六级写作高分常见错误(3)
2) They suggest that we should choose only the good books to read and never touch the bad ones.
They suggest that we should choose only good books to read and never touch bad ones.
四、代词错误
1. 偷梁换柱
1)An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, you should not plagiarize.
An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, he should not plagiarize.
2)If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.
If we cheat others, friends will never believe us and they will leave us along. / If you cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.
2. 指代不明
1)He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed.
He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting. / He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobody believed.
2)Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden they have to bear.
Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden students have to bear.
五、形容词、副词错误
1)What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look differently.
What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look different.
2)Surprising enough, he faces the failure very bravely.
Surprisingly enough, he faces the failure very bravely.
2) They suggest that we should choose only the good books to read and never touch the bad ones.
They suggest that we should choose only good books to read and never touch bad ones.
四、代词错误
1. 偷梁换柱
1)An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, you should not plagiarize.
An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, he should not plagiarize.
2)If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.
If we cheat others, friends will never believe us and they will leave us along. / If you cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.
2. 指代不明
1)He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed.
He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting. / He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobody believed.
2)Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden they have to bear.
Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden students have to bear.
五、形容词、副词错误
1)What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look differently.
What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look different.
2)Surprising enough, he faces the failure very bravely.
Surprisingly enough, he faces the failure very bravely.