2023高考英语押题作文6-读后续写

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2023高考英语押题作文6-读后续写

第一节命题作文(满分15分)

假定你是高一新生李华，你的英国笔友Fred来信询问你入学第一天的情况。请你给他回一封信，内容包括：

1. 介绍学校的环境2. 谈谈对老师和同学的印象3. 你对高中生活的决心

I am delighted to hear from you. As you know, my new school life has already begun. My new school is quite large, mainly consisting of several teaching buildings, a library and a gymnasium. To my amazement, there is a beautiful lake in the campus, around which many students study after school. Meanwhile, my new teachers and classmates are both thoughtful and friendly. I easily adapt myself to my new life with their help. Lastly, I know my new life brings me not only excitement but also challenges. Therefore, I make a resolution to study harder than before in the followingthree years to realize my dream.

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我很高兴收到你的来信。如你所知，我的新校园生活已经开始了。我的新学校很大，主要是由几幢教学楼，一座图书馆和一座体育馆所构成的。令我惊奇的是，学校里竟然还有一面湖泊，在湖泊周围，放学后有很多同学在这里学习。与此同时，我的新老师和同学们既周到体贴又待人友好。在他们的帮助之下，我很快地适应了我的新生活。最后，我知道我的新生活给我带来的不止有兴奋，更加有挑战。因此，我下定决心在接下来的三年里更加努力地学习去实现我的梦想。

得分点简释：

1. be delighted to do sth 高兴做某事

2. hear from sb 收到某人的来信

3. As you know 如你所知

4. consist of ... (整体) 由...个体构成

5. To ones amazement 令某人惊讶不已的是

6. ... a beautiful lake in the campus, around which many students study... 定语从句

介词+ which 代替关系副词where引导定语从句

7. both ... and ... 既 ... 又 ...

8. thoughtful 体贴周到的近义词：considerate

9. adapt oneself to sth 使某人适应某事近义短语：accustom oneself to sth

10. with ones help 在某人的帮助之下

11. not only ... but also ... 不仅 ... 而且 ...

12. make a resolution to do sth 下决心做某事

13. in the following three years 在接下来的三年里

第二节故事续写(满分25分)

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

The other day I was travelling to San Antonio by train to visit my sister. The train was a little crowded and there was a young man sitting next to the window. Since it was a hot day, I wanted that window seat more than anything else at that time. As a young lady, I thought the young man would give me the seat if I asked him. So I smiled at him and asked whether he could give up his seat and take another one. To my surprise, he said he needed that seat and refused my request. I had no choice but to take the seat next to him.

The train was crossing station after station. The weather was so hot that the scenery outside the window could not attract my interest. I had nothing to do, so I started to focus my attention on the young man and stare at him up and down. He wore a blue shirt and there was a shawl (披巾) on his legs. He did not even rise from his seat once, which made me feel a little bit strange. Only a madman would use a shawl in such hot weather, I thought.

After the five-hour long journey, the train arrived at the final stop. I picked up my bag and stood up, waiting for the door to open. I gave a neglectful (不经意的) look at the young man and asked, “The train has arrived at the final station. Are you not getting off ? ”Hearing my words, he began to smile at me and said in a calm voice, “Someone has to come for me and take me off the train because I cant do it by my self. ”I gave my full attention to his legs, only to find there was nothing under that shawl!

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汪老师参考译文

几天前，我乘火车前往圣安东尼奥去拜访我的姐姐。火车有点挤，靠窗边坐着一个男子。因为天热，那时一个靠窗的座位是我最渴求的。作为一个年轻女士，我想如果我提出请求，这个年轻男子是会把座位让给我的。所以，我对他嫣然一笑，并问他是否能够调换一下座位。但令我意外的是，他说他需要那个座位并拒绝了我的请求。我别无选择，只好坐在了他旁边的座位上。

火车驶过了一个接一个的车站。天气是如此的热，以致于我无心欣赏窗外的风景。我无所事事，于是便开始把我的注意力聚焦在了这个年轻男子的身上并上下打量他。他穿一件蓝色衬衫，双腿之上覆盖着一块披巾。乘车期间，他甚至都没有从座位上起过身，这让我感到匪夷所思。我想，只有一个疯子才会在这么热的天还在用披巾。

在长达5个小时的漫漫旅程之后，列车终于抵达了终点站。我收拾行李准备，起身等待列车开门。此时，我不经意地瞥了一眼这个年轻男子说，“列车已经到终点站了。难道你还不下车吗?”听到我的话，他对我笑了笑并用一种平静的声音说道，“有人会来把我抬下火车的，因为我无法自己下车”。听到这，我把我全部的注意力放到了他的双腿之上，结果却发现在那披巾之下空空如也！

知识点简释：

1. the other day 几天前经常搭配一般过去时

2. be crowded 拥挤 (with ...) 近义短语：be packed with

The supermarket is crowded with customers. 超市挤满了顾客。

3. There be 名词 doing sth 某处有 ... 正在做 ...，例如：

There is a dog lying in the shade. 阴影中躺着一只狗。

4. next to sth 在 ... 的旁边近义词(短语)：beside；close to

5. since 因为；由于引导原因状语从句

6. smile at sb 对某人微笑

7. To ones surprise 令某人意外的是

8. have no choice but to do sth 除了做某事之外，别无选择

9. so adj / adv that 结果状语从句如此 ... 以致于 ...

10. focus ones attention on sth 聚精会神地关注某事

11. stare at sb 盯着某人看

12. up and down 上上下下

13. He did not even rise from his seat once, which made ...

which引导非限定性定语从句，视上下文先行词可以是整个主句

14. a little bit 形容词有一点 ...

15. only to do sth 不定式做结果状语的惯用结构，多表示意外的，事与愿违的结果，例如：

I hurried to the station, only to find the train had already left.

我匆忙赶到车站，结果发现列车已经走了。

She excitedly unpacked the parcel and tried on the new dress, only to find it was unfit for her.

她兴冲冲地打开包裹试穿新裙子，结果却发现新裙子不合身。

Paragraph 1 续写第一段

The man was a disabled person.I felt embarrassed by what I saw. My face turned red with shame and selfishness. I shouldnt have secretly blamed him for not offering the seat next to the window to me. Meanwhile, I was so curious about his story that I couldnt help asking him what had happened to him. “It was an accident.”He paused. “To save a kid from being knocked down by a rushing train, I lost both of my legs.”He answered in a peaceful tone as if nothing had happened to him at all.

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这个男子竟然是一个残疾人。我被我所看到的情况感到尴尬。我的脸因为羞愧和自私而变得通红。我本不应该暗自责怪他不为我提供靠窗的座位。与此同时，我也对他的故事感到如此的好奇，以致于我忍不住问他他遭遇了什么事。“那是一个意外。”他稍作停顿。“为了救一个孩子不被飞驰的火车给撞倒，我失去了我的双腿。”他用一种平静的语调述说着，就好像在他身上什么都没有发生过似的。

得分点简释：

1. feel embarrassed 感到尴尬

2. turn red with shame and selfishness(脸)因为羞愧和自私而变红

3. shouldnt have done sth 过去本不应该做某事，但实际上却做了

4. blame sb for sth 因某事而责怪某人

5. offer sth to sb 提供某物给某人

6. be curious about sth 对某事感到好奇

7. cant help doing sth 忍不住做某事

8. 某事happen to sb 某事发生降临到某人身上

9. pause 暂停

10. save sb from sth 拯救某人免受某事

11. be knocked down 被撞倒

12. both of 名词复数一双 ...

13. in a peaceful tone 用一种平静的语调

14. as if 似乎；好像

as if / though引导的方式状语从句可以使用“虚拟语气”表示一种与真实情况相反的假设

14.1如表示“与现在事实相反的假设”，从句用一般过去时，be动词用were

He acts as if he knew you. (摘抄)

他的举止好像他认识你似的。(事实上并不认识)

14.2如表示“与过去事实相反的假设”，从句用had + 动词过去分词

He talks about pyramids as though he had seen them himself. (摘抄)

他谈论金字塔就好像他曾经亲眼见过似的。(事实上并没见过)

15. not ... at all 根本不

Paragraph 2 续写第二段

After hearing his story, I could not meet his eyes anymore.What he said completely shocked me and made me speechless. When I was at a loss, the people he had been waiting for appeared and started to take him off the train. “Have you ever regretted what you did?”I asked eagerly behind him. With no hesitation, he answered my question in a low but clear voice. “Thats the best decision I have ever made.”Seeing him being taken away, my eyes were filled with tears unconsciously.

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听完他的故事，我再也无法和他四目相对。他所说的让我感到震惊，使得我无言以对。正当我不知所措的时候，他一直在等的人出现了，并开始把他抬下火车。“你有对你所做过的事感到后悔吗？”我在他身后急切地问道。没有片刻的犹豫，他用一种低沉而清晰的声音回答我说，“那是我做过的最好的决定。”看着他被抬走得越来越远，不知不觉间，我的眼中充满了泪水。

得分点简释：

1. what he said ... 主语从句

2. completely 完全地近义词：totally ; thoroughly; entirely

3. make sb adj 使得某人 ... 样

4. be at a loss 不知所措

5. had been doing sth 过去完成进行时表示开始于过去某一时间，并一直持续到过去另一时间的动作

本文中火车进站等待来人接站(过去某一时间)，一直持续到来人出现 (过去另一时间)，再例如：

When she came to herself, she found she had been lying on the floor.

当她苏醒过来，她发现她一直躺在地板上。

(失去知觉是过去某一时间，一直持续到苏醒过来的过去另一时间)

5.1 come to oneself 苏醒

6. Have you ever done sth ? 你曾经有没有做过某事？