优美易改写的文案

用优美的句子改写《采花贼》

哦，可以这题目就让人反感一个让人反感的题目怎么有好心情去改写

把芙蓉楼送辛渐改写成两段优美的句子

好的文章就像案头的山水，引人入胜，优美的语句可以如同香醇的美酒，耐人寻味

把下面的句子改写成排比句（3分） 音乐家常常把灵感变为跳跃的音符，文学家呢，他们优美的辞章往往缘

修改后：To my surprise, that strange woman send me a message last night telling me that the weather is getting cold, and that I should be more careful. Only she knows. When I heard that my grandpa might be moving in tonight, I think it"s great. owever,when I heard that my uncle want my grandpa to live in his home because he heard that whoever that let my grandpa live with them will receive a fund from the social welfare office. When my grandpa was living in my uncle"s home, he didn"t take good care of him. My grandpa dislikes him as well. But what made me angry was that my uncles says that if my grandpa moves into his house, he will have to pay CNY $800 every month as rent. I cannot understand why my grandpa has such a hatable son. How can he treat his father like this? Just for money!? Luckily, my grandpa said that he no longer wants to live in his house, and this is his wish, and my uncle has no right to stop him.希望对你有帮助~天上~注：1.peculiar是 特殊的；独特的；奇怪的；罕见的 的意思，与你要说的 奇怪的 相差很远。

用词不当。

2. noticing me 在英文中是 注意到我 的意思，而不是 提醒我 的意思。

用telling就可以。

3. insurance 是保险的意思，社保是社会保障，不是社会保险啊 - - 4. 好好照顾某人的英文是 take good care of sb. 不是 take good of sb. - -5. hate是憎恨的意思，先不说血浓于水一个父亲不可能憎恨儿子，就说你的翻译就和你的原文不符，讨厌的英文是dislike。

6. 句子不够流畅，还有有些地方可以用别的方式更好的表达另，如果不明白，可以HI我~