12月英语四级考前作文预测及范文

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12月英语四级考前作文预测及范文

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Does a Student Need Private Tutoring? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:

  1)根据调查,目前在全国的大城市中有大约80%的中学生都有私人家教

  2)分析中学生请家教的利弊

  3)你的看法

  Does a Student Need Private Tutoring?  

  _______________________________________________________________________________

  _______________________________________________________________________________

  _______________________________________________________________________________

  行文思路

  本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析这种现象的利弊,提纲第3点要求谈谈我的看法,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

  根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述中学生请家教的现状;分析中学生请家教的利弊;谈谈我对中学生请家教现象的看法。

  高分范文

  Does a Student Need Private Tutoring?

  A recent investigation shows that about 70 percent of middle school students in cities have private tutors. Such a popular practice indicates that people are attaching greater importance to education. However, private tutoring has both advantages and disadvantages.

  Many parents have no enough ability or time to help their children in study. Private tutoring is a good solution to this problem. In addition, private tutoring is usually one-to-one, so the teacher can know the weak points as well as the strong points of the pupil, and thus teaching is, in most cases, directly to the point. On the other hand, private tutoring has its own disadvantages.

  For one thing, it takes up so much of the pupils time that he can hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment. For another, some tutors, busy shuttling from one family to another, tend to neglect their teaching duties as tutors.

  Considering the above-mentioned, I think the disadvantages of private tutoring outweigh its advantages.

  In my opinion, greater emphasis should be laid on classroom teaching and practice, on the improvement of teaching quality and on the tapping of the pupils potential. Only in this way can a new generation be healthily brought up.

  【亮点点评】

  非常关注。

  过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。

  有利有弊。弊大于利。

  弱点。优点。

  插入语。

  倾向于,往往。

  用于得出结论。considering用作介词,意为考虑到,鉴于。

  and连接的平行结构。

  only+状语位于句首,引起句子部分倒装。

  佳句临摩

  1.佳句:Teaching is, in most cases, directly to the point.

  临摩:无论多么困难的一项任务,只要有决心都能够完成。

  ___________________________________________________________________________.

  2.佳句:It takes up so much of the pupils time that they can har

  hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment.

  临摩:社会上有如此多的诱惑以至于稍一疏忽就可能误入歧途。

  ___________________________________________________________________________.

  3.佳句:Some tutors tend to neglect their regular teaching duties.

  临摩: 传统食物的烹饪往往很耗时,而且需要花费很多时间和精力去学习。

  ___________________________________________________________________________.

  【KEY】

  1. A task, no matter how difficult it is, can be accomplished, provided that one makes up his mind to do it.

  2. There are so many temptations in the society that with a little carelessness we may go astray.

  3. The cooking of traditional food tends to be time-consuming and takes much time and energy to learn.

  

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Does a Student Need Private Tutoring? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:

  1)根据调查,目前在全国的大城市中有大约80%的中学生都有私人家教

  2)分析中学生请家教的利弊

  3)你的看法

  Does a Student Need Private Tutoring?  

  _______________________________________________________________________________

  _______________________________________________________________________________

  _______________________________________________________________________________

  行文思路

  本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析这种现象的利弊,提纲第3点要求谈谈我的看法,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

  根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述中学生请家教的现状;分析中学生请家教的利弊;谈谈我对中学生请家教现象的看法。

  高分范文

  Does a Student Need Private Tutoring?

  A recent investigation shows that about 70 percent of middle school students in cities have private tutors. Such a popular practice indicates that people are attaching greater importance to education. However, private tutoring has both advantages and disadvantages.

  Many parents have no enough ability or time to help their children in study. Private tutoring is a good solution to this problem. In addition, private tutoring is usually one-to-one, so the teacher can know the weak points as well as the strong points of the pupil, and thus teaching is, in most cases, directly to the point. On the other hand, private tutoring has its own disadvantages.

  For one thing, it takes up so much of the pupils time that he can hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment. For another, some tutors, busy shuttling from one family to another, tend to neglect their teaching duties as tutors.

  Considering the above-mentioned, I think the disadvantages of private tutoring outweigh its advantages.

  In my opinion, greater emphasis should be laid on classroom teaching and practice, on the improvement of teaching quality and on the tapping of the pupils potential. Only in this way can a new generation be healthily brought up.

  【亮点点评】

  非常关注。

  过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。

  有利有弊。弊大于利。

  弱点。优点。

  插入语。

  倾向于,往往。

  用于得出结论。considering用作介词,意为考虑到,鉴于。

  and连接的平行结构。

  only+状语位于句首,引起句子部分倒装。

  佳句临摩

  1.佳句:Teaching is, in most cases, directly to the point.

  临摩:无论多么困难的一项任务,只要有决心都能够完成。

  ___________________________________________________________________________.

  2.佳句:It takes up so much of the pupils time that they can har

  hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment.

  临摩:社会上有如此多的诱惑以至于稍一疏忽就可能误入歧途。

  ___________________________________________________________________________.

  3.佳句:Some tutors tend to neglect their regular teaching duties.

  临摩: 传统食物的烹饪往往很耗时,而且需要花费很多时间和精力去学习。

  ___________________________________________________________________________.

  【KEY】

  1. A task, no matter how difficult it is, can be accomplished, provided that one makes up his mind to do it.

  2. There are so many temptations in the society that with a little carelessness we may go astray.

  3. The cooking of traditional food tends to be time-consuming and takes much time and energy to learn.

  

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