2024年高考英语考前冲刺：书面表达考点锁定及命题预测

　　2024年高考英语考前冲刺书面表达考点锁定及命题预测

　　一、2024高考英语书面表达预测

　　（2024年5月12日）

　　高考英语写作，即根据提示进行书面表达，有效的组织自己的思想，自己的逻辑，正确地运用语文载体，连贯地传递信息，表达意思，有效运用所学语言知识。高考英语书面表达是英语考试的重头戏之一，而且非常适合考前集中突破。高考英语作文题目的命题历来是“情理之中，意料之外”。“情理之中”即高考英语写作皆是“学生话题、现实生活、热点焦点话题”；“意料之外”则指高考英语作文题目经常与考生直接关心的社会热点话题无直接联系，但仔细琢磨，又会发现一些联系，就是说“热点归热点，关键找角度”。注意：1）要把原文的内容表达的清楚，顺畅2） 字数一定要达到要求3）符合出题者的要求4）复合句、高级词汇的使用。

　　要求考生必须把以下范文背诵并默写过，高考时则可根据实际进行套用，大脑提取信息，信手拈来高分！

　　预测一：

　　当前，“酒后驾车”（drinking and driving）成了人们热议的话题。请你根据以下提示，针对“酒后驾车”谈谈个人看法： 1．“酒后驾车”的危害。如：引发交通事故，造成交通阻塞，威胁生命安全， 造成财产损失等。 2．你的建议。 注意：1．词数100左右； 2．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Nowadays,drinking and driving is becoming a heated topic among people in China.Here,I’d like to air my views about it.

　　【参考范文】

　　Nowadays,drinking and driving is becoming a heated topic among people in China.Here,I’d like to air my views about it.As is known to us all,drinking and driving is a sort of terrible behavior that will threaten the safety of people,including the driver himself.Many of the traffic accidents caused by drinking and driving have brought about traffic jams,injuries and even deaths.Besides,a great deal of money has to be spent treating the injured and repairing the broken cars.I strongly suggest effective measures be taken before things get worse.Laws and regulations should be strengthened to punish those performing drinking and driving.Meanwhile,the public,especially drivers,should be more aware of public safety.I hope by doing so,drinking and driving can be things of past.

　　预测二：

　　（一）

　　人情冷暖，何至于此？10月13日下午5时30分许，一出惨剧 (tragedy) 发生在广东佛山：年仅两岁的女童小悦悦先后三次被车碾过。而让人难以理解的是，七分钟内从女童身边经过的十八个路人，竟然对此不闻不问。最后，一位捡垃圾的阿姨把小悦悦抱到路边并找到她的妈妈。经医院抢救无效，最终离世。根据这则资讯，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，对司机和路人的冷漠（indifference）加以简要的评论。开头已给出，不计入总词数。Recently, a tragedy happened in Foshan, Guangdong Province. A two-year-old girl was run over by two buses for three times and the two drivers left directly.

　　【参考范文】Recently, a tragedy happened in Foshan, Guangdong Province. A two-year-old girl was run over by two buses for three times and the two drivers left directly. What’s worse, while the girl was lying in the street bleeding and crying in pain, 18 people passed by but nobody stopped to do anything to save the girl. At the news, I think both the drivers and those passers by are to blame for their selfishness and indifference, whatever reasons they can give. In life, every one can meet trouble and need help, in which case all the other people should spare no efforts. So, here, I just call on the whole society to love and help each other.If we cannot defeat indifference, perhaps, one day, we will get ourselves killed by it.

　　（二）

　　假设你叫李华，是校报通讯员。上周三你班召开了一次班会，会上重点讨论“老人摔倒要不要扶起”这一话题，原因是近几年发生过多起因扶起摔倒老人而引火烧身的官司。你班同学对此进行了激烈辩论，请你结合辩论情况，用英语为校报写一篇报道，并发表自己的看法。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。4.参考词汇官司：lawsuit

　　A class meeting was held in our class last Wednesday. At the meeting we classmates had a heated debate on “whether we should help the old people up when they fall over.”

　　【参考范文】

　　A class meeting was held in our class last Wednesday. At the meeting we classmates had a heated debate on “whether we should help the old people up when they fall over.”Some classmates think we have responsibility to help them, because we Chinese have fine traditions to help people in trouble. While others have quite different opinions. They think we should leave a distance off and help to call 120, because in recent years many lawsuits have happened due to helping the old people. The helpers had to pay the injured a lot of money.In my opinion, when we help the old people, we should depend on specific situation. When the old person is in great danger and badly needs help, we should give an immediate first aid and help to send him or her to the nearest hospital. When the old person is slightly injured, we’d better help to call the police.

　　（三）

　　假设你叫李明，下面是你的一位外国笔友Kristie给你写的电子邮件，询问有关小悦悦事件的情况。

　　Dear Li Ming, I learned from a news flash that a twoyear-old girl was ignored by more than a dozen passers-by after being run over twice in a south China town．I’m very shocked．I used to think the Chinese were hardworking and kindhearted, and they really were when I was on a visit in China two years ago．So I doubt whether it was true news．Can you tell me what you learned about this incident?

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Kristie

　　请你给她回一封邮件，要点如下：1．社会陷入自责和反思；2．某些路人的冷漠或许另有原因，可最终还是有一名拾荒阿姨挺身而出；3．单个事件不能代表中国，助人为乐一直是中国的传统美德。注意：

　　1．不能照抄原信件语句；

　　2．可自由发挥添加细节；

　　3．词数100左右；

　　4．回信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：伦理道德ethical and moral （adj．）;

　　virtue （n．）

　　Dear Kristie, I was in very low spirits

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Li Ming

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Kristie,

　　I was in very low spirits when hearing this shocking news, and so was the whole nation．All the people have been undertaking a thoughtful review of the ethical and moral challenges we are faced with．While we blame those hardhearted passersby, there might be deep reasons behind the scenes．For various reasons there is a growing tendency for people to keep away from being involved in such accidents．However, on no account shall we tolerate this heartless behavior．Luckily in the story you mentioned, an old lady, who earned her life by collecting rubbish, came to the little girl’s aid and helped rush her to hospital．So we have every reason to believe that the Chinese traditional virtues of being ready to help others will remain forever．

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Li Ming

　　预测三：

　　近年来，由食品卫生安全引发的问题在校园内外时有发生。你校上周就发生了一次食物中毒事件，两名学生在校外吃了一种油炸食品而引起胃痛。请你以李华的名义用英文给学校英语报社编辑写一封信，谈谈你对这一现象的看法。词数：100左右。内容必须包括：1.有些商家只顾赚钱，无视人们的健康和安全；2.学生应尽量在校园内吃饭，不要到校外乱吃；3.为了防止类似事件发生， 提出你的建议。Dear editor,

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Li Hua

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear editor,Last week,two students of our school suffered from stomachache because they ate some poisonous fried food outside campus.Nowadays in our country,some business people care little about people’s health and safety as long as they can make money.Some even sell polluted or poisonous food to consumers and this often leads to serious health problems.In order to prevent such tragedy happening again,we students should try to avoid buying food from the stores or stalls out of the school,and have meals in school dining rooms.Only in this way can we protect ourselves.Besides,the local government and the school should take practical measures to ensure students’ health and life security.I’m expecting your advice and ideas.

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Li Hua

　　预测四：

　　假如你叫李华，是一位高中生。随着科技的发展，iPod已成为中学生的新宠。用iPod既可听音乐、阅读纯文本电子书，又可玩电子游戏。请你用英语给某英语报社写一封信，谈谈中学生使用iPod的情况。信的内容须包括以下几点：1.使用iPod对学习的好处。2.对课堂纪律和学习可能产生的负面影响。3.提出自己的建议并说明理由。注意：1.开头、结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；2.词数100左右。

　　Dear Editor,I’m a senior high school student named Li Hua.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Editor,

　　I’m a senior high school student named Li Hua.Now many students have iPods and think it’s a fashion to use them.Using an iPod,we can listen to music,download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen.Some students,however,bring their iPods to classroom and listen to music with earphones,which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed.What’s worse,some of them even waste precious time in class playing video games.In my opinion,as a student,we should make good use of iPod to help achieve academic success.Classroom is a place for students to study,and therefore,the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPods in a proper way.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　预测五：

　　近年微博（microblog）在中国越来越流行，2011年也被有关媒体称为“微博元年”。假设你是校报记者，请根据下列提示为校报写一篇介绍微博的英语短文。1.非常方便，人们可以随时利用微博来表达心声，交流想法；2.给人们提供了一种释放压力的方式；3.与朋友分享心情，增进他们之间的了解；4.也有潜在的危险，有可能泄露个人隐私或其他重要信息；5.综上所述，使用微博要谨慎。词数：100左右（已给部分不计入总词数）Microblog has become part of our life.

　　【参考范文】Microblog has become part of our life. It is very convenient for people to express their feelings instantly at any time. Besides, it provides a chance for people to release their inner stress. By showing their heartfelt emotions on the microblog, their friends may also know about their condition and can offer timely comfort. However, microblog can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away people’s privacy and other significant information. All in all, microblog provides us with some concerns as well as comfort and large quantities of information, so we should be careful while using it.

　　预测六：

　　为开展“敬老”活动，你校特意邀请了梁会兰女士来做报告。梁会兰女士是北京下岗工人，16年来，她义务照顾十几位孤寡老人和残疾老人的生活起居。请你据此以校学生会的名义写一个通知，要点如下：1.报告的目的；2.报告人介绍；3.报告时间和地点：2011年12月26日下午4:00~6:00,学校报告厅；4.参加人员：全体学生。注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3.通知的格式已为你写好，不计入总词数。

　　Notice

　　Fellow students,

　　December 14,2011

　　Students’ Union

　　【参考范文】

　　Notice

　　Fellow students,In order to call on everybody to respect the elderly,our school will invite Ms Liang Huilan to give us a report.Liang Huilan,a laid off worker in Beijing,has been voluntarily taking good care of more than ten elderly people who live alone or have disabilities over the past 16 years,for which she has won great respect from people around her and has been awarded various honors by the government.The report will be given in the lecture hall of our school on the afternoon of December 26,and it will last two hours(from 4:00 p.m.to 6:00 p.m.).All the students are required to attend it.Don’t be late.

　　December 14,2011

　　Students’ Union

　　预测七：

　　假如你叫王丽,是一位高中生。请你用英语给报社写一封信，反映如下情况并谈谈你的想法：现在有很多学生使用手机,一是认为这是种时髦,二是认为便于跟家人和朋友联系。一些学生把手机带进教室，在课堂上经常听见手机的铃声。破坏课堂纪律。有的同学还在课堂上发短信息，浪费宝贵的时间。建议：教室是学习的地方，需要安静；学生不应该在教室里使用手机；应该集中注意力学习。（附：自己再想一条建议）注意： 信的开头已给出；词数: 100左右。Dear Editor,I’m a senior high school student．Yours sincerely,

　　Wang Li

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Editor,I’m a senior high school student.Now many students use mobile phones.They think it’s a fashion to use mobile phones. Besides,it’s very convenient to get in touch with their families and friends by using mobile phones.But some students break the rules in class.They bring their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear the ring of mobile phones in class.Some of them even waste precious time in class typing short messages on the mobile phones.In my opinion,the classroom is a place for students to gain knowledge.Those with mobile phones shouldn’t take mobile phones to the classroom.We are supposed to concentrate on our studies.The school should make a rule to forbid the students to use mobile phones in the classroom.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Wang Li

　　预测八：

　　请根据下面提供的内容写一篇人物简介。

　　1982年2月26日出生，从小就对运动有天赋，6岁开始练习羽毛球，9岁转学网球；主要经历及获得荣誉1.2002年：离开网球场，到大学读书;两年后重返球场；

　　2.在包括她丈夫在内的几位著名教练的指导下，进步神速；

　　3.2011年：法国公开赛女子单打冠军。第一位获得大满贯赛事单打冠军的亚洲网球选手。参考词汇：1.法国公开赛:French Open

　　2.女子单打冠军：women’s singles title

　　3.大满贯：Grand Slam

　　1.词数100左右；

　　2.短文中不能出现本人相关信息。

　　Born on Feb.26,1982,Li Na has a gift for sports from her childhood.She began to practice badminton at the age of six and was introduced to play tennis when she was nine.In 2002 she took a break from tennis to study at university,but two years later she returned.With the help of some famous coaches,including her husband,she has been making greater and greater achievements.As a result,she won the 2011 French Open women’s singles title,becoming the first player from Asia to win a Grand Slam in singles.

　　预测九：

　　法国哲学家卢梭说过：“No Thanksgiving would be no virtue.”（没有感恩就没有真正的美德。）如今社会上一些人缺乏感恩之心，少数人甚至在父母年老体弱时都不愿意赡养。请你结合自己的实际，谈几点父母值得你感恩的地方，以及将来你会做些什么来报答父母的养育之恩。注意：1．短文的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

　　2．100词左右。（感恩:thanksgiving）Not only do our parents give us life, but they also give us endless love and support, always sharing our happiness and sorrow.

　　【参考范文】

　　Not only do our parents give us life, but they also give us endless love and support, always sharing our happiness and sorrow. I’m very grateful to my parents. They give me so much love and spare no efforts to support me. I still remember once I was seriously ill, they were so worried and almost kept me company the whole night. Now I’m in Senior 3.Luckily for me, my parents can understand my stressful condition and often communicate with me with encouraging words. Furthermore, they give me enough personal space, which I appreciate so much. What I should do now is to study hard. When I grow up, I will try my best to make my parents live a happy life.