2024年高考英语高效书面表达专题卷：2（含解析）
1．热点七：低碳经济下的环境保护（1）
“低碳经济”是一个具有广泛社会性的经济前沿理念，最早是在2003年英国政府发布的能源白皮书《我们能源的未来：创建低碳经济》正式提出的。低碳经济包括低碳发展、低碳产业、低碳技术和低碳生活等经济形态，是指在不影响经济发展的前提下，通过技术创新和制度创新，降低能源和资源消耗，尽可能最大限度地减少温室气体和污染物的排放，实现减缓气候变化的目标，促进人类的可持续发展。
Protection of Environment
1. 目前环保还存在着许多问题。
2. 为了保护环境，3. 各国政府做了大量的工作。
4. 我的看法。
2．假设你叫李华，你的澳大利亚朋友 Peter 来信谈了他最喜爱的体育运动，并希望了解中国人喜爱的体育运动。 请根据以下提示用英语写一封回信。 要点如下：
感谢Peter 的来信；
体育运动在中国受重视的程度；
运动形式多种多样：老年人早上练气功 (Qigong); 中年人晚上跳舞；青年人游泳、滑冰等；
最流行的运动是球类运动，尤其是乒乓球和篮球。
注意： 词数100~120。
3．假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友John在来信中谈到低碳生活这个话题。最近几个月你校倡导学生过低碳生活、过节约生活、做有责任感的公民，引导学生从出行、购物、用水、家电和餐具使用等方面反省自己的生活方式。请你用英文给John回信。回信要点如下：
1.你对低碳生活的理解；
2.你校开展的活动；
3.你最近生活方式的改变(至少选取三个方面)
注意：1.词数120左右；
2.参考词汇：低碳生活low carbon life(style)
3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数)
Dear John
How are things going last letter you talked about low carbon life. Now I’d like to share my understanding of it and my experience in the past few months.
————————————————————————————————————————
————————————————————————————————————————
I’m really glad to communicate with you about this topic.
Yours，
Li Hua
’s all go out for food safety”为标题根据下表提示完成一篇短文。
话题 食品安全已经引起极大关注
原因 厂商唯利是图，生产伪劣垃圾食品
滥用农药和添加剂
认真对待食品安全 厂商：既关注利润，也关注质量
监督员：严控安全标准，严罚不良厂商
消费者：尽量选择绿色食品
注意：①避免直译，要求层次清楚，内容连贯。
②字数120字左右。
参考词汇：
添加剂：addictive
严厉：severely
监督员：supervisor
消费者：consumer
5．假设你是Tom,你在澳大利亚时参加了一个野生动物之旅，但你对这次旅行很不满意，并想将你的钱要回一半。仔细阅读下面的宣传册以及你在旁边所做的说明，然后给公司写一封信，要求包含所有的内容要点,可适当增减细节。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 不要出现真实地址及姓名。
参考词汇：tropical 热带的；binoculars 双筒望远镜
TROPICAL TOURS
One day tropical tour $80
Relax and enjoy a unique experience!
Explore unspoilt(未受破坏的) rainforest and waterfalls .
Observe an amazing variety of wildlife.
travel by luxury air-conditioned bus
pick up from and return to your hotel
experienced guide
swimming and guided rainforest walk
morning and afternoon refreshments(点心)and a tropical lunch
We supply binoculars –a must for bird watching
What to bring: walking shoes, bathing suit, towel, camera + plenty of spare film
Dear manager，
Sincerely yours,
Tom
参考答案
1．
There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. One of the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil. the polluted air does great harm to people’s health. The polluted water causes diseases and death. What is more, vegetation had been greatly reduced with the rapid growth of modern cities.
To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done a lot. Legislative steps have been introduced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution. Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in the environmental protection today.
In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through education. Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population planning policy into practice, because more people means more people means more pollution. Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished. We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves.
【解析】
2．略
【解析】略
3．
How are things going? In your last letter you talked about low carbon life. Now I’d like to share my understanding of it and my experience in the past few months.
With the environment problem coming into attention, it is extremely important that we take action to protect our planet. As more people are determined to make a difference, low carbon lifestyle provides us with the perfect opportunity to do it.
Interestingly, our school called on us students to develop a low carbon lifestyle and become a responsible citizen several months ago. In response to the appeal, I have made some changes in my way of life, which range from transportation to water saving. For example, instead of asking my parents to drive me to school, I take a bus to and from school. Just like my schoolmates, I now refuse to use disposable chopsticks. At home, I even persuade my parents to reuse water, even though it is not so convenient. The TV and the computer are important entertainment for my family, but we sometimes read instead, which, I think, may help relieve the shortage of electricity.
I’m really glad to communicate with you about this topic.
Yours,
LiHua
【】
试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，，对低碳生活的理解校开展的活动最近生活方式的改变三个最近生活方式的改变
【亮点说明】For example, instead of asking my parents to drive me to school, I take a bus to and from school.”就达20个字。全文共8句(不包括所给的部分)，涉及简单句3个，复合句5个，开头句和最后依据非常吸引人的眼球。开头句中用了“with”复合结构“With the environment problem coming into attention”，还用了非常靓丽的复合句 “it is extremely important that we take action to protect our planet”.最后一句更是错综复杂：总体说，这是一个复合句，由主句“The TV and the computer are important entertainment for my family, but we sometimes read instead”加“which”引导的非限制性定语从句“which, I think, may help relieve the shortage of electricity”；主句中包含了并列句“but we sometimes read instead”；该句中还用了一个插入语“I think”对整个长句起到了缓冲的作用。短语“make a difference，In response to，range from transportation to water saving”等的使用也彰显了作者扎实的语言基本功。
4． One possible version:
Let us all go out for food safety
It is frequently reported that poisonous food causes deaths, so food safety had been drawing the public’s great attention.
Food problems mainly lie in the two factors. On the one hand, some food producers lack social conscience. Centering on money, they produce lots of fake and junk food; On the other hand, other producers are short of common sense on food safety, thus poison and addictive abuse pollutes food.
For the sake of health, we must take food safety seriously. Firstly, food producers shall pay more attention to food quality, and they are required to care about food safety as well as profits; Secondly, food supervisors shall operate strict food standards and punish the ill producers severely; Lastly, consumers had better go to regular markets to choose green food.
【解析】 略
5．
I’m writing to you about the tropical tour I went on last Friday. I have some complaints about it.
First of all, it was hot last Friday, but the air conditioner didn’t work in the so-called luxury air-conditioned bus, which made us mad. What’s worse, it sent us back to our hotel so late--one and a half hours late that we missed our dinner. In addition, although your experienced guide knows the area well, she couldn’t make herself heard among the crowd. Last but not least, when watching the birds, there were not enough binoculars for everyone, so some of us lost the chance to watch those beautiful birds. It was terrible.
I hope you will agree that what you did is far from what you advertised. I would be grateful if you could send us an apology together with half of the cost of the tour.
Looking forward for your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Tom
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，该书面表达题要求考生。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。除了表达这些要点以外，还要阐述自己的观点，这就要求考生自己拓展发挥，答题时要注意：使用一般现在时；以祈使句为主；不要遗漏要点。注意文章的连贯性和整体性。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。
【亮点说明】范文用了一些词组：如, make sb. mad, What’s worse, In addition, make oneself done, Last but not least, be far from等等。句型上也是多变：’t work in the so-called luxury air-conditioned bus, which made us mad.这句话用了，
考点：考查提纲类书面表达
1．热点七：低碳经济下的环境保护（1）
“低碳经济”是一个具有广泛社会性的经济前沿理念，最早是在2003年英国政府发布的能源白皮书《我们能源的未来：创建低碳经济》正式提出的。低碳经济包括低碳发展、低碳产业、低碳技术和低碳生活等经济形态，是指在不影响经济发展的前提下，通过技术创新和制度创新，降低能源和资源消耗，尽可能最大限度地减少温室气体和污染物的排放，实现减缓气候变化的目标，促进人类的可持续发展。
Protection of Environment
1. 目前环保还存在着许多问题。
2. 为了保护环境，3. 各国政府做了大量的工作。
4. 我的看法。
2．假设你叫李华，你的澳大利亚朋友 Peter 来信谈了他最喜爱的体育运动，并希望了解中国人喜爱的体育运动。 请根据以下提示用英语写一封回信。 要点如下：
感谢Peter 的来信；
体育运动在中国受重视的程度；
运动形式多种多样：老年人早上练气功 (Qigong); 中年人晚上跳舞；青年人游泳、滑冰等；
最流行的运动是球类运动，尤其是乒乓球和篮球。
注意： 词数100~120。
3．假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友John在来信中谈到低碳生活这个话题。最近几个月你校倡导学生过低碳生活、过节约生活、做有责任感的公民，引导学生从出行、购物、用水、家电和餐具使用等方面反省自己的生活方式。请你用英文给John回信。回信要点如下：
1.你对低碳生活的理解；
2.你校开展的活动；
3.你最近生活方式的改变(至少选取三个方面)
注意：1.词数120左右；
2.参考词汇：低碳生活low carbon life(style)
3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数)
Dear John
How are things going last letter you talked about low carbon life. Now I’d like to share my understanding of it and my experience in the past few months.
————————————————————————————————————————
————————————————————————————————————————
I’m really glad to communicate with you about this topic.
Yours，
Li Hua
’s all go out for food safety”为标题根据下表提示完成一篇短文。
话题 食品安全已经引起极大关注
原因 厂商唯利是图，生产伪劣垃圾食品
滥用农药和添加剂
认真对待食品安全 厂商：既关注利润，也关注质量
监督员：严控安全标准，严罚不良厂商
消费者：尽量选择绿色食品
注意：①避免直译，要求层次清楚，内容连贯。
②字数120字左右。
参考词汇：
添加剂：addictive
严厉：severely
监督员：supervisor
消费者：consumer
5．假设你是Tom,你在澳大利亚时参加了一个野生动物之旅，但你对这次旅行很不满意，并想将你的钱要回一半。仔细阅读下面的宣传册以及你在旁边所做的说明，然后给公司写一封信，要求包含所有的内容要点,可适当增减细节。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 不要出现真实地址及姓名。
参考词汇：tropical 热带的；binoculars 双筒望远镜
TROPICAL TOURS
One day tropical tour $80
Relax and enjoy a unique experience!
Explore unspoilt(未受破坏的) rainforest and waterfalls .
Observe an amazing variety of wildlife.
travel by luxury air-conditioned bus
pick up from and return to your hotel
experienced guide
swimming and guided rainforest walk
morning and afternoon refreshments(点心)and a tropical lunch
We supply binoculars –a must for bird watching
What to bring: walking shoes, bathing suit, towel, camera + plenty of spare film
Dear manager，
Sincerely yours,
Tom
参考答案
1．
There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. One of the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil. the polluted air does great harm to people’s health. The polluted water causes diseases and death. What is more, vegetation had been greatly reduced with the rapid growth of modern cities.
To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done a lot. Legislative steps have been introduced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution. Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in the environmental protection today.
In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through education. Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population planning policy into practice, because more people means more people means more pollution. Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished. We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves.
【解析】
2．略
【解析】略
3．
How are things going? In your last letter you talked about low carbon life. Now I’d like to share my understanding of it and my experience in the past few months.
With the environment problem coming into attention, it is extremely important that we take action to protect our planet. As more people are determined to make a difference, low carbon lifestyle provides us with the perfect opportunity to do it.
Interestingly, our school called on us students to develop a low carbon lifestyle and become a responsible citizen several months ago. In response to the appeal, I have made some changes in my way of life, which range from transportation to water saving. For example, instead of asking my parents to drive me to school, I take a bus to and from school. Just like my schoolmates, I now refuse to use disposable chopsticks. At home, I even persuade my parents to reuse water, even though it is not so convenient. The TV and the computer are important entertainment for my family, but we sometimes read instead, which, I think, may help relieve the shortage of electricity.
I’m really glad to communicate with you about this topic.
Yours,
LiHua
【】
试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，，对低碳生活的理解校开展的活动最近生活方式的改变三个最近生活方式的改变
【亮点说明】For example, instead of asking my parents to drive me to school, I take a bus to and from school.”就达20个字。全文共8句(不包括所给的部分)，涉及简单句3个，复合句5个，开头句和最后依据非常吸引人的眼球。开头句中用了“with”复合结构“With the environment problem coming into attention”，还用了非常靓丽的复合句 “it is extremely important that we take action to protect our planet”.最后一句更是错综复杂：总体说，这是一个复合句，由主句“The TV and the computer are important entertainment for my family, but we sometimes read instead”加“which”引导的非限制性定语从句“which, I think, may help relieve the shortage of electricity”；主句中包含了并列句“but we sometimes read instead”；该句中还用了一个插入语“I think”对整个长句起到了缓冲的作用。短语“make a difference，In response to，range from transportation to water saving”等的使用也彰显了作者扎实的语言基本功。
4． One possible version:
Let us all go out for food safety
It is frequently reported that poisonous food causes deaths, so food safety had been drawing the public’s great attention.
Food problems mainly lie in the two factors. On the one hand, some food producers lack social conscience. Centering on money, they produce lots of fake and junk food; On the other hand, other producers are short of common sense on food safety, thus poison and addictive abuse pollutes food.
For the sake of health, we must take food safety seriously. Firstly, food producers shall pay more attention to food quality, and they are required to care about food safety as well as profits; Secondly, food supervisors shall operate strict food standards and punish the ill producers severely; Lastly, consumers had better go to regular markets to choose green food.
【解析】 略
5．
I’m writing to you about the tropical tour I went on last Friday. I have some complaints about it.
First of all, it was hot last Friday, but the air conditioner didn’t work in the so-called luxury air-conditioned bus, which made us mad. What’s worse, it sent us back to our hotel so late--one and a half hours late that we missed our dinner. In addition, although your experienced guide knows the area well, she couldn’t make herself heard among the crowd. Last but not least, when watching the birds, there were not enough binoculars for everyone, so some of us lost the chance to watch those beautiful birds. It was terrible.
I hope you will agree that what you did is far from what you advertised. I would be grateful if you could send us an apology together with half of the cost of the tour.
Looking forward for your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Tom
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，该书面表达题要求考生。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。除了表达这些要点以外，还要阐述自己的观点，这就要求考生自己拓展发挥，答题时要注意：使用一般现在时；以祈使句为主；不要遗漏要点。注意文章的连贯性和整体性。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。
【亮点说明】范文用了一些词组：如, make sb. mad, What’s worse, In addition, make oneself done, Last but not least, be far from等等。句型上也是多变：’t work in the so-called luxury air-conditioned bus, which made us mad.这句话用了，
考点：考查提纲类书面表达
