考研英语小作文批改邀请信5-7分例文2
考研英语待批改作文：
5-7分
第二篇
Dear Miss Yuan,
There will be a celebrity party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at 6 oclock in the evening. This will be followed by a serious of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 oclock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. Whats more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners.
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the next Wednesday.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Miss Yuan,
There will be a celebrity(改为celebration) party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at 6 oclock in the evening. This will be followed by a serious of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 oclock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. Whats more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners.
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the next Wednesday.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
7分
同学你好，写作文的时候再细心一些，注意单词的拼写。背单词时要把词义背牢。
考研英语待批改作文：
5-7分
第二篇
Dear Miss Yuan,
There will be a celebrity party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at 6 oclock in the evening. This will be followed by a serious of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 oclock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. Whats more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners.
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the next Wednesday.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Miss Yuan,
There will be a celebrity(改为celebration) party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at 6 oclock in the evening. This will be followed by a serious of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 oclock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. Whats more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners.
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the next Wednesday.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
7分
同学你好，写作文的时候再细心一些，注意单词的拼写。背单词时要把词义背牢。
