揭阳市2024高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（7）附参考范文
揭阳市2024高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（7）附参考范文
第八套
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误对标有题号的每一行作出判断如无错误在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉在该行右边横线上写出该词并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in
69_________
a rainy day. We would be much happier and are able to study
70_________
better if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters,
71_________
photos and paintings, that could certainly broaden our horizons
72_________
and enrich our lives. Original art work are too expensive, but
73_________
unless we buy art posters, the cost will be low. Using only a
74_________
little money, it can make our school a nicer place.
75_________
参考答案、、短文改错
66. happily→happy
67. we后加are
68. thought→think
69. in→on
70 去are或are→be
71.正确
72.that→which
73.work→works
74. unless→if
75. it→we
高考英语书面表达常用词汇句型集锦
▲举例：for example，for instance，take…for example，such as，like，and so on，so on and so forth，and so on and on and on， etc.等。
▲说明：that's to say，in other words，namely，等。
▲因果： therefore，as a result，thus，because，because of，thanks to…，owing to…，due to …等
▲递进：then，besides，in addition， furthermore，moreover， what's more等。
▲顺序：
firstly， secondly，thirdly， finally；
in the first place，in the second place， in the third place，
To begin with，then，furthermore，finally；
to start with， next， in addition，finally；
first and foremost，besides， last but not least；
most important of all，moreover，finally（以上为时间顺序）
in the front of，in front of …，before， behind， at the back of， on the right/left（of），to the right /left of…，on the other side of …，in the center of …，in the middle of …，at the beginning of ，
at the end of …，by the side of …，on the top of …，at the foot of …，on the bottom of， inside，outside， upstairs， downstairs（以上为空间顺序）
▲转折：nevertheless，however，although， though， but，on the country，after all， oppositely等。
▲总结： in short， in a word， in general， generally speaking， finally，at last，as far as I know，in brief， briefly speaking， in the end， as a matter of fact， in reality， in fact， on the whole， in conclusion， on account of this， therefore等。
▲强调： really， indeed，certainly，surely，for sure， above all等。
▲对比： in the same way，just as，in common with， compared with，
on the one hand…，on the other hand，
for one thing… ，for another，similarly等。
▲平行：and，both…and，as well as，as well，neither…nor…or，either…or，not only…but also
正确使用时间状语从句的复合句、带宾语从句的复合句、强调句型、带定语从句的复合句、带主语从句的复合句、 条件句、让步或转折的句式等
1. 带时间状语从句的复合句
①It's also possible a pickpocket stole your money while you were shopping. （2004北京卷）
这类时间状语从句不仅考得频繁，而且连词when， while， as， before， after甚至by the time都考到了，时态上现在时、过去时、过去进行时和过去完成时等都出现了。而且有些年份带时间状语从句的复合句还同时出现多次。因此我们建议广大考生应加强训练这类复合句，在高考中尽量少犯错误，注意时态。
2. 带宾语从句的复合句
①I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent， and how well you've learned Chinese.
（NMET2004， I）
②I am so sorry that I won't be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon. （NMET2004， III）
③I would also think that the growth population should be brought under control so that we'll have a better hometown in future. （2004江苏卷）
3. 带定语从句的复合句
①If there is anything I can do for you， I would be more than glad to help. （NMET2004， I）
②As is shown on Chart 2， only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities. （2004北京卷）
4. 其他
▲强调句型 It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister. （NMET1993）
▲带主语从句的复合句
①Here is how you can find us
②On the other side， where the playground used to be now stands another new building-our library.（NMET1999）
▲so that句型：
①I became so impatient that I had to go to explain my difficulty. （2004广东卷）
②I am so sorry that I won't be able to …tomorrow afternoon. （NMET2004， III）
③The noise was so loud that I couldn't go on studying. （2004广东卷）
▲让步或转折：
①I don't know about others， but I used to have to work even at weekends doing homework and attending classes as well. （NMET2001）
②Although the city is modern and convenient， there are still some problems， such as air pollution， crowdedness and noise.
▲条件句：
①If there is anything I can do for you， I would be more than glad to help. （NMET2004，I）
三、书面表达开头和结尾的写作
1.书面表达的开头俗话说万事开头难。其实，一点也不难。高考英语书面表达的开头句一般已为你写好。你要做的是分段缩进重起第二段。注意千万不要接着已写好的首句。一是不美观，二是不便于阅卷老师细览。那么你的起头句实际上是第二段了。开始句根据要求一般可以写的漂亮一点，即要用一些好的套语开始。比如：
①As is shown on Chart 2， only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities.（2004北京卷）
可是很多考生总在开头处写的不尽如人意，总喜欢搞一些生造的句子或词语来开头，这是一大忌。有些开头可以以套语开始，或以俗语开始比较有力，这样就容易被老师看好。档位在开始时就已定得很高了。
2.书面表达的结尾：⑦⑧结尾在书面表达的写作中占有很重要的地位，通常结尾都要算一个内容要求，所以，写好结尾且让阅卷老师有一个完整的印象是十分必要的。好的结尾可以是一段，由一句或几句话组成，能使全文增色。例如：
①If there is anything I can do for you， I would be more than glad to help.（ 2004全国卷I）
②It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.
③What's more， some statues of famous people will be set up to encourage us to work harder. Don't you think it a wonderful program？ （2004福建卷）
④In short， the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.（2004湖北卷）
中间段落句
1
---人---tend to have a favorable attitude toward ------
2
Using bicycle contributes greatly to people’s physical fitness as well as easing traffic jams.
使用自行车有助于人们的身体健康，并极大地缓解了交通阻塞。
3
The harder you work, the more progress you make.你越努力，你越进步。
4
Many people seem to overlook the basic fact:许多人似乎忽视了这个基本事实：
5 Listening to music enables us to feel relaxed.听音乐能使我们放松。
6 On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge我们绝对不能忽视知识的价值。
7 There is no one but longs to.------人们都希望------ So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.时间是如此珍贵，我们不能浪费它。
结尾句
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that, although ——indeed bring us many obvious advantages, its disadvantages shouldn’t be ignored and far outweigh its advantages. 通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论：尽管----很多优点，但它的缺点不可忽视，且远大于它的优点。
From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that____
.综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论……
It is difficult to say whether _____is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of______. However, from a personal point of view,I find----
在总体上很难说……是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现…
个人观点:
As for me, I’m in favor of the opinion that ———for the following reasons: 就我而言，我同意
观点。
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ____.
I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______.
完全同意……这种观点（陈述），主要理由如下：
But ______and ______have their own advantages. For example, _____, while_____. Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to______.
但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势（好处）。例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于（喜欢）……
号召：In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can ______in the future.
总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……
随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。
With the development of society, ______.So it"s urgent and necessary to ____.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.
严重影响社会秩序
seriously disturb social order
促进经济和社会发展
to promote economic
对健康有好处
make for good health
对健康有危害
a hazard to health
破坏环境、污染环境
poisoning the environment
环境保护
protect the environment
浪费时间、浪费金钱、浪费精力
a waste of money,time and energy
促进学习
facilitating learning
影响学习
influnce one's study
提高自身水平
upgrade oneself
反对
disapproval
赞成
in favor of
★ 形容词：
1. 贫穷的：poor = needy = impoverished = poverty-stricken
2. 富裕的：rich = wealthy = affluent = well-to-do = well-off
3. 优秀的：excellent = eminent = top = outstanding
4. 积极的，好的：good = conducive = beneficial=advantageous
5. 消极的，不良的：bad = detrimental= baneful =undesirable
6. 明显的：obvious = apparent = evident =manifest
7. 健康的: healthy = robust = sound = wholesome
8. 惊人的：surprising = amazing = extraordinary = miraculous
9. 美丽的：beautiful = attractive = gorgeous = eye-catching
10. 有活力的：energetic = dynamic = vigorous =animated
11. 流行的： popular = prevailing = prevalent= pervasive
★ 动词：
1. 提高，加强：improve = enhance= promote = strengthen = optimize
2 减轻: ease = alleviate = relieve = lighten
3. 解决：solve =resolve =address = tackle =cope with = deal with
4. 拆除：destroy = tear down = knock down = eradicate
5. 培养: develop = cultivate = foster = nurture
6. 激发，鼓励：encourage = motivate = stimulate = spur
7. 认为： think = assert= hold = claim = argue
8. 完成：complete = fulfill = accomplish= achieve
9. 保留：keep = preserve = retain = hold
10. 有害于：destroy = impair = undermine = jeopardize
★ 名词：
1. 影响：influence= impact
2. 危险：danger = perils =hazard
3. 污染：pollution = contamination4. 人类：human beings= mankind = human race
5. 老人： old people= the old = the elderly = the aged = senior citizens
6. 幸福：happiness = cheerfulness = well-being
7. 老师：teachers = instructors = educators = lecturers
8. 教育：education = schooling = family parenting = upbringing
9. 青少年：young people = youngsters = youths = adolescents
10. 优点：advantage = merits = superiority = virtue
11. 责任： responsibility = obligation = duty = liability
12. 能力： ability = capacity = power = skill
13. 职业： job = career = employment = profession
14. 娱乐： enjoyment = pastimes = recreation= entertainment
15. 孩子： children = offspring = descendant= kid
★ 短语：
1. 充满了：be filled with = be awash with = be inundate with = be saturated with
2. 努力：struggle for = aspire after = strive for = spare no efforts for
3. 从事： embark on = take up = set about = go in for
4. 在当代: in contemporary society = in present-day society= in this day and age
5. 大量的: a host of = a multitude of = a vast number of = a vast amount of
高考英语书面表达指导
英语书面表达经典句型必背
1.英语作文中常用关联词:
并列关系:and,as well as,also...
递进关系:besides,in addition,moreover,what’s more...
