六级写作高分常见错误（4）

　　2) Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewing through my camera.

　　Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewed through my camera.

　　七、修饰语误置

　　1) Spoken English is an important part for learning English people.

　　Spoken English is an important part for people learning English.

　　2)To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

　　To keep the air clean, we must move to the countryside the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

　　八、垂悬修饰语

　　1) Having carried out economic reforms in our country, peoples living standard has been greatly improved.

　　Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people have greatly improved their living standard.

　　2)To tell my friend the good news, the letter was posted at once.

　　To tell my friend the good news, I posted the letter at once.

　　九、平行错误

　　1) While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can be increased.

　　While we reduce the number of vehicles, we can increase the speed of traffic.

　　2) Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and how long it lasted.

　　Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty and length of the course. / Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me how difficult the course was and how long it lasted.

　　2) Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewing through my camera.

　　Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewed through my camera.

　　七、修饰语误置

　　1) Spoken English is an important part for learning English people.

　　Spoken English is an important part for people learning English.

　　2)To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

　　To keep the air clean, we must move to the countryside the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

　　八、垂悬修饰语

　　1) Having carried out economic reforms in our country, peoples living standard has been greatly improved.

　　Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people have greatly improved their living standard.

　　2)To tell my friend the good news, the letter was posted at once.

　　To tell my friend the good news, I posted the letter at once.

　　九、平行错误

　　1) While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can be increased.

　　While we reduce the number of vehicles, we can increase the speed of traffic.

　　2) Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and how long it lasted.

　　Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty and length of the course. / Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me how difficult the course was and how long it lasted.