmful to us teenagers because our bodies are still growing. Secondhand smoke does harm to us as well. So we must do something to keep away from smoking. If someone offers a cigarette, we should refuse it. And if anyone smokes nearby, we should try to stop it. From now on, everyone of us should follow the law and say no to smoking.
【解析】
试题分析：，，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型文章更有档次。
5．
Dear_Paul，
I'm_Li_Hua,_monitor_of_Class_One,_Grade_Three. I'm very delighted to learn that you're coming to our class to study with us next term. I, on behalf of the whole class, welcome to China warmly.
It is a great honour for me to tell you some information relevant to the local life. First, our traditional foods are steambread and rice. I hope you can get used to them soon. In addition, the climate here is very similar to that in the Uk, so there is no need for you to worry about it.
Now I'll introduce our class to you. Our class is made up of 52 students, all of whom are hardworking and friendly. There is no doubt that you can get along well with them. Our teachers are kind to us and treat us as their friends. Last of all, I would appreciate it if you can do something, such as helping us practise our spoken English, and introducing something about British culture, to promote the understanding and friendship between the students of the two countries.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Yours，
Li_Hua_
【解析】
试题分析：本题是一篇材料作文。题目要求根据要点介绍本地的相关情况并表达希望。作文要点已经给出，可以分段分别论述所给要点，注意作文的连贯性，做到流畅、自然。最好使用第一人称和一般现在时和将来时态来写。
【亮点说明】
1.运用短语be delighted to do ,on behalf of,以及用现在进行时态表将来
I'm very delighted to learn that you're coming to our class to study with us next term.
I, on behalf of the whole class, welcome to China warmly.
句型It is a great honour for sb to do sth.很荣幸地做某事；短语relevant to与...相关
It is a great honour for me to tell you some information relevant to the local life.
应用定语从句Our class is made up of 52 students, all of whom are hardworking and friendly.
句型there is no doubt that......是毫无疑问的
There is no doubt that you can get along well with them.应用连词过渡使文章层次清晰First, in addition, last of all应用句型I would appreciate it if....如果...,我将不甚感激I would appreciate it if you can do something
考点： 提纲类作文
