河北省2024高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错+书面表达（76）
河北省2024高考英语二轮复习专题训练：
短文改错+书面表达（76）
短文改错
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It has been years since the Chinese get plastic bags from supermarkets for free.
China has banned free plastic bags at shops and supermarkets, but people have to pay for
them. The Chinese once use about 300 million plastic shopping bags a day, which has
caused environmental pollution because plastic bags are not easily to break down. So the
Chinese is encouraged to take their own bags for shopping. Then what kind of
shopping bag is the best to carry? Some student in Chongqing have a extraordinary idea.
They use old clothes to make cloth bags, and then to ask their parents and friends to use
these cloth bags instead plastic ones. They do so because they think it is our duty to help
书面表达
现在，很多中学生每天长时间用耳机听音乐、学英语。你的英语笔友李平也是如此。最近他在来信中提到感觉头痛、注意力不集中、汜忆力减退。请你就此回信谈谈你的观点和建议。
写作要点：
1．简述过度使用耳机的现象；
2．分析过度使用耳机的危害；
3．提出你的建议。
注意：
1．要点齐全，可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．字数100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3．可能用到的词汇：耳机earphone It has been years since the Chinese get plastic bags from supermarkets for free.
got
China has banned free plastic bags at shops and supermarkets, but people have to pay for
and/so
them. The Chinese once use about 300 million plastic shopping bags a day, which has
used
caused environmental pollution because plastic bags are not easily to break down. So the
easy
Chinese is encouraged to take their own bags for shopping. Then what kind of
are
shopping bag is the best to carry? Some student in Chongqing have a extraordinary idea.
students
an
They use old clothes to make cloth bags, and then to ask their parents and friends to use
these cloth bags instead ∧plastic ones. They do so because they think it is our duty to help
of
their
protect the environment.
One Possible Version
Dear Li Ping,
I received your letter yesterday. Nowadays many students listen to music and learn English with earphones. As for your trouble with ears and bad memory, I’m afraid you spend too much time listening with earphones. In fact, listening to music while doing your lessons may result in less concentration on your study. Besides, the overuse of earphones does harm to your hearing. There are many ways we can enjoy music and learn English. For instance, a recorder or a radio may be a good choice. However, if you do need to use an earphone, you should rest your ears for at least ten minutes every hour but do not use it more than 2 hours a day. I hope things will get better soon.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Lin Tao
河北省2024高考英语二轮复习专题训练：
短文改错+书面表达（76）
短文改错
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It has been years since the Chinese get plastic bags from supermarkets for free.
China has banned free plastic bags at shops and supermarkets, but people have to pay for
them. The Chinese once use about 300 million plastic shopping bags a day, which has
caused environmental pollution because plastic bags are not easily to break down. So the
Chinese is encouraged to take their own bags for shopping. Then what kind of
shopping bag is the best to carry? Some student in Chongqing have a extraordinary idea.
They use old clothes to make cloth bags, and then to ask their parents and friends to use
these cloth bags instead plastic ones. They do so because they think it is our duty to help
书面表达
现在，很多中学生每天长时间用耳机听音乐、学英语。你的英语笔友李平也是如此。最近他在来信中提到感觉头痛、注意力不集中、汜忆力减退。请你就此回信谈谈你的观点和建议。
写作要点：
1．简述过度使用耳机的现象；
2．分析过度使用耳机的危害；
3．提出你的建议。
注意：
1．要点齐全，可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．字数100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3．可能用到的词汇：耳机earphone It has been years since the Chinese get plastic bags from supermarkets for free.
got
China has banned free plastic bags at shops and supermarkets, but people have to pay for
and/so
them. The Chinese once use about 300 million plastic shopping bags a day, which has
used
caused environmental pollution because plastic bags are not easily to break down. So the
easy
Chinese is encouraged to take their own bags for shopping. Then what kind of
are
shopping bag is the best to carry? Some student in Chongqing have a extraordinary idea.
students
an
They use old clothes to make cloth bags, and then to ask their parents and friends to use
these cloth bags instead ∧plastic ones. They do so because they think it is our duty to help
of
their
protect the environment.
One Possible Version
Dear Li Ping,
I received your letter yesterday. Nowadays many students listen to music and learn English with earphones. As for your trouble with ears and bad memory, I’m afraid you spend too much time listening with earphones. In fact, listening to music while doing your lessons may result in less concentration on your study. Besides, the overuse of earphones does harm to your hearing. There are many ways we can enjoy music and learn English. For instance, a recorder or a radio may be a good choice. However, if you do need to use an earphone, you should rest your ears for at least ten minutes every hour but do not use it more than 2 hours a day. I hope things will get better soon.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Lin Tao
