2024年高考英语专题检测:备考专题训练-书面表达
2024年高考英语备考专题训练(5)----书面表达
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假设你是高三学生李华,开学之初,你们新换了英语老师Ms Li。 她希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况,并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。
1、对英语学习的认识;
2、自己目前的英语水平;
3、自己英语学习存在的主要问题;
4、对英语教学的两点建议。
注意:
1、词数100左右;
2、信的开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Ms Li,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
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Thank you!
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Ms Li,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.
My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.
Thank you!
【解析】本文的内容非常简单,要点都已经列出了,考生根据自己的实际情况写出真实的情况。要注意使用高级词汇和句型如as…随着…;同时也要使用一些合适的连词,让文章更流畅。
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书面表达(满分15分)
你已经是高三学生,正在老师和学校的帮助下紧张备战高考,在近三年的高中生活中,你的学校和老师肯定给你留下这样或那样的印记,请你用英语写一篇作文描述你对学校和老师的印象。
要求:不少于100词,语句通顺,用词准确。
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【参考范文】
I’m in senior three this year. With the college entrance examination approaching, all the teachers and students are engaged in preparing for the important exam.
First of all, all of our teachers are devoted to giving us lessons, in their free time, they will sacrifice their rest for us.So grateful are we that we determine to try our best to study.
As for our students, most of us spare no efforts to study.Some of them even stay up late into deep night, which makes them feel sleepy in class. I am so worried about them that I suggest our teachers give us more time to relax in the hope that we can have more energy to study.
【解析】
这篇作文主要写清楚老师学生对高考做的准备工作,说明老师对学生的认真,学生的努力,用一般现在时,同时应该对现象提出解决办法。写作时要用一些固定结构,象with the college entrance examination approaching, are engaged in preparing for ,are devoted to giving us lessons some of them even stay up late into deep night, which makes them feel sleepy in class. Some of them even stay up late into deep night, which makes them feel sleepy in class.这句话是非限制性定语从句。
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的个性发展和家人的身心健康。请你根据表格中的信息和自身的感受,以How we can build up a harmonious family 为题用英语写一篇短文。
主要特征 充满温暖、爱心和欢笑;相互关爱、尊重和理解
主要益处 生长在和睦家庭环境中的孩子会乐观向上
生活在和睦家庭中的父母会健康快乐
父母该怎么做 言行举止上做好表率;充分尊重、信任孩子;经常与孩子沟通交流
你该怎么做 ……
注意:1.对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2. 词数150左右,开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
How we can build up a harmonious family
A harmonious family is essential to our personal development and our physical and mental health.________________________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
How we can build up a harmonious family
A harmonious family is essential to our personal development and our physical and mental health. A harmonious family is always full of warmth, love and laughter. Parents and children love and show concern for each other. They also respect and understand each other. If a child grows up in a harmonious family, he is more likely to be cheerful and optimistic. Otherwise, he may be miserable and pessimistic. Meanwhile, parents in a harmonious family are sure to live happily and more healthily.
Since a harmonious family plays a very important role in our life , it is up to every family member to contribute to the building of such a family. First of all, parents should be a role model for their children and pay more attention to their own words and behavior. Besides, they must trust their children and often communicate with them.
As children of the family, we should also respect and understand our parents, and try to share their burdens. If we do so, our home will always be harmonious. (157W)
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面表达(满分25分)
请你就“物价上涨及中学生节省开支”这一话题写一篇发言稿,发表看法,并包括如下要点:
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受访者对物价上涨的反映;
(2)你在日常生活中对物价上涨的体会;
(3)中学生在日常生活中应如何精打细算,节省开支;
(4)呼吁同学们从小事做起,发扬节约的中华美德。
注意:
1. 词数120左右;
2.发言稿中不能现出真实姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇:受访者 respondents
美德virtue(s)
Dear boys and girls,
It抯 my great honour to make a speech here. Recently, the People抯 Bank of China condmeucted a quarterly survey on prices in 50 cities.
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【One Possible Version】
Dear boys and girls,
It’s my great honor to make a speech here. Recently, the People’s Bank of China conducted a quarterly survey on prices in 50 cities. Nearly half of the respondents said they couldn’t tolerate the increasing prices, while some others considered it OK although they acknowledged the truth. As a result, many families began to seek various ways to save money.
The survey does draw my attention to the rapidly increasing prices in my daily life. Take food as an example, the prices of pork, beef, fish, chicken, as well as various vegetables, have risen at least 20%. It seems that money is flowing out of our pockets more quickly, but silently.
Although we middle school students feel less stress than our parents do, we should also have a proper budget for our pocket money. For example, we can make the most of each exercise book and reuse some waste paper. Or we can also try to cut down our expenses on unnecessary magazines, CDs and so on. In a word, we can save money in many aspects in our daily life.
All in all, saving money is a great Chinese virtue and it is especially needed in this period. Thank you!
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书面表达 (满分30分)
假如你是光明中学的李华,在网上得知一位美国中学生Karl Davis很想交中国朋友。恰好你也有同样的愿望,希望成为他的笔友。请你根据以下提示写一封120字左右的电子邮件。
1. 简单的自我介绍(学校课程、课外安排等情况);
2.介绍暑假参加全国中学生英语夏令营的情况;
3.询问对方情况,表达愿望,希望能够成为朋友。
Dear Karl,
I’m glad to read your letter and I’d like to be your pen friend.
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Yours sincerely,
Liu Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Karl,
I’m glad to read your letter and I’d like to be your pen friend. I’m Li Hua, aged 17, and I’m studying at Guangming Middle School. At school we have Chinese, math, English, physics, chemistry and P.E. lessons. After school in the afternoon, we usually have sports and games. In the evening we do our lessons at school. We are busy but happy.
This summer vacation, I went to an English summer camp. In the camp, we had an English speech competition, and watched wonderful performances given by the students. Some English teachers from China, the USA and England joined us. I have made many new friends and I really had great fun.
Would you please tell me something about your family and your school? I hope we will be good friends.
Please write to me soon.
Yours sincerely,
Liu Hua
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书面表达 (满分25分)
学校网站新开设了一个”英语写作”栏目(column),以便学生发表(post)英语作文,进行交流,提高写作能力。现请你为该栏目写一个英文介绍,内容包括:
开设目的
栏目优势:教师在线(online)指导等
作文要求:内容贴近学生生活
优秀作文的鼓励办法
邀请大家参与
注意:
1.词数120左右。
2.开头语已为你写好(不计入总词数)。
Welcome to the column “English Writing” !
【参考范文】
Welcome to the column “English Writing” !
Recently the school website has set up a new column called “English Writing” which provides students with the chances to post their composition and communicate with each other. Not only can students improve their writing ability in this way, but they can strengthen their self-confidence.
The column has lots of advantages. It is the teacher抯 guide online that has an advantage over the other columns. If necessary, the students can have a direct 揳sk and answer?with professional teachers. It is required that the composition should be related to the students?llotsife. What抯 more, if it eis organized well enough, the writer will be rewarded for it.
Hoping to the students’ participation.
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第二节 书面表达(满分25)
根据下面提示写一篇短文
1.简述以下现象:
(1)健康之重要人尽皆知。
(2)许多青少年不注重健康问题,假期尤甚。长时间看电视,通宵上网聊天、玩游戏。导致的危害如:影响视力,身体虚弱,缺乏人际交往。
2. 简述你的看法,提出你的建议。
要求:(1)内容完整,层次清楚,语言流畅。(2)词数120左右,标题已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:交流communicate;心理健康 mental health
Have a healthy lifestyle
【参考范文】
Have a healthy lifestyle
As we all know, health is very important. Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life.
However, many teenagers don't pay any attention to their health, especially during the holiday. And they spend too much time watching TV, playing games and chatting on the Internet all night, which is bad for their health. First, this may make them get near-sighted. Besides, their bodies become much weaker. Thirdly, they will lose the chance to communicate with others face to face as they never go out, which may have a bad effect on their mental health.
In my opinion, they should spend less time in front of the TV or the computer. Go out to take some exercises, play some sports and visit some and have a healthy lifestyle.
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书面表达 (满分25分)下面这幅图片是一幅反映交通堵塞及交通压力问题的场景。请根据你对这幅图片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容:
描述图中所表达的相关信息;
分析此现象的原因;
提出你的建议(至少两条)
注意:
可参用下面文章开头所给提示,你必要地发挥想象。
词数10左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。national holiday many drivers became victims of traffic jam on main highways. As is shown in the picture,
【参考范文】
On the eight-day national holiday many drivers became victims of traffic jam on main highways. As is shown in the picture, millions of drivers and passengers flocked to the highways to go home or to tourist spots, which caused great traffic congestion. Many people caught in jam were seen playing sports and even walking dogs or reading to kill time.
There are many reasons for the heavy traffic. First, as the economy is developing, the number of cars has been increasing than expected. Then, more people prefer to drive their cars to travel instead of using public transport, which will save money thanks to the toll-free road policy. Also, the traffic system is not efficient enough for so many cars.
How could we deal with the heavy traffic? In my opinion, the government should improve the traffic system. It is necessary to provide updated traffic information for drivers on the road. In addition, drivers can prefer the roads which are not crowded. Avoiding the rush time is also a good way. Besides, if the government abandoned the tolls altogether, travel times would be more flexible for drivers.