江苏省启东中学2024届高考考前英语最后一讲：书面表达
Part Six: 书面表达部分
答题应试技巧：
牢记“一式、两头、三写、四关”的应试要诀。一式，是关注文章体裁，写对格式；两头，即写好文章的开头和结尾；三写，是大小写、拼写和书写无误；四关，也就是过好内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关和习惯表达关。具体如下：
1. 注重审题，对写的内容做到心中有数。首先，应通过审题明确文章的体裁。其次，应注重时态及语态，认真琢磨其内容的英语表达方式，避免汉式英语。最后着手写时要注意分段。
2. 内容要点是否齐全；句子语法（包括：时态、语态、用词、句法和结构格式等）是否正确；词汇是否准确多样；句式结构是否丰富多彩；逻辑关系词使用是否到位；是否合理使用连接词和过渡性词语；标点符号、英语字母大小写是否规范。
3. 在表达清晰明了的前提下适当使用有把握的复杂结构和高级词汇。
4. 注重英语习惯，使所写句子准确地道，注意表达时的切换，避免汉式英语。
5. 注重开头和结尾的技巧。
6. 新标准对写作的要求增加了情感因素，所以发挥自己的观点时注重思想性，力图提高文章思想内涵。
7. 注重书写，追求卷面美观。书面表达属于主观性试题，阅卷老师的主观印象直接关系到考生的得分高低。
8. 通读全文，检查疏漏。
忌：书写潦草、单词模糊不清、左右明显不齐、随意涂改、缺乏分段、字数太多或太少（应在130-170间）
●写作典型习题：
A
请根据对某校这段时间学生中拥有QQ号人数的调查写一篇文章，要求描述变化、分析原因并谈谈看法。
2008 2009 2010 2011
20% 40% 50% 60%
B
近些年, 由于各种原因, 对父母的孝顺之心, 感恩之心, 在许多青年学生心中已经大大折扣, 甚至越来越淡漠. 根据这种现象, 谈谈你的看法.
注意: 孝心filial piety
打折扣discount
C
近日某网站对人们外出旅游的频率和目的进行了一次问卷调查，结果见下图。请根据图表提供的信息用英语写一篇短文，介绍此次调查结果，并谈谈你自己外出旅游的目的。词数150左右。文章的开头已经给出。
表1
表2
One possible version
Recently an online survey on traveling has been conducted. ______________________________________________________________________________
D
请根据下面提供的漫画所反应的现象和问题，
写一篇题为 “Exam is coming”的短文, 你的短
文应该包含：
1. 漫画描述和反映的问题及原因是什么？
2. 请联系实际,就我们应该怎样正确面对这样的
问题发表自己的看法。
要求：1. 参照图及所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。
2. 词数150 左右。作文中不得提及考生所
在学校和本人姓名。
3. 参考词汇：失眠insomnia
E
假如你校最近就家长应该如何对待孩子的问题进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1中提供的信息描述调查结果，并针对图表2的其中一个数据所反映的情况写出你的看法。
词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
Recently our school has conducted a survey among the students about how parents treat their children.
F
近期某网站就校车安全问题进行了一次社会调查，结果见下图。请根据图示用英语写一篇短文，介绍调查结果并谈谈你的看法，供有关部门参考。
注意：150词左右；文章的开头已给出；提示词：报废车abandoned vehicles
Recently a survey on school buses has been conducted on a website. The result is as follows.
书面表达Possible versions:
A.
With the development of the Internet, nowadays many students own QQs. As is shown in the chart, the rate of students who owned QQs increased greatly from 2008 to 2011. Back in 2008, only 20% of the students had QQs; one year later, the rate became twice as large.
In 2010 half of them had QQs and the rate in 2011 rose to 60%. Clearly, it is tending to increase.
In my opinion, the increase can be accounted for two factors. For one thing, the widespread use of the Internet makes it convenient for students to communicate with each other. For another, QQ provides all kinds of entertainments, such as playing games and enjoying music. What's more, QQ has gradually become the main means for the public to know the latest news.
Personally, students should make proper use of and not be addicted to QQ, and only when we do so can it serve its purpose.
(155 words)
B
In recent years, many young students have forgotten some Chinese traditional virtues. Worse still, in many students’ minds, the idea of filial piety to their parents has been discounted and even lost.
As far as I’m concerned, there are different reasons leading to young students lacking the sense of thanksgiving to their parents. Firstly, they are often self-centered, considering themselves to be number ones in the family, forgetting thanks. Secondly, they always take their parents’ cultivation, teachers’ teaching and social offering for granted. Thirdly, it is related to the education of our society, family and school, where education focuses only on knowledge teaching, forgetting all about traditional good virtues.
Therefore, we should do something to change this phenomenon. We believe building harmonious school campus needs thanksgiving education. So schools should add virtue education to their routine while young students should learn to be respectful and grateful. It is essential in building a harmonious society and developing Chinese traditional goodness.
(159 words)
C
Recently an online survey on traveling has been conducted.
In the survey, people are asked about how often and why they travel, and the results are as follows.
Chart 1 shows that 33% of the people often go traveling, the reason for which lies in the fact that they have enough time and money. Nearly half of the people do it now and then, while those who seldom go out to travel account for 21%.
As is shown in Chart 2, people travel for different reasons. The largest percentage of people, about 48%, put enjoying beautiful natural scenery in the first place for their travel. Over a quarter of them enjoy learning about culture and customs and 20% prefer to visit places of interest. Also there are a small number of people who travel mainly for shopping
As for me, traveling is not only a good way to relax and enjoy myself but also a chance to broaden my horizons.
(151 words)
D
Exam is coming
As we can see in the picture, the boy is so worried about the coming exam that he feels dizzy, and even suffers from insomnia and mental illness.
It’s a fairly common phenomenon among us students. With the college entrance examination approaching, many students are suffering from exam anxiety. Some of the students feel nervous because they are not well prepared for the exam. Some feel dizzy because they stay up too late. Others just pay too much attention to the results.
If you have these symptoms, it’s time for you to take effective measures to deal with them. Firstly, make good use of time to fully prepare your lessons. Secondly, there is no need to feel nervous when you have some bad feelings. Taking a deep breath may be helpful. Thirdly, have enough sleep before exams and you will perform well in exams. Lastly, have the right attitude to exams and keep a calm state of mind.
I believe if you take these, success will be yours.
(167 words)
E
Recently our school has conducted a survey among the students about how parents treat their children.
According to Chart 1, three behaviors from parents are considered most welcome among the students 33.5% of the students feel happy that their parents trust them, laying a basic foundation for family communication. 31.7% are content to be in the equal position with their parents when they are talking with each other. Wheat’s more, 22.7% feel happy to receive constant praise or encouragement from their parents.
As is shown in Chart 2.32% of the students think their parents expect too much of them, especially in their studies, putting great pressure on them. While all parents love their children and want the best for them, with too much pressure, however, some children will feel they have failed if they are not accepted at a top school or university.
I think parents should have practical expectations for their children. This way, the children will feel more confident about themselves and really make a difference in the future.
F
Recently a survey on school buses has been conducted on a website. The result is as follows
As can be seen from the charts, only 36.13% of the interviewees trust school buses, while 40.34% show their distrust. The rest of them are not clear about it. Of those who show their disbelief in school buses, 35.29% are afraid of abandoned vehicles being used and nearly a quarter worry that school buses are often overloaded, which can cause serious traffic accidents. Over one fifth of them worry that school buses are not equipped with safety equipment like safety belts. Others blame drivers for breaking the speed limit.
As far as I’m concerned, effective measures should be taken to ensure the safety of school buses. More money should be invested to improve the quality of school buses. Besides, all the school buses should be examined regularly. Meanwhile, school bus drivers should take more responsibility for the safety of the students.
(159 words)
Part Six: 书面表达部分
答题应试技巧：
牢记“一式、两头、三写、四关”的应试要诀。一式，是关注文章体裁，写对格式；两头，即写好文章的开头和结尾；三写，是大小写、拼写和书写无误；四关，也就是过好内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关和习惯表达关。具体如下：
1. 注重审题，对写的内容做到心中有数。首先，应通过审题明确文章的体裁。其次，应注重时态及语态，认真琢磨其内容的英语表达方式，避免汉式英语。最后着手写时要注意分段。
2. 内容要点是否齐全；句子语法（包括：时态、语态、用词、句法和结构格式等）是否正确；词汇是否准确多样；句式结构是否丰富多彩；逻辑关系词使用是否到位；是否合理使用连接词和过渡性词语；标点符号、英语字母大小写是否规范。
3. 在表达清晰明了的前提下适当使用有把握的复杂结构和高级词汇。
4. 注重英语习惯，使所写句子准确地道，注意表达时的切换，避免汉式英语。
5. 注重开头和结尾的技巧。
6. 新标准对写作的要求增加了情感因素，所以发挥自己的观点时注重思想性，力图提高文章思想内涵。
7. 注重书写，追求卷面美观。书面表达属于主观性试题，阅卷老师的主观印象直接关系到考生的得分高低。
8. 通读全文，检查疏漏。
忌：书写潦草、单词模糊不清、左右明显不齐、随意涂改、缺乏分段、字数太多或太少（应在130-170间）
●写作典型习题：
A
请根据对某校这段时间学生中拥有QQ号人数的调查写一篇文章，要求描述变化、分析原因并谈谈看法。
2008 2009 2010 2011
20% 40% 50% 60%
B
近些年, 由于各种原因, 对父母的孝顺之心, 感恩之心, 在许多青年学生心中已经大大折扣, 甚至越来越淡漠. 根据这种现象, 谈谈你的看法.
注意: 孝心filial piety
打折扣discount
C
近日某网站对人们外出旅游的频率和目的进行了一次问卷调查，结果见下图。请根据图表提供的信息用英语写一篇短文，介绍此次调查结果，并谈谈你自己外出旅游的目的。词数150左右。文章的开头已经给出。
表1
表2
One possible version
Recently an online survey on traveling has been conducted. ______________________________________________________________________________
D
请根据下面提供的漫画所反应的现象和问题，
写一篇题为 “Exam is coming”的短文, 你的短
文应该包含：
1. 漫画描述和反映的问题及原因是什么？
2. 请联系实际,就我们应该怎样正确面对这样的
问题发表自己的看法。
要求：1. 参照图及所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。
2. 词数150 左右。作文中不得提及考生所
在学校和本人姓名。
3. 参考词汇：失眠insomnia
E
假如你校最近就家长应该如何对待孩子的问题进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1中提供的信息描述调查结果，并针对图表2的其中一个数据所反映的情况写出你的看法。
词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
Recently our school has conducted a survey among the students about how parents treat their children.
F
近期某网站就校车安全问题进行了一次社会调查，结果见下图。请根据图示用英语写一篇短文，介绍调查结果并谈谈你的看法，供有关部门参考。
注意：150词左右；文章的开头已给出；提示词：报废车abandoned vehicles
Recently a survey on school buses has been conducted on a website. The result is as follows.
书面表达Possible versions:
A.
With the development of the Internet, nowadays many students own QQs. As is shown in the chart, the rate of students who owned QQs increased greatly from 2008 to 2011. Back in 2008, only 20% of the students had QQs; one year later, the rate became twice as large.
In 2010 half of them had QQs and the rate in 2011 rose to 60%. Clearly, it is tending to increase.
In my opinion, the increase can be accounted for two factors. For one thing, the widespread use of the Internet makes it convenient for students to communicate with each other. For another, QQ provides all kinds of entertainments, such as playing games and enjoying music. What's more, QQ has gradually become the main means for the public to know the latest news.
Personally, students should make proper use of and not be addicted to QQ, and only when we do so can it serve its purpose.
(155 words)
B
In recent years, many young students have forgotten some Chinese traditional virtues. Worse still, in many students’ minds, the idea of filial piety to their parents has been discounted and even lost.
As far as I’m concerned, there are different reasons leading to young students lacking the sense of thanksgiving to their parents. Firstly, they are often self-centered, considering themselves to be number ones in the family, forgetting thanks. Secondly, they always take their parents’ cultivation, teachers’ teaching and social offering for granted. Thirdly, it is related to the education of our society, family and school, where education focuses only on knowledge teaching, forgetting all about traditional good virtues.
Therefore, we should do something to change this phenomenon. We believe building harmonious school campus needs thanksgiving education. So schools should add virtue education to their routine while young students should learn to be respectful and grateful. It is essential in building a harmonious society and developing Chinese traditional goodness.
(159 words)
C
Recently an online survey on traveling has been conducted.
In the survey, people are asked about how often and why they travel, and the results are as follows.
Chart 1 shows that 33% of the people often go traveling, the reason for which lies in the fact that they have enough time and money. Nearly half of the people do it now and then, while those who seldom go out to travel account for 21%.
As is shown in Chart 2, people travel for different reasons. The largest percentage of people, about 48%, put enjoying beautiful natural scenery in the first place for their travel. Over a quarter of them enjoy learning about culture and customs and 20% prefer to visit places of interest. Also there are a small number of people who travel mainly for shopping
As for me, traveling is not only a good way to relax and enjoy myself but also a chance to broaden my horizons.
(151 words)
D
Exam is coming
As we can see in the picture, the boy is so worried about the coming exam that he feels dizzy, and even suffers from insomnia and mental illness.
It’s a fairly common phenomenon among us students. With the college entrance examination approaching, many students are suffering from exam anxiety. Some of the students feel nervous because they are not well prepared for the exam. Some feel dizzy because they stay up too late. Others just pay too much attention to the results.
If you have these symptoms, it’s time for you to take effective measures to deal with them. Firstly, make good use of time to fully prepare your lessons. Secondly, there is no need to feel nervous when you have some bad feelings. Taking a deep breath may be helpful. Thirdly, have enough sleep before exams and you will perform well in exams. Lastly, have the right attitude to exams and keep a calm state of mind.
I believe if you take these, success will be yours.
(167 words)
E
Recently our school has conducted a survey among the students about how parents treat their children.
According to Chart 1, three behaviors from parents are considered most welcome among the students 33.5% of the students feel happy that their parents trust them, laying a basic foundation for family communication. 31.7% are content to be in the equal position with their parents when they are talking with each other. Wheat’s more, 22.7% feel happy to receive constant praise or encouragement from their parents.
As is shown in Chart 2.32% of the students think their parents expect too much of them, especially in their studies, putting great pressure on them. While all parents love their children and want the best for them, with too much pressure, however, some children will feel they have failed if they are not accepted at a top school or university.
I think parents should have practical expectations for their children. This way, the children will feel more confident about themselves and really make a difference in the future.
F
Recently a survey on school buses has been conducted on a website. The result is as follows
As can be seen from the charts, only 36.13% of the interviewees trust school buses, while 40.34% show their distrust. The rest of them are not clear about it. Of those who show their disbelief in school buses, 35.29% are afraid of abandoned vehicles being used and nearly a quarter worry that school buses are often overloaded, which can cause serious traffic accidents. Over one fifth of them worry that school buses are not equipped with safety equipment like safety belts. Others blame drivers for breaking the speed limit.
As far as I’m concerned, effective measures should be taken to ensure the safety of school buses. More money should be invested to improve the quality of school buses. Besides, all the school buses should be examined regularly. Meanwhile, school bus drivers should take more responsibility for the safety of the students.
(159 words)
